Sameer-Naina OS: Intense Shades - Page 2

I love the rain and this was perfectly picturised

The way they got married and whatever happened between them after their marriage... It's easy for them to just go with the flow and responsibilities ...Nanaji still with them..And Nisha..Small bundle of joy to look after..Where is time for Romance ...And not to forget Sameer's job which is between Almora to Delhi.. it's really really hard poor souls had time for anything else..

Minu! Tumne to mere dil ki khwayish hi puri kar di! I so wanted the saanson mein saanson song...wow...the way you interspersed the lyrics here! Wine coloured saree, matching jhumkas...baarish...kiss to hona hi tha! I read it as a part of Kati Patang...n God...I'm so sleepy now...still I was struggling to keep my eyes open...ki ye update padh lun...for the first time, I didn't miss Nisha! Ab samajh aaya wo colors ka kamaal...n the way Sameer felt...he was falling in love with her- all over again! Means he had realized he'd been in love with her...that night at the fest? When he hugged her in the lift? Obviously he loved her! That's why he could only speak out her name, though he was completely out of his senses!

Haven't read Kati parang yet! It's on my list, I started sometime ago but found that the story started with separation, found it too painful & put it on the back burner ! Jaldi padhungi, then I hope to connect the dots!

Aur ek bar barish ka jadu chal gaya! Beautiful OS Minu... this has really made me feel at peace with the Samaina from your FF Kati Patang. Abhi tak kuch adhura as lag raha tha. And don't get me wrong it's not about the physical intimacy. The yearning of lovers is what I was eagerly waiting to experience! It was so good to see them both looking at each other as just the other person.. not in the context of their roles and responsibilities viz a viz Nisha or Nanu etc.. this is so important even for couples who have been married for decades.. and they are still newly weds.

Minu , this was too good...I love rain ...and if its coupled with romance there is nothing like it. I can understand Naina's feelings when it comes to designer umbrella...I do have a blue and white floral patterned one... 😉 😳

I have always felt that Naina is a temptress , she knows what to do to get her man going ...I loved the way she thought of him as her shelter...the two are slowly getting close ...not that they weren't but moving towards the next stage in their relationship...

I also liked the fact our Jr Naina is wondering how they got wet ...and the dialogue that there are no holes in the umbrella was too good...

Why don't you make it TS and let us know what happened after this , and how did they handle Nisha?? 😳 😉 would that lead to more between them??

In short loved it !! loved it !! loved it !!

Amazing it was so passionate and romantic ... Umbrella part was funny ... Loved it as usual

Ooh!! A rain romance, i always love a rain romance. Loved it. Finally after long thy got some alone time. Rain adding to the fire, hahah here sameer is so diff like is he so mehh with the loud colored umbrella, rains n everything except naina, for only her smile he is tolerating everything he doesn't like. Hayee..!!

Finally they got into romance 😉

Awesome one minu.

Thanks for the PM love.

Originally posted by: toshibelekar

You all are born writers. Make a blog I will follow you.

Fantastic writings. 👏

Thanks Toshi for appreciation.😃

Originally posted by: moumita04

Sweetheart... I was waiting for this one since you started asking all those color details... I wanted to know what you were cooking up... and this is so worth the wait... 😃

Thanks Sweetheart for that explanations and details.I am glad I could cook something worthy of eating.😃

First of all, I love rains... am crazy about them... I think you know that by now... 😆😆

So Samaina in rain is amazing always...

Hehhe...You also how much I love rains.😉

I love the setup of them getting stuck on the highway... wanting to steal some moments alone from the crowd...

Just like the butterfly comes out of it cocoon, slowly, patiently and then emerges into something totally enthralling, same was the journey of Sameer and Naina here... 😳

The beauty of their relationship is just like butterfly as you have aptly pointed out.Their relationship had been like a caterpillar, like the caterpillar,they have suffered.If Naina has a terrible one,Sameer too has a nasty past,which will be soon unfolded.But they struggled together and are turning into the captivating butterfly which everyone crave for.Relationships need time and are worth it.😳

How easy it is to lose ourselves in daily chores and responsibilities... Those who have read Kati Patang would know why there was that distance even though they are a married couple... How enticing it is to see the person you see daily in a completely different outlook... That's what happened to Naina... She is used to seeing Sameer daily, but today she saw him in a different light, with a different perspective...

Her life had its own routine.The desire to not get married and the constant threats from those two lunatics had taken away all her fantasies for men.She no more desired and the primal desires of age and mind had taken a back seat.Though she mothered Nisha but still she is a young girl with all sensations and desires at place,just dormant.And the setting was right enough with the right person..Rest everything was fluid.

The hair that have always captured her attention, did it this time too, but slowly she ventured into other territories... And Sameer too saw her in a different light when he failed to fathom that how could he have been so blind as to fail seeing the beauty evolve in-front of his very eyes...

He had taken her for a granted piece and before he could realise she was gone like wind.When he could have appreciated he was in his bet game.I would n't say blind but stupid actually.Why not blind,you will know in coming chapters.

My feelings align with Sameer on that orange umbrella... thought I don't agree with 2 out of 3 R's and you know which one... 😉

Yayyaa...For writing this only I had asked that question specifically.😉

The temptress knows how to make her husband dance to her tunes... and while dancing to those tunes he managed to discover beauty in things he didn't like... The rains, the umbrella... His quench to read her was met with an equal fervour to be read... 👏👏 Loved how you detailed this...

Thank you darling.🤗

I was totally taken in by the kiss and kept waiting with bated breath for things to progress... though I knew they were at a public place... 😳

I saved something for private place.😉

Well, things did progress... the perspectives changed and the relationship equation changed... the gaudy umbrella, with mud splatters did its part... and I don't think Sameer is ever going to throw that out now... 😃

Ahh!Now he would not definitely.The umbrella seems to have caught everyone's attention.Even Nisha's.😆

Loved it Minu...!! 🤗

Keep coming with more...

Love,

Mou