My brother's best friend - ff (New thread updated) - Page 49

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Anshika you pleasantly surprise me each time with your mature writing! I think you are still very young and it is commendable how you write so well already 😊

Thank u so much. It's very encouraging for young writers like me to get such good response for their very first piece of writing.

Refreshing to see the leads actually talk about the things that matter👏. Loved the subtle hug and caring forehead kiss (was actually hoping for one)! Sameer and Naina have kept the lines yet know they are more than friends. I like Sameer sharing his precious secrets with her, chai time bonding was awesome. So after Nanu chai wala chacha is the new Cupid😆

Yeah, I really wanted a new cupid for them, seeing that they desperately needed it. 😆 Well people were curious about Sam character after the playboy thing in the story, so his redemption has started long back and he is slowly changing, to the influence of the innocent yet strong minded Naina.

Naina nailed it, she confronted Sameer head on; I wish they brought up the girl Sameer dumped first for revenge. U know u re a very loyal reader😆You still remember her! But her chapter was closed then and there, For good.

Sameer has earned my liking for being as frank as it gets and also taking full responsibility. 110% marks for this conversation, no buried secrets and forced misunderstandings! I wanted a frank and genuine convo, and not Ekta serials one, where there is scary bg music and buried secrets...

Ohh the dance was cute with music in chai hut. We all have heard songs at chai and panwala shops...such feels😛

Now Sameer finally knows what love should feel like, the gradual build up at both ends Is perfect. Sameer has smartly figured Naina might love someone and Naina can't stop her happy dance after knowing he is very much available. Come on, he is very sad because Naina loves someone *sighs*. Let's see how he figures out who the person is😉

As a reader I am so pleased with the progress, you never disappoint with the story and regular updates. Cheers to you! Thank u so much.. sorry I couldn't reply earlier. But I want a nice reply to the recent ch I posted. I am getting really nice reviews for that one

Originally posted by: munchkinland

I truly loved this particular chapter

Thanks...😛

Thank you Anshika for such a new year gift

anf a Happy new year to you too.

A lot of things happened here.

He is just fighting for the elections because Naina wants him to

He is perfect Joru ka ghulam😆

That is just so sweet and kind of him

And very cute...

He is ready to juggle between tasks as long as Naina stays happy

😃

Oh god this sunaina

such an irritating fellow she is

She wants to help like really

Shoe is certified gone case. Yeh kahin nahi sudhar Sakti. But can't blamed her, Sam is so handsome...😆

I really pray she does not create any misunderstanding between Samaina

lakshan iske aise hi hain because

Well, u will get the ans to this after u read further😆

And who is she to order Naina around

thik jawab dia sameee ne isse

lekin nhi madam besharm bhut hain

phr agle din muh uthakr chli aayi

Yaar, kuch log nahi sudhar sakte. Kya kare. And yeah, my readers really hate shoe ,car and Prem😉

and gets jealous of naina because Sameer knows what she likes and what she does not

obviously duh girl he loves her okay

you stay away

Sam knows in and out of Naina and shoe Ko jalta rehne do. Who cares

And and he spoke naina's speech

Joru ka ghulam😆

wow superb

and that one slight touch of his finger on her lips aroused different feelings for him

Sam is also gone case when it comes to daydreaming about naina

Kb hoga action

kb hoga romance

meri jaan ja rhi hain ab

Sab jaldi hoga, intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai

jaldi do kuch tadekedar dhamkedar

Very soon...

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

by god ki kasam

anshika super se uper vala update tha yeh toh

Thank u so much..😛

loved it bhut jyada

They are preparing for the elections

and sameer can not just say no to Naina

Perfect Joru ka ghulam hai😆

can this get any more sweeter than this

I will get diabetes haa

and you will be the responsible

This is good wala diabetes, it won't hurt😆

The way he keeps telling Sunaina off and was standing by Naina

maza aagya

Mujhe bhi likhne mein bahut maza aaya

but this sunaina

itni cheap koi farq nhi padta isse apni bejaati krake

aadat hogyi hain na isko

Shoe is gone case, chikna Ghada hai

and then the speech

kyaa baat hain

Sameer obviously had to speak what Naina has written

yeh toh hona hi tha

Glad u liked the speech. Sam is Joru ka ghulam, so Naina ki speech bolna Banta hai

Bs ab realisation bacha hain pyar ka

voh kb hoga

I am really waiting for that

Ayega woh bhi, stay tuned for that. And thanks for being a loyal reader😛

Originally posted by: ratnarao12

Soooppeeerrr duper update

Loved it

Naina's speech was on point ...

Love the way Sam takes such good care of her ..

Ur writing style too is awesome

Enjoyed it thoroughly

Happy New year

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

That canteen scenearound speech writing and the actual different types of speeches written by his friends had me in splits! It was so funny! Really enjoyed this part a lot.

Happy new year dear!

Originally posted by: Sashikala

I missed Sameer's wink so much

Originally posted by: anaya_neha

wow...a very nice update...and a Happy new year.. 😊