PreeDit OS- Diagnosis: Love-struck - Page 5

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Hello dear Shreya! I have now updated my comment on page 5 <3

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Isha! 🤗

Hope you had an awesome trip...! 😳

Oh, I miss you all so much too, let vacations grace me and I will be there...😆❤️

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Hello my fellow bookworm Shreya, I finally got the time to write my comment on your wonderful story. ❤️

Hello my sweets!!! 🤗

First off, finally another OS by you! It feels like I have waited ages to read your wonderful writing again. Now that you have spoiled us with such wondrously done stories, don't back out and give us more. Hum laalchi readers hai! (P.S- you made me realise how cruel I have been giving you all teasers and then not updating for ages 😆😆)😳

Aha, you are indeed cruel. 😉

Thank you so much, i am so humbled. But writing is something I am not getting of amidst all the exams. 😳

The title itself drew me in; 'Diagnosis: Love-struck' beautifully sums up the core of feelings you tried to portray in your story. Love as an ailment has struck their hearts and has started affecting their behaviour around each other and alone. There couldn't have been a more apt title to their storyline. Their confused mindsets and exciting physical responses around each other really needed to be diagnosed. I hope these two idiots go through something similar in the show as well.

Idiots, right! I don't know when will we get proper PreeDit but to be honest Sims, I am glad the CVs didn't make any progression with them, the way Swati and Munna's relation has been butchered, it's better if PreeDit is left to fandom's imagination.

I am glad you loved the title, I had a severe wound in my hand so all the doctor visits struck an idea for the title, your dissection of the title is what I had in my mind. 😳

Now coming to the depth of the story, I really appreciate how you have interwoven their thought processes. It starts with Preeti and Pandit talking to each other but pondering their feelings separately in distinct paragraphs because they don't know what they mean to each other. Each feels that he or she is alone in this change of heart or rather slow realization shall we call it with these two cute fools? But by the end as they start sensing the differences in the other's attitude, it helps them calm down and then you merge their thoughts. No longer in separate paras because without confession they know that they are now one. Very subtly done and similar to how Samaina's voiceovers blended in the show at the end of the sangeet ceremony when Sameer was leaving. Kudos for this, dear 👏👏

Oh dear! Let me give you a big hug for this analysis of my writing style...🤗❤️ It makes me happy that you read this so carefully and even noticed the subtle detail I include in my writing. Exactly what I intended, both are different backgrounds and thoughts, one is curious and the other is flustered, and then their thoughts start their journey in the same way to the pleasant destination. 😃

Sorry about all the ranting, in short I love these two clownheads, you get their personalities perfectly to the T which sets a beautifully enthralling tension in their conversations. This is beautifully written andn gave me all kinds of feels. I need this to happen in the show ASAP.

I love reading rantings as I do that always. So apology for that not accepted. 😛

Thank you so much, i am glad that you liked this one!

On second thought: I might just send the CVs a link of this. But for that I need a way to contact them. Aur bhi bahut maangein hai meri 😆😆

Hahah, if you are successful, then PM me the contact too or else even simple, I might send you my desires or more simpler way, just send our forum's story index, they will get plenty ideas!!😆😳

Can't wait to read more from you.

Bundles of love,

SIms<3 <3

Originally posted by: shravyarao

This was such a cute OS shreya, i guess we don't really have that many stories on preedit in here, the first awkwardness when the feelings are changing, not knowing what is happening with you n trying to find the footing between friendship n love. You have presented it so well man. Loved it. ❤️

Originally posted by: mystique123

Waiting for you to be back sweetheart

Originally posted by: Mayashika

I am waiting to rant with you all love, i miss you so much and you making me envious with delicious palada! 😆😭❤️ Love you!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Thank you so much Sims! I loved the note and made my day! ❤️

Originally posted by: mystique123

Love you too dear and I did remember you while cooking palada on sunday 😉

Originally posted by: Mayashika

isha!

yum yum and guess what? mumma made palada today and i was instantly reminded of you...palada has become a thing betwen us now. 😆😳

Originally posted by: mystique123

Iam in love with this palada connection ❤️🤗