Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AaishaM

Oh My God, please some one bring me back from Samaina land

Didi sachi bata rhi hun itna roka khud ko ki pdhai krni hai, fir laalach aa gya aur socha ek aaapka aur ek Mou ke FF ka part to pdh Skte hun, itni cheating to chalti hai😆😆

This FF is so damn beautiful. I so badly want all of this to happen in the show. Khuda kasam mera aakhiri din hoga agar ye show me dikha diya to

I can not even pick up one best moment from the updates, it all seemed so magical. Naina and sameer ek hi college me ek hi bench pe hyeee such feels it gives❤️ I loved each and every thing. Sameer ka Naina ko tadpana, naina ka desperate wait krna surprise kr liye, sameer ki jealousy, sath me pdhai krna, dil le lo didi.
Oh BTW 'tumhara to roz hi ek baar hota hai' had me in splits😆

Naina in naniji's saree and sameer admiring her. Money seriously can't buy happiness because this is what happiness is, seeing the love of your life adorning your Naniji's saree😳. Hihi Ramdhari was so cute.

Oh coming to the proposal wala part: Can I confess something? I cried reading it. I am not lying. I actually had tears in my eyes. It was so amazing.Love is the most beautiful feeling in the entire world. When someone you love deeply is ready to take to the next stage of the relationship, the happiness you feel can not be described in words. Aapne itne pyaare tareeke se proposal scene likha hai👏 I imagined each and every scene and dialogue. You even described the setting in so much detail. Aapka ye proposal vala part pdh kr mjhe fir se sameeria ho raha hai😆 it was cute, intense, romantic, heavenly all at the same time. And that was so sweet of Sameer to propose to her on her birthday rather than his😳

I am so lost in samaina world now that I dont ever wish to come back❤️ Naina Sameer Maheshwari❤️ sachi me yahi naam accha lagta hai.


The best thing that I love about all your stories is you never take away the innocence of Samaina which made us fall for them in the first place.

Thanks for this FF. I so badly want Cvs to take inspiration from your FF.


Hey Aaisha!! Thank you so much yaar...your comments took me into a different world altogether...you've no idea how happy they've made me! 😊
That is true- love is one of the most beautiful feelings in this world- fir pyaar chahe jaisa bhi ho...parents-child, siblings or love that is between Sameer n Naina 😳 I honestly believe that love does make your world go around...
Tumhari aankhon se aansu aa gaye proposal padh ke...yaar, this is really an honour for me...the best comment ever- if my writing was able to connect with you emotionally to this level, I would really consider myself successful in portraying the confession the way I wanted to...😳 Nani's sari added a personal touch here to Sameer's life and Naina's life to be...plus I wanted the confession to be in a sari for Naina 😊😳
Hehe...Sameer hai to desperate- but only for Naina- so he can never have enough of her...😳😆
That is true dear- I try and retain the innocence of the original Samaina in this story- though I've made them a little more into physical proximity than the characters of the show coz now they've aged a bit n are in college...plus in a deep n committed relationship for the past 4 years...😳
I hope you are able to enjoy the stories I write in future too dear...
Thank you so much for showering so much of love! 😳
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
😳

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Let me start the review with beautiful lyrics of a beautiful song for this beautiful update--

Khulte band hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan..

So beautiful description of each scene.The earring scene in market was so relatable.
Then the room scene was quite romantic and sensous in its way.Thank god Ramdhari was there to bring them some senses.
😉

The park scene was ofcourse blissfully beautiful.The name change was expectedly unexpected for Naina and so also us.😳

The descriptions and detailings were on point.👏👏
I would sum this beautiful update in the line--
''When you found someone you really loved, everything fitted.''


Minu...🤗Thank you so much yaar...I so agree...when you find true love...everything falls in place...😳😳 you enjoyed the romantic date cum proposal of the couple...bas isse zyada badi baat kya hogi...😳😳
Expectedly unexpected ho gaya hehe...lagta hai dono stories mix ho gayi Minu...😆 but glad to see I was able to surprise you in addition to Naina for the proposal...😳
Lots of love dear
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aniisha-

I'm speechless at the sheer beauty of this update
Made me bit emotional
Everything about this update was perfect be it the birthday surprise or Sameer's proposal
I must say you are really talented Surbhi
The way you portrayed their emotions was simple yet powerful👏
Cant wait to read the next part... update soon
Thanks for the PM

Hey Aniisha...🤗 I'm really really honoured to read your comments dear!!! Thank you so much!! The update had an emotional connect with you- it's overwhelming to know this!! 😳 I'm really happy that you were able to enjoy what I had penned down to this extent...really Aniisha! I mean it...dil se thank you...your comment made my day!😳
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
Am super late in replying for this one, but like they better late than never!
The setting leading to surprise and the proposal were all the things a girl hopes and dreams off even today. The way sameer makes naina special and vice versa is something delightfully delectable to read about.

Sameer's proposal especially the last few lines when he promises to make her happy till eternity had my eyes brimming with tears. Naina when she confesses that how she eagerly was awaiting this day while accepting was such an honest beautiful scene and while I was imagining these and the scenes were rolling in front of my eyes like some film, I had a smile of contentment pasted on my face.

That's what your updates do, make me smile and the serenity and simple nature of the story tugs at my heart. The raw, innocent emotions and the down to earth characters make me fall in love again and again.

Keep up the fantastic work
Will be waiting for more.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

Am super late in replying for this one, but like they better late than never!

The setting leading to surprise and the proposal were all the things a girl hopes and dreams off even today. The way sameer makes naina special and vice versa is something delightfully delectable to read about.

Sameer's proposal especially the last few lines when he promises to make her happy till eternity had my eyes brimming with tears. Naina when she confesses that how she eagerly was awaiting this day while accepting was such an honest beautiful scene and while I was imagining these and the scenes were rolling in front of my eyes like some film, I had a smile of contentment pasted on my face.

That's what your updates do, make me smile and the serenity and simple nature of the story tugs at my heart. The raw, innocent emotions and the down to earth characters make me fall in love again and again.

Keep up the fantastic work
Will be waiting for more.

Hey Pooja! Now I'm super late in replying to this comment I know 😕 But thank you so much for such fantastic comments...😳😳😳 The update had the power to connect with you at an emotional level makes me feel really humbled! The visualization was good and it could make you smile- means I was successfully at portraying what I wanted to! 😳
That is true- I've tried to make my Sameer and Naina as simple and as innocent as possible here- their real nature is somewhere very much in line to what they are on the show...after all, it was their simplicity which made me fall in love with the pair and the show too! 😊
So lots of love dear and I hope you would continue to enjoy the future updates too! 😊😳
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
aww such a beautiful update it was
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

aww such a beautiful update it was
loved it

Thank you so much Prachi! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990


Hey Aaisha!! Thank you so much yaar...your comments took me into a different world altogether...you've no idea how happy they've made me! 😊

That is true- love is one of the most beautiful feelings in this world- fir pyaar chahe jaisa bhi ho...parents-child, siblings or love that is between Sameer n Naina 😳 I honestly believe that love does make your world go around...
Tumhari aankhon se aansu aa gaye proposal padh ke...yaar, this is really an honour for me...the best comment ever- if my writing was able to connect with you emotionally to this level, I would really consider myself successful in portraying the confession the way I wanted to...😳 Nani's sari added a personal touch here to Sameer's life and Naina's life to be...plus I wanted the confession to be in a sari for Naina 😊😳
Hehe...Sameer hai to desperate- but only for Naina- so he can never have enough of her...😳😆
That is true dear- I try and retain the innocence of the original Samaina in this story- though I've made them a little more into physical proximity than the characters of the show coz now they've aged a bit n are in college...plus in a deep n committed relationship for the past 4 years...😳
I hope you are able to enjoy the stories I write in future too dear...
Thank you so much for showering so much of love! 😳
Sur

And you have no idea that your stories take me to a different world. You write so well di, you deserve all this appreciation. Actually isse bhi jyada deserve krte ho😊
😊I believe the same. True love does make your world go around. And as you said it's not only about Husband wife wala pyaar. Every love is beautiful. We often end up ignoring the love our friends, parents, siblings shower on us owing to our busy schedules. But unka pyaar bhi utna hi pyaara hota hai. We should make them feel special too.
And that is why I love our show even more. Sare relationships ko explore kiya hai.

Han di sach me royi thi mai, mjhe itna accha laga tha pdh ke. Mere dil ko choo gaya tha proposal and all credit goes to you for writing it so brilliantly.

Han di I can understand about the physical proximity aspect. But that is what I wanted to say. Even if you write about physical proximity, I can still feel their innocence.

Obviously I will. Aap story likho aur mjhe pasand na aae aisa ho hi nahi skta.
Bas exams ho Jaen. Fir aapka naya vala FF bhi pdhna hai😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AaishaM

And you have no idea that your stories take me to a different world. You write so well di, you deserve all this appreciation. Actually isse bhi jyada deserve krte ho😊

😊I believe the same. True love does make your world go around. And as you said it's not only about Husband wife wala pyaar. Every love is beautiful. We often end up ignoring the love our friends, parents, siblings shower on us owing to our busy schedules. But unka pyaar bhi utna hi pyaara hota hai. We should make them feel special too.
And that is why I love our show even more. Sare relationships ko explore kiya hai.

Han di sach me royi thi mai, mjhe itna accha laga tha pdh ke. Mere dil ko choo gaya tha proposal and all credit goes to you for writing it so brilliantly.

Han di I can understand about the physical proximity aspect. But that is what I wanted to say. Even if you write about physical proximity, I can still feel their innocence.

Obviously I will. Aap story likho aur mjhe pasand na aae aisa ho hi nahi skta.
Bas exams ho Jaen. Fir aapka naya vala FF bhi pdhna hai😳

Aww dear Aaisha! I'm really flattered dear! Thank you so much...I'm just a beginner...all your and our other friends' encouragements play a huge role in motivating me...honestly!😳 Do well in your exams dear! All the very best. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv

loved it

update soon.

Thanks Ujwala! 😳😳

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