ME , MY NAINA and MY LITTLE NAINA - Page 5

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Beautiful OS Ashu Di

You've wonderfully written their journey n then their fear of having a baby..they want to give their child d love for which the craved for, throughout their childhood!!

I absolutely loved Sameer's quality time with his little princess

You always come up with amazing pieces

Originally posted by: Mayashika

This OS was pure magic!

The way you showed Sameer's hesitance and wonder of the newborn, fear of losing either of them was fabulous👏The promise they shared of giving their baby girl complete attention and love❤️

The insight towards their past..Arjun's cowardly attitude😒What Naina did was the correct thing..

Keep Writing Ashu di!

Originally posted by: berrysweet

i enjoyed this so much that i actually went to your page to look for more of your stories. WOW!

Originally posted by: lakku19

It's so amazing and magical

Originally posted by: Krutikarainbow

Really good I could actually see it happening

Originally posted by: souhasini

Beautiful os

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hey Ashu... Finally I read it again... Thrice now... and trust me every time you managed to sweep me in the myriad of emotions... It is such a beautiful piece of work...😳

And I say beautiful, because every line depicted emotions... and brought forth the deeply felt fears, happiness, insecurities in such a splendid manner that it made me feel exactly what your characters were feeling.

Naina's lost face, her attempt to control her emotion, facing all the tirade of abuse, yet not speaking about the MAN in her life for fear of his name being defamed... Truly, what can anyone teach a woman about being a wife, who has already fought like a warrior for her man.

Sameer leaving aside everything, and rising up to the situation, thinking if he didn't act now there is no use of him being a man, upholding the respect of his WOMAN, understanding the dynamics of the society, therefore providing her the security of his name first, then announcing proudly to the world about their love and commitment - Truly, what can you teach a man about being a husband, who has already stood up for his woman in-front of her own family.

The scene at the hospital, Naina's demand of promise, Sameer's assurance just for the sake of her peace of mind, and his utter devotion to his wife, the wait of countless hours, the ebb and tide of fear and anxiety - I was just as anxious, my own eyes went to the watch to check time... it felt real, my stomach was a bundle of nerves.

The entire journey of motherhood, the happiness of feeling their child moving inside her belly, the sheer joy of holding their daughter for the first time, taking pride on finding some similarities in her, and then finally the act of enclosing his entire world in his arms, with a promise to keep them safe and secure and happy forever - My eyes were brimming with tears when little Naina curled her fingers around her daddy's finger, when Sameer held Naina so she could rest against his chest while feeding their baby, the satisfaction and happiness in silence upon hearing the tiny sounds of their baby suckling... I truly cannot express the absolute beauty of this... Just know that my heart is content, my eyes still have tears, and I am going to read this again on some other quiet mornings...

Hugs for this brilliant piece of writing...🤗

Love,

Mou

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Wonderfully written 👏

As much as we would like to see Samaina getting married with the blessings of their family.. life doesn't always give us the perfect path.. we have to walk the path presented none the less.

I loved reading how the two of them can rise to be each other's strength and can be enough for the other. Naina not willing to forgive her family for not accepting her Sameer and never considering her worthy of someone's genuine love is so right!

You have portrayed her fears around child birth and the effects so beautifully!



The picture of the complete family with the little one is so heart warming!!

Loved the story!