SamAina FS: Whisky is the Answer (Part 4 updated on Page 19) - Page 13

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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it! Sameer can never be not protective of naina.. hayee! Loved how he went to meet her immediately. And the kaadha and caring was love.. waiting for next!
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Posted: 7 years ago

PART 3


Pata nahi tha whisky ka ye natija milega.. Loved it!! 😉👏

Loved their manhoosiyat talk.. I really liked their heart to heart convo.. It was emotional 😊

Terrace meeting was really nice.. Kadha bana diya Sameer ke liye.. Itni care

Baarish mein confession ka maja hi kuch aur hai 😉😳

Thanks for the PM..

Edited by _.SilentHeart._ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Haaye Raam Mou di
It was wonderful
Thank you so much Mou di aapne hume possessive Sameer bhi de diya
The terrace scene was so beautiful ... I want this kind of scene in the show also in which like this Sameer will put his head on her laps and will tell her about his feelings but I think we have to wait for it
Update soon Mou di
Lots of love😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
omg...such a sweet update...cant wait for the fourth part..fresher's party...yahhh !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Am commenting for part 2 and 3
Mou, like the confession in drummer stupor was exemplary to read about, so were these two updates. What I loved was the way sense was knocked into Sameer. His foolishness and obstinacy was simply getting on to everyone's nerves. The fact that he of all people could take that crazy granny's word for bible was shocking. I loved naina's tricks, infact when the track was on in the show I had desired for something similar to be shown. I wanted the tough naina to make a reappearance but we got nothing of the sorts. The way she ignored and cold shouldered him was class apart. Those fits of laughter, the nonchalance and that I give a Damn attitude was something I loved reading about. Though the inner turmoil would unleash itself upon her leaving her melancholy yet when the fruits of her efforts started showing in his confused state and also when he was seen happy for her during the debate or when his face puckered in anger whenever that sly kartik took a dig at her. Even when kartik tried striking a conversation with her, his protective instinct was ready To leap ahead and shield her. Those eyes blazed in anger for what was his was standing close to that creature he loathed so much. Knowing him naina tactfully handled the situation giving him the taste of his own medicine yet maintaining a cool and safe distance to avoid any trouble. I loved the way he claimed his right over her when he dragged her into the car while she was being stubborn.



The way the entire fuss over lucky and unlucky is handled in this ts is wonderful.the drawing of parallels between sameer and naina's situations was depicted perfectly. Especially when naina tells him how she is toxic for his life and if he has decided to cut her off then it's understandable given the fact that she was always the bad omen in his life. When she gives examples of all the incidents that had transpired between them and how she now understands why taiji often taunted her for bringing in bad luck to the family. It was all so perfect. It got the nail on the head. Sameer was not only shocked but stunned with all that he had to hear. While all the while he as busy berating himself here his Lady love was cursing herself. Once again his protective instinct made a come back when he found naina getting all the uncalled attention of the passerbys. In his quest to shield her and protect her from the prying eyes he takes her by the waist proclaiming his right upon her. In the auto too when he sees those tears welling somewhere his heart his pierced and all the walls that he had carefully built around it had started to crumble. All he wanted then was to protect her and keep her in his arms forever.


The confrontation and the Heart to heart talks on the terrace was something I cherished the most. How naina made him see reason when she tells him that a lady who right from day one had only one agenda at the top of her list to trouble him could never be talking sense and how on earth he had to believe her crass. The wy they lay with each other sameer on naina's lap while she stroked his hair was simply awesome to picture through your vivid words. The pouring of hearts to each other, how all the insecurities vanished and semblance restored. What I simply loved about the update was naina's character. How she could take a tough stance for knocking sense into the head of her love at one point while on the other hand just a single sneeze made her so worried for his health that immediately she had to make him kadhaa.

Am awestruck at your talent of spinning out just beautiful tales. Talks volumes about your personality. Seems like a person who has a soft beautiful and romantic core.


Waiting eagerly for part 4
Hope you enjoymy note
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hayee..!!


The way he was so protective when it comes to naina, wrapping his hands around her waist protectively, naina was confused with all the jumbled thoughts his not so cold and hot behaviour. loved it man!

Glad he opened up to her finally, such an emotional update it was, the rain adding to the romance and emotion. It was so soothing the way he laid his head in her lap and slept like that as if finally all the burden has vanished and has got peace in her embrace. 🤗

Loved the way naina handled the situation emotionally, and so maturely she tackled all the problems using her sharp brain was better than what was shown in the show.👏


Awesome one mou!!👏


Thanks for the PM love ❤️


Edited by shravyarao - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
When are you updating? I can't wait now!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful it was
So subtly you handled this " manhoos Maheshwari "
I loved it
The terrace scene was simply beautiful
I don't have words to praise it
Sameer let out all his fears to naina and she supported him and gave him the comfort and assurance of love and luck that he needed a lot
Finally sameer had a peaceful sleep after ages ..
I became emotional reading that part .. When naina made him lie on her lap ..
I always wanted that scene abs this was the perfect situation for this ..
Now I'm looking forward how this bhaanda is going to phoot
Waiting for the next part


Love.
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
Getting up from a sleeping beauty like slumber and getting to washing clothes..And then realise ''Daag Acche nahin hai"..
This suddenly lightens up my 'forgetful memory' and I remembered this.

Sameer ka 'manhoosiyat achi nahin hai..and he needed some achi dhulayi'' just that here not Surf Excel but ''Whisky is the Answer''.😉

Getting down to updates-

Part-3


''Kitne bhi tu karle sitam'' mode on for Naina while Rains tried their best to be part of such awesome rom-tragic act.

These rains and the scenes make me remember about a post,that I had written eons ago...

This life is a desert.Life is a long process of getting tired.But the will to carry on is what counts.Likewise love too is a wider,brighter,silent and yet demanding desert.

The will to carry on is what counts and supposedly forms the crux the story too..This has been the dialogue in your next update too..i.e.Part-4.

The rains were very much needed and that car needed to be halted..
They surely needed to TALK.

The way she listed all of it...scenes after scenes came running just like collage.Beautiful detailing there with the scenes...Crisp and to the point yet filled with love..👏👏

The moment he donned the raincoat and reached her society...I smiled wide.

This boy wants to be free,also wants to be with her...You fool!You can't be both.

And before moving to terrace,let me take some time and appreciate how you impressed me with small scenes...

The kadha,waking of Preeti, grabbing the towel...So realistic and lovely.When you care,you dare.

Now she dares and steps on the terrace in Rains.

BTW.On a Side note---Sweetheart!Itne 'Rains' se to 'floods' aajayenge..I mean raining from evening na? (You know I can't go on appreciating Rains without scowling at them once.😉)

Coming back to Terrace..

His head on her lap..the only line I had read when I had skimmed through this update.And this was the reason I had kept it to read later..aaram se.😳

The girl gave it back with all and If I could whistle like Kajol in K3G ..I would have done..Perfect brownie points to you for the dialogues...So whistles for you first...

Awwie!They slept and her fingers in his hair ...It was so emotional..Something tugged in heart.

This brings to mind a quote from Don Juan-''When one has nothing to lose, one becomes courageous. We are timid only when there is something we can still cling to..''

Were not they clinging to last rays of being still loved bu the other,being still cared by the other..

They are truly each other's possession and my obsession.😳

This much for this part..

Enough late to reply.Sorry for that.

With love-
Minu.







Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part-4

I am not party freak but love dinners..You know that well..Bhukkad 😆
You didn't write what all they ate..I wanted to know..

Jokes apart..

The revelation part and the best part.Rebuilding from debris and on foundation of LOVE AND TRUTH..

The preparations were well detailed.And I love how you detail out the preparations.Must say you excel at this👏👏.I need to learn the trick.

Sameer getting possessive about her is 'our' aesthetic and Sunaina's heart break is 'our' pleasure.😆

How disappointed Kartik and Sunaina were but glad they won the title..Thanks to
the 'vanished couple'.

The confession scene was so on point.I loved how all congregated for it...Wisest counselors like..The repartee was so over whelming considering how everyone had gone through enough hardship and more..at mental level.

Confession they say is weakness but here it built up their relation..a little more,the trust was renewed a little more..May be the fairy lights would have glowed ..a little more.

The ending was magical.So beautiful.I absolutely loved how both especially Sameer grew senses that his life is full of fortune and magic,which were waiting for his senses to grow sharper.

I absolutely loved the part and the lines deserve to be re-re-read again.

Since I started it with my Surf Excel muse,I would end it with Surf Excel only--

When life throws at us lemons,ketch up,ziddi dag...one must be prepared to handle it with more love,more patience and more determination.
Because troubling times test our patience and yeah!Whiskey definitely is an answer..sometimes.😉

This reminds me of my TS..Drunken Confessions. There also Whisky was the answer.😃

On a side note...We have a hotel in our locality named 'Club Dine'.The whole time I was imagining that place only.

So sorry for the late reply..

Keep coming with your best.

With love-
Minu



Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago

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