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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Pooja1973

(Quote)Awesome..loved it..aise fights to baar baar hone chaiye...maza to manane me hai...keep writing..

Regards (Quote)

Well, passionate fights are the best, tabhi toh show mein bhi hug aur kiss milega.😉

Thnx for the comments

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Ashusanj

(Quote)Awesome os. Keep writing.

They fought and the patchup was like this, then they have to fight daily.

I'm still blushing.( Quote)

Thank god you guys are liking my work. Maybe I will write something more bold that this one...😃

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Priya2910

(Quote)Blush blush blush.

Really what a jhagda and what a hot patch up.

Well written. (Quote)

Thanks...

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YUDKBHT

@YUDKBHT

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Sameerkideewani

(Quote)It was too good ..

Can't believe its your first piece of writing ..

I was smiling throughout ..and blushing too

Looking forward to read more from you (Quote)

It is my first try at OS, but I m still writing my ff. Thanks and pls continue to appreciate my work.

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#25

Khushiamaan77

(Quote)Its tooo hot...

I was blushing while reading ur update...🤪

I wish they fight every day and we get this kind of patch up every time...🤣🤣

Keep writing...(Quote)

I guess I made each one of my readers blush...😉

Thnx... Patchup should be hot, always...

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Anjali33

(Quote)Frustrated. Angry. Trying to control.

Perfect combination for lovers😆

Very nice OS (Quote)

😉 glad u liked it

Thank u so much...

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Princesswarrior

(Quote)How well can you lie dearie!😉?? This was your first attempt. This is a big fat lie..😕 Because if it is so then you must be a perfectionist blessed with adept writing skills because this was beyond perfect and fantastic😆.. This was something surreal which I want to see in the show. 😳 From their thoughts to their romance, everything was so perfect that I was mesmerized. 😃 I was so engrossed in reading that I forgot to take in breath for once😆. Absolutely lovely, fantastic, fabulous and amazing👏⭐️. I am in awe of your writing skills. . Keep writing and entertaining us. God bless..Regards

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Dear Inayat,

It is my first piece of writing. I don't lie. It was not that great, pls mujhe chane ki jhaad par mat chadao. Thank u so much. Glad u liked my work.

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Asyalover

(Quote)really good and sexy one shot. (Quote)

Thank u so much.

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#29

Wow.. it was good.

So hot so passionate..

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Inayat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: YUDKBHT
Princesswarrior
(Quote)How well can you lie dearie! 😉?? This was your first attempt. This is a big fat lie..😕 Because if it is so then you must be a perfectionist blessed with adept writing skills because this was beyond perfect and fantastic😆.. This was something surreal which I want to see in the show. 😳 From their thoughts to their romance, everything was so perfect that I was mesmerized. 😃 I was so engrossed in reading that I forgot to take in breath for once😆. Absolutely lovely, fantastic, fabulous and amazing👏⭐️. I am in awe of your writing skills. . Keep writing and entertaining us. God bless..Regards
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Dear Inayat,
It is my first piece of writing. I don't lie. It was not that great, pls mujhe chane ki jhaad par mat chadao. Thank u so much. Glad u liked my work.

NAHI I wasn't flattering you.. It was really great. 👏Keep writing. Don't underestimate yourself dear.😃

Regards

Inayat