SamAina OS: The Incognito Cupid - Deleted

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Moumita yaar.. Kitte din baad ayi ho😃

Rakesh sir to sabse bade indirect cupid h😆 humesha hi kuch aisa krte h Sameer k sath ki Naina k andar romance trigger ho jata h😉

Oh God wo rakhi wala sapna🤣 Sameer to Ab apni behen se bhi rakhi nhi bandhwayega.. Itta darta h rakhi se😆

Naina n her 'shaadi k baad'😆 koi bhi frustrate ho jaye ek bar ko

Kya bhag k dono bike ride pe gye.. As if train chut jayegi🤣

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@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

OMG Mou! This was so hilarious 🤣

Bohoot maja aa gaya padhke yaar! Sameer Ki badhti betabi and frustration.. and then that dream was cherry on the top! Poor Naina was also scared out of her wits.. subha ka Sapna.. Samaina are so connected that the see the same scary dreams! Rakesh ke dialogues padhke bohoot hassi aayi.

Surbhi, awesome idea dear!

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Hehe sasur ji as cupid... Mja aa gya pehle.. kya sapna tha sameer or naina ka..Hogi..Orange rakhi lmao.. aise sochti b kaise ho mou tum..? Love love love..

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Loved this. Hugs and bike rides...So cute ❤️

Rakesh sir ka darr kuch bhi kara sakta hai 😆😆

I so wish they would hug already in the show

As always wonderdully written

Thanks for the PM

Edited by yashimalhotra - 7 years ago

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Alisha

@AlishaSyed

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

First of all thankyou so much Mou for the pm ...

Hahaha can I say I was gonna die thinking that that dream was real Gawwwddd

Safari suit Ka dar sirf in sab ko Nahi humein bhi hai hahaha

Os was superb .

Ahurghh you did write what I was feeling inside .

You wrote so well ..

Mou I'm your fan since always ..

Bas now I want their hug in the show ..

Aur Kitna wait Karna hoga

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

The Incognito Cupid ... ..When I read this title all my mind ((my asanskari mind)) drifted to Movie BETA ...So was the intro u wrote ...A step up in their relationship ... But not even in my wildest dreams I would have imagined that the said "'''Cupid" will be our own Safari Suit Librarian ... ..

.And It reminded me of the bike ride in the show ,where Rakesh catches Sameer and "Sridevi" , that time if given chance I bet that Time Rakesh would have thought that all girls should tie rakhi to Sameer

Each and every line you wrote here ...Sameer eagerness ,his attempts , his frustrations just to get some of Nana's time was so apt ...

Naina being Masoom and Nirdosh ""Bike pe bhi shadi ke baad "" laughed so hard after reading this...

And Sameer the Cool maheshawari ""Mujhse ab baat bhi Shadi ke baad karna "" ...Yeah u go boy , won right at the spot ..."" Hum dono bhai behen jaise lagte hai.. ...

Naina - library scene , Dream scene and the orange rakhi in library book ...Yes yes Savere ka sapna sach ho hi gaya ...Ab to bike pe jana hi hoga ...

Wat a peice of writing Mou ...Superb and Hilarious ..."laal ishq " to suna tha , tumne to "" orange ishq " karwa diya dono ko...

Last thing I would like to add "" der aaye , durust aaye "" ...

All the best and good luck ...Asmita

Edited by asmita21180 - 7 years ago

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Ejyido

@Ishh..

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

It was wonderful mou di. Loved it!!

I think were going to get one more asanskari OS but this was totally different and amazing😆

Sam ko aab naina ke saath saath apne param pujiya sasurji ke bhe dreams aate hain..LOL

First i was thinking Haww..yeh kya safari suit yanha bhi..lekin baad main pata chal yeh toh sammy ka dream tha..boy is too scared..Orange rakhi😆

And naina she saw same dream of orange rakhi and rakesh papa. Hilarious!!

Loved it very much!!❤️

Thanks for pm.

-Ishu

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

hilarious one
sapna v dono ko ek hi aaya.. hahah

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Loved it Mou Di! Loved it to the core!

From the title and the intro, I thought this would be some romantic OS which would make us blush--yet again--but this turned out to be one filled with laughs! 😆 I never imagined I could guffaw over SamAina to this extent...MunDit were enough for this...so thank you for this beautiful yet hilarious OS! 😆

I can feel the frustration Mou Di...and you've penned that down beautifully. Only that we aren't just frustrated at Naina but at Sameer too...kab tak eyelocks mein hi kaam chalate rahenge 😆 SwaMun bhi tezz nikle 😆

Never imagined Rakesh to become the cupid...not even in my wildest dreams! 😆 And that dream sequence...gosh, that scared me! Bas yehi baaki tha...college mein bhi Rakesh...that too as a librarian! Aur koi job mili nahi hogi 😆😆 Kahan Sameer must have slept peacefully thinking about Naina and kahan beech mein Rakesh aur unka gusse wala face dikh gaya! 😆😆 Bechare SamAina... dara ke rakh diya.. At least darr hi sahi they went on their first bike ride! 😆

A lovely and unique concept with a brilliant storyline Mou Di! Loved it! 😃

Muskan 😃

Edited by Muskan2001 - 7 years ago