yeh un dino ki baat hai - new one shot

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello guys ... I am a huge fan of yeh un dino ki Baat hai (in fact I am currently watching it while writing this) haan toh getting to the point I have been reading a lot of yudkbh fan fictions and have been inspired by them and now want to write something myself but ab uthna time nhi hai na ki I can write a lumba chuda ff toh I am settling with a series of one sorts which are complete in themselves and may or may not be connected to each other

Toh lets start with the 1st one

Pyaar ya Pyaari?

Siting on the balcony of her home naina was looking at the street exactly at the corner where his bike just turned. A lot was playing on her mind and she was sure his mind will not be at rest either after all she was sure jo isko ho raha hai vo usko kese nhi hoga. akhir ese hi thodi vo call karke gaane sunatha hoga but sawal toh yeh hai ki vo hero Romeo akhir naina se baat bhi kyu kartha hai ? vo naina jisne usko school se suspend karwaya . jiske papa ne usko tapadh mara , Sameer jiske peeche puri school ki ladkiya pagal hai vo naina se baat kyu karega after all taiji ki baat maanli jaiye toh naina konsa koi hurr ki pari hai ?

Sawal bhot hai aur jawwab ...jawab toh kahi naraz aa hi nhi rahe ...ugg chod naina chod mat soch itna pagal ho jayegi tu... kher pagal toh tu ho hi chuki hai sameer ke liye Sayin this naina started to giggle and blush

Itne mei andar se awaaz aathi hai... " bhagwan jhut na bulaye naina tu soyi nhi abhi tak beta se kese chalega bemar ho jayegi aur fir teri taiji mhuje hi bolegi chal jaldi uth aur soja Naina apne sir pe deere se marker bolti hai "ji chachi ji abhi ja hi rahi hu bas

Laying on her bed a new thought emerged ... kya Sameer sach mei mhuje pyaar katha hai ? uski harkarto se toh yehi lagtha hai ? nhi toh ese kon raat ko aatha hai ? kon meri itni parwa karthahai ki mene khaya ya nhi ? kya yeh sach mei pyaar hai ya vo mhuje srif pasand kartha hai .. vo kya keh rahi thi shefali haan crush haan crush but shefali bata rahi thi ki crush toh badal jate hai toh kya sameer ko mai srif pyaari laghi hu aur mai isko pyaar samjh rahi hu?..pyaar ya pyaari ? pyar ya pyaari?...pyaar ya pyaa...soch soch naina ko kab neend aayi usko khud pata nhi chala

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It was the usual morning in the agarwal household...chachaji puja kar rahe the ...pooja didi was going on about her wedding and taiji had her usual headache and was waiting for bela ki elichi wali chai ..preeti was ready for school but for a change naina was running late today

Itne mei taiji shuru ho jati hai ... "oi bhai yeh ladki toh naak katwa degi humari itni der tak soti hai kal ko shaadi hogi toh kya mu dekhayege hum iske sasural wale ko ...preeti got confuse and said taiji "connection kya hai dono baato ka ...taiji fir shuru ...oh bhai hum toh chandan ki tarah ghiss gaye aur yeh ladki humko jawab degi ..itne mei belaa boli "bhagwan jhoot na bhule tum dono late nhi ho rahi chalo jaldi nikalo .. preeti seeing a opportunity to leave left jaldi jaldi ..naina jaldi kar mai neeche ja rahi hu "

Unknown to everyone naina quickly went to the mandir in her house and prayed bhagwanji aaj saare jawab dilla dena .. pyaar ya pyaari ? taking a bite of the prasand she left for school.

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Lochan sirs class has just ended all the classmates were out for the sports period expect naina who had to decorate the board of the class and thus was alone in the class seeing it as a opportunity to talk to naina Sameer entered the class and sat on the desk adjacent to the one on which naina was working and it was then that naina noticed him

"Sa...sameer tum ! tum yaha kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega ?

"Naina sab bhar hai koi dekhne wala nhi hai

Naina calmed down after hearing that after all he was right..and a idea struck her head this was the perfect time to get her answer after all it would be nice to get her answers before things got more serious... so she asked nervously "Sameer tumse ek baat phuchu ?

"Haan pucho na naina ... Isme itna gabranne wali konsi baat hai?

"Vo sa..sameer vo na " " haan naina bolo vo Sameer tumko ma...mangola se pyaar hai ya srif pyaari lagti hai ? Sameer got confused and said "yeh kis type ka question hai naina

" ab jis type ka bhi ho jawab toh do she got up and walked to the board pinning something up . Sameer says "acha chalo thik hai mhuje mangola se jada cola pasand hai naina fumed hearing this and said "yeh kya jawab hai ? " are... naina tum saaf saaf bolo ki puchna kya chaiti ho ?

Sameer calmed naina down "naina kya ho gaya saaf saaf pucho jo puchna hai " he said stepped towards the board which naina was facing... "Sameer vo ..sameer vo na mhuje yeh puchna tha ki ..ki tum ...tumko na..naintal se pyaar hai ya vo tumko pyaari jaah lagthi hai ... ? naina bit her tongue saying this ...and Sameer got in shock and started thinking ki aaj isko kya hoga yeh sab kyu puch rahi hai yeh pyaar ya pyaari kya laga rakha hai isne ... kab se pyaar ya pyaari kare ja rahi hai ... and suddenly he got what she was asking or actually wanting to ask ...

he took few steps towards her, not getting any answer naina said "Sameer ... bolo na... Sameer steps closer to naina ...kya bolo naina pucho toh sahi...naina suddenly turns realises they were standing this close ... sameer takes one more step forwand naina can now feel his breath ..sameer looks into the eyes of naina and continues to bend forward and goes near her ears and breathes into her ear ... "Pyaar... Pyaari nhi naina pyaar .



so this was my first ever fan friction kindly comment and tell me how was it also sorry for the delay ..i promise next time will be on ttime


to the slient readers - if u have read my os i will not tell u to comeent but the least u can do is to click on the like botton ... thanks everyone

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good. We are waiting.
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hey thank you so much for your comment sorry to keep u waiting hopefully you will enjoy the os
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hey thanks for the comment sorry to keep u waiting
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hey thanks for the comment sorry to keep u waiting
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Originally posted by: Ashusanj

Waiting

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Plz update.

hey thanks for the comment sorry to keep u waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I loved the title & the idea of crush or love 😉 Very different from other os. I started to miss pvkm sameer after reading this.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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nice dear
do write more
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Posted: 6 years ago
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pyaar ya pyaari
hahaa
loved it
naina sameer ko bhut pyaari lagti hain
isly voh usse itna pyar krta hain
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Posted: 6 years ago
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great work done
the confusion between first love or crush
confuses everyone
but sameer made it clear for naina that she is love
write more dear

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