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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMereWanderer

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Loved this one, Aayu Di! šŸ‘


Thanks muskan 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Aayushi, I loved this OS. It has that magic to it that leaves a very long lingering memory with the reader.

As I read it the first time, I read it with some trepidation... not quite able to understand what was the source of Naina's pain. I kept wondering if it was set in their sunset years and if Naina was mourning Sameer's loss. Maybe that was the reason for remembering one of their special sunset together. I confess that thought was more than a little unsettling... though that would have been a fact of life too. But, then reading that she had lost Chacha-Chachi and was waiting for Sameer to come back made more sense from the OS title point of view, cause he has to be around to fix her.

Very well written and really engrossing! Well done dear šŸ‘

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Hi Aayushi, I loved this OS. It has that magic to it that leaves a very long lingering memory with the reader.

As I read it the first time, I read it with some trepidation... not quite able to understand what was the source of Naina's pain. I kept wondering if it was set in their sunset years and if Naina was mourning Sameer's loss. Maybe that was the reason for remembering one of their special sunset together. I confess that thought was more than a little unsettling... though that would have been a fact of life too. But, then reading that she had lost Chacha-Chachi and was waiting for Sameer to come back made more sense from the OS title point of view, cause he has to be around to fix her.

Very well written and really engrossing! Well done dear šŸ‘


Thank you so much May! ā¤ļø So happy to know you felt so 😳 Means so much!

I wanted to keep it like that, letting the readers think it was due to not ending up with Sameer or his death which was my initial thought! Yes, then I realized I actually wanted to justify the title and if I killed Sameer, I didn't have a clue who would fix Naina from that loss! šŸ˜†

Thank you for liking it this much! šŸ¤—

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Omg..I am so touched reading your OS. It is such an emotional piece with all the love and care they have for each other. It was sad to see chacha chachi going away but glad that Sameer was there to fix her.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ani25

Omg..I am so touched reading your OS. It is such an emotional piece with all the love and care they have for each other. It was sad to see chacha chachi going away but glad that Sameer was there to fix her.


Thank you so very much! 😃
I am happy it connected with you on so many levels 😳 Yes life is not always nice like we want but she had Sameer by her side to guide her :)
Thanks again. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was so heart touching
I loved it
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Thanks a lot! 😳
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

This was so heart touching

I loved it


Thank you Anji!
Glad you liked it 😊

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