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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: moumita04

Read parts 5,6 and 7 together... No one's taking you for granted dear... it's just that sometimes it's not possible to comment immediately, especially on weekends when many might have some personal commitments... I am on a trip this weekend but still commenting today, because you update daily and I don't want to be extremely late in my review... 😊


Loved the hilarious situation of Sameer when he was faced by that dog... especially cz at first he was thinking Naina was raising a child alone... Hahaha...😆 I know, I know I probably shouldn't laugh at someone's phobia but it's tough not to... Naina also found it hilarious... though I think she was sorry later... Both of them are so much affected by whatever the other does... None of them enjoyed the meal...

And then the mehendi confusion... She was so disturbed on seeing his name on her hand... yet she couldn't remove it... Wow... Did she just see Sameer shirtless... damn hot yaar... and that proximity had my heartbeat racing... Sameer got irked when she said his name was written by mistake and she had tried to remove it... Why?? Was he hoping for her to accept that she had willingly written it? Man, he is so confused about his own feelings... 🤪

Lastly, the bachelors party... I knew Naina would be there somehow... but as a lap dancer?? Holy hell... And why did Pooja and Deepika request her to be there? Naina came for Sanjay...but she ended up giving a sensuous lap dance to Sameer? Honestly, my head was spinning a bit with all the questions... What girl comes to a bachelors party as a belly dancer just for because her boyfriend would be there? And why as a damn belly dancer for god's sake? Is she so naive that she wouldn't know how the men would look at her? And what is this specimen Sanjay?? He calls himself her boyfriend but isn't concerned at all? 😕😕
Liked how Sameer took care of her and ordered a dress for her... even though, his words and his hold depicted anger... his actions depicted concern and possessiveness... 😳

Looking forward to tonight's update... The story keeps on getting interesting... 😃


I was actually missing your comment thanks you for this big comment you made my day and you might read more comedy chapters in future too I love comedy a lot 😆 or your question regarding naina dancing in the party I hope this chapter satisfies you any way enjoy the next update and yeah I can understand things about comment but I'm bit greedy when it comes to readers response so cant help anyways thank you so much for the long comment
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

That dance was soo passionate and sensous ... Sameer care krta hai hes so protective towards naina but still is afraid to show his softer side to any one ... Now lets see whats the story behind sameer's past

Thank you i had a hard time writing that scene glad you loved it 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: msdfan

Part 7-

It was a nice update dear.. really liked it 👍🏼

Naina became a Belly dancer.. Firstly I thought, Sameer was imagining her in dancers 😆

He recognized her from her eyes.. and he wanted to touch her

Everyone was looking at her with that sight.. that Sameer could not see it.. of course he cares for her

Thanks for the PM


Nah she was actually there in the party it wasn't imagination and I hope next chapter give you the answer of your questions anyways thanks for the comment 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Was Naina really the dancer? Sorry I didn't quite understand if she was really that or if it was just his imagination.. why would she be giving lap dances to random men at bachelor parties? I am little lost 🤔 otherwise the dance scene is written very sensually. Sam is burning for her!

Thank you and she was actually there in the party dancing on his lap lol lol 😆 it actually happened 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
I m still confused about the characters, specially Sam's past & y was he getting married to Pooja! Read 4 parts in 1 go...let's c what u hv in store for us!
Edited by Radkam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it ...
Now finally the most awaited part is here ... I font as waiting for it ..
You very well presented the whole scenario ...
Naina's emotions shown at the starting was just so apt for the situation ..loved it
And then the drama ..now the real story has began ..ab aayga maza ..when both will be tied together for lifetime
Can't wait to see Sameer's reaction to all these
I'm getting so impatient ..and I know you will not let us wait for long and will give us another bang on update

Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ohh... now I understand why that lap dance happened! Idhar toh bride ne hi groom ko bachelor party entertain kiya 🤣

So Naina is adopted and subconsciously feels this is her chance to do something good for the family..

Eagerly waiting to see Sameer's reaction when he gets the option to marry Naina now.. I am sure uske maan mein toh ladoo futenge!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Read parts 5,6,7,8 in one go... Loved every chapters.
Sameer has a dog phobia... That part was funnny... I liked the caring nature of sam... He was sympathetic when he thought she had adopted child... Bt then whst was the need to get so angry on her... She didn't knew about his phobia... His manhandling is too much to bear.

He has feelings for her and he hates that.. He cant see her with sanjay, bt covers it up with the facade of anger... Unknowingly she his name on her hannds... Its like destiny... She hated it bt cant do anything either... That shirtless sameer part was hot... He couldn't control his emotions around her... He kinda got happy that she had his name on her hands... Bt it turned to disappointment when she said it was mistakenly written and she tried removing it... The disappointment turned into anger and he again misbehaved.
The character sketch is amazing.

Sameer recognized her just by seeing her eyes... Wow... He couldnt control himself again... Bt why the hell did pooja and deepika had to send her to a bachelors party... That too in disguise of a belly dancer... Dont they know how men behaves in such parties... Naina is too naive to go there like that... Sanjay didnt recognize her?... Anyway sameer's behavior after the dance was kinda justified... He again was concerned about her... Whatever the reason may be, she shouldnt have went there like that... He was trying to protect her from the dirty eyes of the men out there.

So pooja ran away to become an actress... She didn't think about her family's reputation while running away like that... Those ladies were too much... Blaming the parents for their upbringing and all.. They were humiliating naina and her parents for no fault of their's...calling naina as an orphan was cruel.. . Poor naina had to bear the brunt of her sister's actions... She wanted to save the honour of her parents... Loved how her father said she's equally important for them... So samaina will get married this way.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.
Ps: somehow missed the last two updates... So couldn't comment on time... So sorry... Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh dear... This update was fabulous...!! 👏👏

So... Naina was there to spy on Sanjay... but ended up giving a lap dance to the devil himself... I feel relaxed now... my question is answered... I understand now that she went as a belly dancer so people won't recognize her, however the move didn't work because Sameer did recognize her... 😳

Naina's thoughts about her proximity... so she is not just scared but getting affected as well... Her reactions in the earlier parts were a little confusing, she would get hurt of course, but I had wondered what happened to her due to the physical closeness.. .thanks for answering that question as well... 👍🏼

Sameer and his mom... hmmm... this relation is again shrouded in blanket of mystery... I feel there is some communication gap... something is strange here... but I will wait patiently for you to uncover this mystery for us... 😊

Munna's teasing... suhaagraat cabin me... Hahahaa... 😆😆

And finally... two biggest mysteries revealed... Pooja ran away from home for her film career... not with a lover.. .aah... that girl... so selfish... how could she leave like this on the day of her marriage without worrying about her family's reputation... 😡

Naina is adopted...!!! 😲😲😲 Oh god... That was like a shocking thing for me here... How cruel can those ladies be... prying in others lives... So Naina took the decision to save her family's honor... I applaud her...

Now waiting to read more... Especially Sameer's reaction on getting to know what has happened in his marriage... 😳
Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago

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