Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected #2 (Part 25 on Page 130)

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#651

I am a little sunflower..Had I been a rose,you might have picked me...

Perhaps never I have been in tears so much for a story.The update just thrust me at my soft points,the right points perhaps.And thats when you got it all right.👏👏

Sur! This update is a masterpiece.There are several reasons to it.The intriguing plot line,the further insight into each characters,the elaborative details of thoughts.Bang On.

The juxta position of past and present comparisons just steal the cake from literary side.Perfect lines for evoking of emotions.

And let me tell you..You are expectedly unexpectedly surprising me.And I can't be happier than this.The friction between characters especially Sameer and Naina and their vulnerable emotions is a delight to read.

No doubt this is your famed story.

The introduction of lone Simi just makes the story open to another dimension.A multi faceted dimension to this romantic saga is surely gonna take us on a roller coaster drive and I am sure about it.

The dialogues of Sam are as always lit .

Simplicity,logical representation of thoughts,a bewitching plot line ...Nothing can taste better than a beer soaked fruit cake and nothing can be more enjoyable to read than this.

Since you love my sense of humour a bit,My review peraps would not be completed without a JBR style Bad Joke-- Naina ne apni beti ke name Diya rakh ke Sameer ka Bomb wali Diwali kardi.😆

BAD JOKE.

Sorry for not being able to review this piece in regular basis.Sameer style kaan pakad ke sorry.

Keep coming with your best and Thanks for the PM.😳

With love-

Minu

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 6 years ago

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diku1302

@diku1302

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#652

This is the first time I'm commenting..

I actually cried... I could feel his pain.. It has properly pricked my heart.. And its rightly said ki kuch bhi ho jaaye sacha pyar kabhi bhool nahi sakte..

Very well expressed.. I really liked the way it has been written..

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Rph09

@Rph09

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#653

What to say! My heart is paining. Really unexpected twist. Feeling like crying 😭 It was an amazing part. And u did a brilliant job 👏 thank u for the pm.

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#654

there's so much I want to say, Sur Di! 😳

RES

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#655

As usual Sur it was a fabulous update . .You never fail to amaze us with twists and turns ...even after soo many updates the excitement factor is still intact and I am very much hooked to the story... Let me tell u but I still have strong feeling that Naina is not married to Arvind Kuch toh locha hai... May be he had been a great support during her struggling time or may be an adjustment to save Diya from being called a love child.. . Well as I have said before I trust the writer in you and I am sure u will come up with the best .. ...Naina's pain could be felt by her state... .how much she longed for him his love ...even after soo many years she cannot see him or even imagine him with other woman this shows how much she is loves him . . .On the other hand I am glad Sameer understood he cannot runaway from reality by indulging into such activities .. I really liked the advice he gave to simi... In all I loved the update alot

Edited by suhaaniladki - 6 years ago

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MinervaMcG

@MinervaMcG

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#656

What a heart touching update. Really aankh bhar aayi. No words to describe the feelings..

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riyashailja

@riyashailja

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#657

Last 5 yrs me kitna kuch Badal gaya SAMAINA ki life me but kuch agar nahi badla to wo h unka pyar ab jab dono dobara mile hi h to I hope they'll get a chance to reunite again and shower their love on each other... waiting for that day...and I would like to say this update was very emotional I feel sad for Sameer and Naina both...😭