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Posted: 6 years ago
Heya.. I know am late but as elders say it's never too late to do any good thing so here's my comment.
Things are getting hawtt b/w our couple, they just cannot keep their hands off each other. Bike ride planning se movie date tak sab kuch ekdam mast tha...

Karthik nd his stupid planning and plotting, let's see how Samaina will tackle this situation. And if Arjun is the way he was earlier jn the show am sure he's gonna be impulsive and give a negative reaction initially but hopefully he'll understand atleast for once what his sister wants... Also looks like this plotting will lead to making their relation public..(as i already mentioned in my past comments let us have some good outcome of this Kartik thingy)

Rohan is coming kuch toh interesting hone wala hai😉

Waiting for q dhamakedar update...

P.S. Hum zara late kya hue comments karne mein aapne toh story continue karne ka irada hi chod diya.. lols. On a serious note do continue it's one of the good works I have come across.

Lots of love🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Why losing interest dear?
I'm loving this story with each update! Especially now that Ponga is suspicious and Arjun n Sameer mein misunderstanding ka scope hone wala hai courtesy Kartik and Priyank!
That scene with Prem- chooza n deemak! Kya adjectives use kiye hain yaar by God! I was literally grinning wide on reading that!
Sameer ke muh se nikalne wala tha wo Naina ka boyfriend hai! Prem kuch to help karega lagta hai khulase ke baad- my guess!
And wo table ke niche haath pakadana gave such pleasant feels- wo bhi bhai ki naak ke niche...storeroom me kisses- Sameer can't have enough of Naina!
The movie data was splendid- thankfully no drama here and it went on smoothly! I haven't seen Aaina, but plan to watch it now!
Loved the update!
Sur di
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Posted: 6 years ago
Liked your writing very much. Keep posting. 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: gugul

Very nice update! I am so happy that unlike our serial, their first movie date was good...atleast they had a good time.

Rival gang are surely going to create a big misunderstanding in the group and I feel the group may break. But I don't want it to happen. Sameer and Naina love each other and are not wrong...so atleast they should not be afraid of anyone.

So with Rohan joining the college, are we going to get Preeti and Rohan?

Waiting for the use next update! Keep writing!!


Samaina are not doing anything wrong, but we all know Arjun's reaction. Let's see what happens...
Rohan entry is there in next update, aap khud dekh lena😆

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sivasri

Nice update...

Bike ride, movie date, slow and steady Samaina dates r happening regularly..
Yeah, hope you are enjoying them😛
Kartik and gang planning karte rehenge..
I hope Sameer - Arjun friendship s strong enough to tackle the issues
Let's see...
Elections planning, gang fight and romance... different genre All are awesome..
Glad you are enjoying them😃
Prem had something important to say ??? Or he s just flirting with Naina??
Flirting... Actually trying to flirt
Rohan entry, I was expecting in this update..
Next mein hai

Why are you losing interest??? It's a nice story track..please continue..

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_loverzz

Loved The update And Thnx for the PM..Sameer cannot resist himself from being away from Naina and the possessive SAMEER MAHESHWARI is worth watching..And Theatre Scenes were also Nice..Loved Whole Concept And Do update next chapter whenever possible..


Thank you very much !! 😛
Sameer boyfriend Maheshwari is absolutely lovable😳
Hope you like the coming updates too!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Dearest Anishka,

Thank you for responding so warmly to my previous comment. Now that I have read your note, all I can say is I completely understand. As much as I want to read your story further, writing should not be forced, it should flow naturally and as something that relaxes you. So cope with your studies and work and you can come back to this story when you can.
Thanks Di. Everything is under control now. Hopefully I will be able to update by tomorrow. 😛
Having said so, I do think this story deserves to be continued. The dilemmas, the emotions, and the phases of life you are portraying here are so well written that I can imagine everything happening.
I am glad that people find my story realistic, and they are able to imagine everything. That's the biggest achievement for a writer.
Sameer's need for Naina, that all consuming desire because of which he just can't seem to keep his hands off her is so deeply ingrained in his being. He craves for her because she is his only solace from the dark loneliness he seems to be engulfed in.
I totally agree with you. For him, Naina is meaning of the very words called Light and Solace.
I really enjoyed reading their movie date and it was so cute that Sameer was jealous of a movie. He is so adorkable. I want to pull his cheeks.
Are Di woh toh sab hi karna chahte hai😆
You have smoothly built up Arjun's character and how we can anticipate what will happen once the secret is out. And Karthik's manipulation seems to be heading that way. I am excited for this!
Arjun is one complex character. On one hand, he is the typical over protective brother, and on the other hand, he admitted to have been jealous of the same sisters.
Continue when you can dear, write because you want to and not because you have to. Relax and enjoy your studies, dont overwork.
Everything is fine now Di. Thanks to your wishes. I will inform everything in the next update
Bundles of love to you,
Sims <3


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

Amazing update I knew it Kartik arjun ko hi target banayega... I hope arjun ki vajhese samaina alag na ho ... eagerly waiting for the next update update soon


Glad you liked the update
Will try to update soon😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Very nice update

Yeh kartik bada kameena h yaar.. Always planning on some major destruction to Sameer and gang
I just hope Arjun doesn't see SamAina at the theatre together
Movie date was awesome


Karthik langoor hai, bas kabhi kabhi fox banne ki koshish karta hai😆
Lets see what happens!!

Will update soon

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