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Dreamy

@Dreamy_3

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Awww kisi aur sy mat takrana awww i am just stuck at this line :D
Can you please write more about this turn it into ff or ss or ts :P
Chasmish naina and possessive sameer hayee only you can come up with such sweeet ideas :D

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

The most beautiful OS ...Regardless contest or theme everything...This was my first pick from all the entries...No doubt for its uniqueness ,and writing style..

You did just used the theme and brought a different yet powerful romantic story..

In the show it was clear or unclear I don't know but I always felt that the Night out in Mt.Abu had brought the two of them closer...Sameer must have fell in Love with Naina then there..Although he in ignorance didn't realize his feelings then...

Some how that Sunrise and everything was so much related to the blossoming romance...The Purity of Nature shows the purity of love ...First love...Young Romance...When everything feels like bliss..

The Sunrise in the other hand shows the revelation or realization of the change..Blossoming Love among both of them..It was the most beautiful scene in YUDKBH ever..(My old signature had this lines and Sunrise ..It felt poetic and so close to me)

About this OS words will fail to praise your writing skills ...Though I never guessed it was from you..And therefore I enjoyed this as peice of creativity and imagination..

Your concept was similar to the show..But the story..The connection between the two..Was so much magical ...Completely different...And even more hard to finish in one OS ..and for a single second you never let the readers get bored...infact the story absorbed us completely ...This is only your skill ...

You created the concept..Elaborated it..And concluded it in one chapter...Mind blowing job...This is the reason I gave this story 1st position..This story did certainly had all the elements in it...

Last I would like to add..I have started this forum reading your stories..You were my first friend in this forum...And in all these months I have read more and more from you..But it never feels enough ( coz how greedy and impatient we are 😆)..

Can't wait for more from you...And trully wish someday you will have your writings published for real...And we will all say that oh ..Is this Mou from IF ..We used the read her FF's 😆

More creativity and skill to you...Keep writing...Keep gifting us with more beautiful stories..

Edited by asmita21180 - 6 years ago

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Anya29

@Anya29

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

how do you write such amazing stories every time - be it your OS, FF... every story, every moment, every word brings a big smile on our faces and makes us feel that we should fall in love again and again only with someone like Sameer...

Magicians are not only who bring out random things out of magic, but even writers like you who weave beautiful magic with words and such heart touching stories 😊😊😊

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ani25

@ani25

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

such a beautiful story.. innocent and heart warming! it was truly dil se dil ka connection. You are blessed with your writing skills, love reading OS and FF both, keep giving us these stories. Also, I would love to read continuation to this story if you are planning for more.. 😉

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Chatterbox1

@Chatterbox1

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Wow just wow!! This is one of the best I have read so far..I missed the OS competition somehow and could not cast my vote..I am glad you won! This deserves the win..congratulations!
Thank you for blessing us with your beautiful writing..god bless!

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Tajon

@Tajon

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Awesome story. Simply loved it when he called her chasmish!

You are a wonderful writer.

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surbharati

@surbharati

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Beautiful OS...oh my god just cant get over it...but the OS came to an end...if you get chance...write sequel of this

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Once again an amazing OS
The flow of Samaina's conversation was what caught my attention here
Well written as usual

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Booklover94

@Booklover94

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Hey mou!!

When I read this one the first time,I sorta guessed that this one was yours😆

The flow of writing,the descriptive narration...it all felt super familiar😳

The setting of the os was so different,but the emotions it evoked are just what our show makes me feel.

The people we meet,the experiences we go through are what shape our personalities,and Sameer not meeting namundit in school clearly shows how different his behaviour is...

You've reflected the melancholy he feels due to lack of dependable support system.

Thats exactly why he found peace with Naina,he doesn't have to pretend,or put a mask in front of her like he does with his so called friends😃

Somehow,he was letting her crash into him every time too,try as he might,he probably couldn't stay away from her either.

Quick question,did she deliberately crash into Karthik for the dance competition thing,or did she just want to see sameers reaction?

Naina is both smart and very observant,so it wouldn't have escaped her notice that Sameer always has his eye on her😃

Loved it,mou!! beautifully written as always❤️