Samaina SS- Hum Aapke Hai Kaun Part 5 p.77 closing Note p82 - Page 60

Originally posted by: AMereWanderer

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This was beautifully written Sims the way Naina understood what Sameer was feeling and was getting drowned into

she pulled him out from that very dark life with her love and that is what he always needs

their passion overrules everything and the way you write it haye I go dead

I have been craving for an update from you and finally got one.

Can not wait for other updates

Keeping really busy nowadays so not getting a chance to review your beautiful work like before. I am sorry, darling. 🤗

Aesthetically pleasing, that's what I have to say about your writing. Being a writer myself, I really check the writing style apart from the story which is important too. The way you have written the intimacy, very sensuous and poetic, drawing many comparisons. I like it the best! Sometimes, you make me re-read the paragraphs just to absorb the beauty in the rightly chosen words. ❤️

I loved how you concentrated on the vulnerability, insecurities, fear, love and passion all in one chapter. So many different flavours, loved the update!

This was a really nice one

Naina is hurt but also knows how lonely he'd feel if she would be away from him. Sometimes we love someone so much that we're ready to forget their mistakes just to protect them from being hurt.

Update soon. You've been away since few days.

Lovely update Sims... Simply no words...

Eagerly waiting for the next part..

Unres on page 78 😃.

Really sorry for being late I read it the day you updated but couldn’t post comment asI had some urgent work :(

I was waiting for it and finally finally after long wait it’s here :D thank you so much for sending PM dear :)

As you already know I am HUGE HUGE HUGE fan of yours writing so its very obvious that I loved the update :D

The way you describe their romantic encounters there is something so magical about it dil krta hy bs parhty jao there is no lust or vulgarity it depicts only one thing and that is true love :) you give importance to every minor detail from sun to their clothes to their surroundings it seems like watching something

Their kisses and then sameer ka tm sirf meri ho naina ufffff

You beautifully portrayed Samaina relation kuch b ho jy they are always with each other naina is angry but her care and love for sameer is and will always be same

Sameer’s regret fear of losing naina and getting glimpses of past you perfectly describe the situation

Naina is the only person who understands sameer so well and her love for sameer is so pure I really loved this line k sameer hamara rishta atmaon ka hy so beautiful hayeee kysy soch lyti ho itni achi heart touching lines

That safety pin wala part was so cute sameer is always impatient when it comes to romance naina :D

Eagerly waiting for next part and please ab ziada wait mat krwana :)

Finally unresed on page 78🤗

"Mujhe maaf karna ooh thanedar

Abse aaungi time par har baar "

My apologies on being late 🙇

Honestly I've read the update minimum 5 times and I'm sure the number is gonna increase in no time .. Last time I read the update I was gonna write my review but all because of your wonderful writing I was drifted to samaina land and was busy imagining the scenarios after the update ends 😳 therefore my fogged up brain refused to let my fingers type anything for my one of the most favorite writer on this forum

Where do I start .. How can a single chapter have such diverse emotions in it.. It had everything from fear, anger , guilt, immense and selfless love , passion , hunger !! How do you do this ? It contains all the ingredients needed 👏

one of the most loved moment from the update for me was sameer not wanting her to " compromise " when it came to their relationship .. It shows the amount of respect and love he has for her in his heart you depicted it beautifully .. His condition after reading naina's letter broke my heart poor boy was once again forced to remember his mother's harsh words " tumhe allergy hai pyar se " you framed the whole flashback at a very correct time and without breaking the flow of the update

Sameer's whispers actually made the whole scenario sensuous to what level I don't know ! " tum sirf meri ho " uff you are set to kill me and I'm always eager for it 😆his little chants were like fuel to fire but naina's one statement surpassed all his statements " 6 mahine se meri saari utar rahe ho abhi tak nahi seekha " and then her addressing him " budhuram" and complaining about her torn dresses it was all hot

I don't think I need to say how much I love this story and I'm Always waiting for updates from you please bless us soon with and update

Love

Laalchi reader

Dear readers,

Seeing the recent distress of readers on this forum, I would just like to request my readers to wait patiently for the updates. My personal and professional lives are an absolute stressful mess at the moment. I am somehow getting through each day but its been very hard on me mentally and physically. Among all this chaos I just cant seem to bring myself to write. I will give you all this story I promise but please be patient and wait for me instead of making harsh comments because I am emotionally drained as it is right now. I need your support right now to keep me motivated. Hope you all can understand.

Bundles of love,

Sims