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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Deleted! 😛

Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago

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ruchi3179

@ruchi3179

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Amazingly written .just read the story now.Sameer in love with Naina and dreaming about her

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Sur Di! 🤗

I think the first time I had read this, I was a little confused as well as challenges because I didn't quite get it. So, this feeling prompted me to read this one a second time to analyse and I had instantly grasped to have an open ending- one of the reasons why I voted this story for the out of the box. Another point that contributed for me to vote for this one was the idea behind this, the golden days of our show...you had paid close attention to the theme and directed it to the match instead of the love confession...let me give you a big hug for that, this was an indeed refreshing one! 🤗

Before that campa cola kiss, there was dahi shakkar kiss too! Interesting. 😉

The sweetness was not because of the sugar...😳

I would admit this was so different from how you usually write but you nailed it...👏

Needless to say, I loved this one! ⭐️❤️

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ruchi3179
Amazingly written .just read the story now.Sameer in love with Naina and dreaming about her

Thank you so much dear! Yes- as you would like to interpret it! 😊

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Mayashika
Sur Di! 🤗

I think the first time I had read this, I was a little confused as well as challenges because I didn't quite get it. So, this feeling prompted me to read this one a second time to analyse and I had instantly grasped to have an open ending- one of the reasons why I voted this story for the out of the box. Another point that contributed for me to vote for this one was the idea behind this, the golden days of our show...you had paid close attention to the theme and directed it to the match instead of the love confession...let me give you a big hug for that, this was an indeed refreshing one! 🤗

Before that campa cola kiss, there was dahi shakkar kiss too! Interesting. 😉
The sweetness was not because of the sugar...😳

I would admit this was so different from how you usually write but you nailed it...👏
Needless to say, I loved this one! ⭐️❤️

Hey Shreya!

Haha! My bad yaar! I figured out it would be quite confusing for people to read- especially not having conveyed my idea behind it!

But you are sharp! You got it soon! 😊

Yes- well I guess I'd exhausted all the other themes in my stories n was left with this one 😆 And again, it was quite difficult to form a story out of it for me, especially when I'm eternally busy

So thought of giving an ode to the days of the show we loved and tweak it to suit the theme! 😳

Dahi-shakkar kiss pakad liya tumne! 👏 I wasn't so sure how many would notice! 😉

Thank you for loving the story and voting for the concept love!

Sur🤗

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Isha

@mystique123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Sur darling...Never ever even in my dreams I had expected this to be yours😳. You are a winner dear because even an ardent fan could not identify this to be your work, Great Job and Congrats for your win as well as on your evolution as a great writer with such varied styles 👏⭐️

I admire your intention of leaving it completely to the discretion of readers to interpret and understand the open ending. Well done gal!!!🤗

The title...Pink...the color of hope, compassion, understanding and love, what a beautiful choice Sur along with the backdrop of cricket and school. No doubt, this was really a tough plot to choose but you did cent percent justice in weaving the magic.

Loved it Sur ❤️

Edited by mystique123 - 7 years ago

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Haha, this was so cute and adorable. I love the school wali Naina, she was timid but yet determined when it came to Sameer. I miss her man. Sameer waking up thinking about the kiss i don't know why but it made me laugh. Also this school wali Naina is an advanced one, she even imagined Sameer kissing her but our college wali tho buddhu nikhli 😆Their school days were bliss. Loved it man.

Edited by shravyarao - 7 years ago

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Oh wow!

You left me dazed and smiling at the end.

Highly creative and admirable approach.

Thanks for the PM.

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: mystique123
Sur darling...Never ever even in my dreams I had expected this to be yours😳. You are a winner dear because even an ardent fan could not identify this to be your work, Great Job and Congrats for your win as well as on your evolution as a great writer with such varied styles 👏⭐️

I admire your intention of leaving it completely to the discretion of readers to interpret and understand the open ending. Well done gal!!!🤗

The title...Pink...the color of hope, compassion, understanding and love, what a beautiful choice Sur along with the backdrop of cricket and school. No doubt, this was really a tough plot to choose but you did cent percent justice in weaving the magic.

Loved it Sur ❤️

Hey Isha!! Thank you so much yaar! I know- somehow it was not upto the mark, coz the theme was quite tough to think upon for me! I decided to chose a different angle hence and to leave it to the readers imagination for what was real and what was a dream! 😊

Yep- pink is a really special colour and I guess in my FFs and Mou's, both our Sameers go flat over Naina in pink! 😆

Love you loads! ❤️

Sur

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: shravyarao

Haha, this was so cute and adorable. I love the school wali Naina, she was timid but yet determined when it came to Sameer. I miss her man. Sameer waking up thinking about the kiss i don't know why but it made me laugh. Also this school wali Naina is an advanced one, she even imagined Sameer kissing her but our college wali tho buddhu nikhli 😆Their school days were bliss. Loved it man.

Hey Shravya! Thank you so much dear! Yep- I so miss the school days- ye college mein to bilkul interest nahi aa rha mujhe! 😆 Kahan gaye wo din?

But am glad you enjoyed the read and a sojourn in the golden school times! 😃

Love

Sur