Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 21

Originally posted by: doublecross

This story is depicting a new side of naina which is quite lovable. We usually see her as someone with a sound mind and judgement with he'll lot of patience and quite mature for her age though her innocence deep down within is intact. But here we are seeing a more childlike naina who throws tantrums and sheds a year or two to get her way with sameer. Love it when sameer holds her close and consoles her with all the reasons and logic. That prize talk was cute Minu. I felt like tweaking their cheeks together. They are such overload of cuteness. You left It as a cliffhanger, now what happened that naina is upset. Am intrigued.

Do update soon

Please forgive me for replying late. Amidst dirty diapers, a equalling infant and sleep deprived eyes, it's a little difficult at times. But promise I'll always come abd read your work because I enjoy them a great deal.

Update soon

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Superb story awesome updates continue soon

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Awesome update

From where shall i start?
I would review each part with one word "Mind-blowing".
Your concept and title is itself a mystery.
And after each update, you leave a cliffhanger in a way that no one can predict whats next in store. Thats what grips the readers to your story, which is amazing.
You write each and everything so smoothly, that whether its a dialogue or emotions, everything just goes with the flow.
Every scene starts and ends so well with no question in mind.
I just loved each and every bit of it.

Ps: after the break this is the first one which i read and iam glad that i started with this.

Thanks for the pm😃

Update soon😳