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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
On a serious note it is the most beautiful story I hv read in this forum till now.. the lines the dialoguea your thoughts especially that saat vachan..Waohhh m in love with this update.. do pm me whenever u update.. I hv bcm your fan yrr.. ek autograph milega ? Hihi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyp

On a serious note it is the most beautiful story I hv read in this forum till now.. the lines the dialoguea your thoughts especially that saat vachan..Waohhh m in love with this update.. do pm me whenever u update.. I hv bcm your fan yrr.. ek autograph milega ? Hihi



First of all thanks a ton for the kind words... I was afraid the update was too long & too filmy! But I might glad to receive an amazing response! This is my first time writing it & reading others stories encouraged me to publish my own here...I hv a couple more ideas for other stories too... vl try to pen down those too! Btw,what's ur name?
Edited by Radkam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: angelic567

Sorry for the late comments.

Missed the updates somehow.

Amazing and beautiful... I have no words to say how beautiful it had been... This is something which i would 've wanted to be shown... From sameer's realization to his vachans... Everything was too good.

Sameer's jealousy angle was also wonderful... The kind of passionate lover he is, he's bound to get jealous even with the presence of some other guy around naina.. Be it her rakhi brother😉

Sameer saying meri naina is like music to ears.. Hecsays that with all the love in his heart . Sameer saying only he has the right to call her as behenji...She's his own cute behenji.

Naina getting ready for sameer and sameer getting floored seeing her😳.. Mandir always holds a special place in their love story...

I liked sameer's decision of making her believe in his love before telling her about the bet truth.. The decision of letting go off his hair was the best.. . How beautifully he confessed his unconditional love for her... He didn't want her to confess before the bet truth... That was so beautiful.

No words are enough to describe the beauty of the vachans he gave her... With all the vachans he had already become hers... Also pandit ji's words about gandharv vivah... Any girl will melt in front of those vachans.

Eagerly waiting for the bet revealation and naina's decision.
Pls update soon.

thank you fir the lovely comments! I m happy to that forumwasis like this part... the idea was cooking forever since the nt abu track but was hesitant to publish it anywhere! Your words r really encouraging since this is first time to write anything! Vl try to update ASAP...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: surbharati

Oh my God this was way too romantic and cute at the same time...loved the depth of Love you have show by Sameer's vow...Excellent...but again Cliff Hanger...what is the problem with you all writers...I know you guys love it when immediately ask for next part update after one...but please requesting you to update soon the next part...Loved it to core...

thanks yaar! This cliffhanger was not on purpose... it was just that the update became way too long than I initially thot, but can't stop as words were flowing while writing & didn't want to break the part in two! Vl update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayashika

Loved the update👏

Sameer's confession was so romantic and to give away the chain, his Nanu's birthday gift proves Sameer has really fallen very hard for Naina.😳

Eagerly waiting to know Naina's reaction on knowing the bet after such heartfelt confession from Sameer.

Thanks for the PM😃


This scene was inspired from MPK, Naina's & my all time fav movie! Had to use it! After all Prem is the first love of all us 90s teenagers
Edited by Radkam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was the most innocent and sweet update I have ever read .. and filmy naah I rather say it was pure ... Film mein bhi aisa kahan dikhne Jo milta hai itni pureness .. hayeee Dil le lo .. I'm scared for the truth confrontation but I have faith in you girl because you have protrayed the story opposite from the show so I hope Naina will understand him .. waiting for the next update ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update...i can't explain in words how sweet and innocent it was. I just want to say that this was one of the best update i have ever read.👏
Now i m waiting eagerly for next update ...and that nanu's chain and promises scene... haaeee...loved that scene very much.
Edited by Bluebee - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluebee

Amazing update...i can't explain in words how sweet and innocent it was. I just want to say that this was one of the best update i have ever read.👏

Now i m waiting eagerly for next update ...and that nanu's chain and promises scene... haaeee...loved that scene very much.

one of the best wow thanx a ton! Now I have to make sure, I do the next update right!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Just completely speechless after reading this 👏 amazing update... this was the best update I have ever read 😊 please update soon waiting for the next update 😊
Edited by Hitanshivyas - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Radhika... First of all sorry for the late reply...!
I have been busy with some personal engagements and my new story which I committed to update today.
Finally, I can now catch-up with all the stories, and yours is the first one! 😳

Coming to the update - this is like watching a movie... and knowing how much influenced they both are from movies, it makes perfect sense... 👍🏼
I especially loved the scene where Sameer removed his chain and made Naina wear it - reminded me of MPK where Salman did the same with Bhagyashree after the Dil Deewana song! 😃

The confusion of Naina as to what to wear is so relatable... Be it unn dino ya inn dino... us girls always feel that we don't have anything proper to wear while going out... especially on a date... 😆😆

So, Sameer's masterstroke was to chop off his hair... Impressive... Especially his feeling that how could he have given his own hair more importance that Naina's heart ever... Well done!! 😳
HIS BRIDE - this in itself has so much feels... and you added those 7 promises... oh my god... my heart was beating faster with each and every one... They were so well thought out, and so beautifully portrayed... Kudos on doing a brilliant work here..!! 👏👏

I loved this, completely... So now, the time has come for confession... I hope Naina forgives him... After such beautiful commitment it would be simply heart-breaking to read about any separation... But I trust you to make the correct decision for the story... 😃
Eagerly looking forward to read more...!

Love,
Mou

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