Getting up from a sleeping beauty like slumber and getting to washing clothes..And then realise ''Daag Acche nahin hai"..This suddenly lightens up my 'forgetful memory' and I remembered this.
Sameer ka 'manhoosiyat achi nahin hai..and he needed some achi dhulayi'' just that here not Surf Excel but ''Whisky is the Answer''.😉
Getting down to updates-
Part-3
''Kitne bhi tu karle sitam'' mode on for Naina while Rains tried their best to be part of such awesome rom-tragic act.
These rains and the scenes make me remember about a post,that I had written eons ago...
This life is a desert.Life is a long process of getting tired.But the will to carry on is what counts.Likewise love too is a wider,brighter,silent and yet demanding desert.
The will to carry on is what counts and supposedly forms the crux the story too..This has been the dialogue in your next update too..i.e.Part-4.
The rains were very much needed and that car needed to be halted..
They surely needed to TALK.
The way she listed all of it...scenes after scenes came running just like collage.Beautiful detailing there with the scenes...Crisp and to the point yet filled with love..👏👏
The moment he donned the raincoat and reached her society...I smiled wide.
This boy wants to be free,also wants to be with her...You fool!You can't be both.
And before moving to terrace,let me take some time and appreciate how you impressed me with small scenes...
The kadha,waking of Preeti, grabbing the towel...So realistic and lovely.When you care,you dare.
Now she dares and steps on the terrace in Rains.
BTW.On a Side note---Sweetheart!Itne 'Rains' se to 'floods' aajayenge..I mean raining from evening na? (You know I can't go on appreciating Rains without scowling at them once.😉)
Coming back to Terrace..
His head on her lap..the only line I had read when I had skimmed through this update.And this was the reason I had kept it to read later..aaram se.😳
The girl gave it back with all and If I could whistle like Kajol in K3G ..I would have done..Perfect brownie points to you for the dialogues...So whistles for you first...
Awwie!They slept and her fingers in his hair ...It was so emotional..Something tugged in heart.
This brings to mind a quote from Don Juan-''When one has nothing to lose, one becomes courageous. We are timid only when there is something we can still cling to..''
Were not they clinging to last rays of being still loved bu the other,being still cared by the other..
They are truly each other's possession and my obsession.😳
This much for this part..
Enough late to reply.Sorry for that.
With love-
Minu.
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago