Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas
Amazing update kuch to jhool hua hai Nagpur mein but I know sameer jasoos will find out about it soon i just loved the way he consoles her and make her understand that he loves her not her markes or anything else .. waiting for the next update update soon

Thank you Hitanshi for loving it in whole.

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: Prizi
amazing update...

Thank you dear.

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
Wonderful update but thoda suspense bhi hai ... I think swati aur naina k beech kuch gdbad hui ... But karthik bhi involve lgta hai .. lets see how sameer jasoos maheshwari figures it out ... Eagarly waiting for next update ...thank you for the pm

Thank you Suman for loving it.updating soon.

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: tanya119
From where shall i start?
I would review each part with one word "Mind-blowing".
Your concept and title is itself a mystery.
And after each update, you leave a cliffhanger in a way that no one can predict whats next in store. Thats what grips the readers to your story, which is amazing.
You write each and everything so smoothly, that whether its a dialogue or emotions, everything just goes with the flow.
Every scene starts and ends so well with no question in mind.
I just loved each and every bit of it.

Ps: after the break this is the first one which i read and iam glad that i started with this.

Thanks for the pm😃
Update soon😳

Thank you Tanya for appreciating it.I am humbled by the kind words.😳 Glad that you loved it so much.Updating soon.

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Radkam
Read both parts together... abhi mere andar ka Jason's bhi activate jo Gaya! I loved how Sam cared for Naina at her lowest...
So now, Sunaina is in love with Sam? 😡 plz triangle mat bana dena 😔 & Nagpur ki mystery jaldi unfold karo...waiting!

Thanks Radhika for loving it.Hope you don't get disappointed with the moves the story would take

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Hi Minu, lovely update dear! The way Sameer supported Naina when she arrived upset from the trip was just awesome!

Ved character sounds like a good addition to the story. Looking forward to see why Karthik tried to sabotage him. Karthik seem to be set to create problems for lot of people... but why??!

Aur Sunaina Kaha khoi hui hai? It seemed she was oblivious to Sameer too!

Looking forward to the next update!

Thank you May for all the encouraging words and appreciating me always.😃 All the whys would be answered in further updates and hope your interest gets piqued.

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Azraa01
I will patiently wait for detective Sameer to unfold the Brains Meet mystery.
Thank you for the pm.

Patience is the key.Thank you dear.

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suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#228

Yeh kya ho rha hai bhaiya yeh kya ho rha hai 😆 ... With each update suspense is increasing ... Pls update soon dear

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Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#229

Minu, this was short compared to previous updates😔 but I had a feeling of watching some suspense thriller movie😆

Sunaina pagal to thi hi, Ab pyaar mein bhi pagal ho gyi😆 kya hoga uska

But I genuinely hope usko dhoka na mile pyaar mein

Swati ko kya ho gya yaar?? I'm really worried

Naina was worried about that kiss.. English filmo wali!! She's so cute

Please update asap

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shravya rao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#230

Minu, why was the a lil bit short than all the previous ones?

Maybe it's me who is not getting enough of the story 😆

Loving the way the story is shaping up yaar, i seriously thank you for not making sunaina fall for sameer here, thank you, thank you so much. i kinda got fed with everybody falling for sameer in the college 😆the seniors giving flying kisses made me puke🤢 in the show, but thats just me wanting sameer only for naina 😆.

This story is giving me thriller vibes with all the sameer jasoos kaam he is hell bent on doing, i don't know why i end laughing when he goes into questioning mode. You are giving such unexpected twists dear, can't really even guess where the next one goes. It's got me hooked up to ur story.

Awesome one Minu!! Keep coming up with more and please longer ones de do na!!

Thanks for the PM love.😳