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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mujhse alag ho jao, lekin apne dil se meri yaadein kabhi alag mat hone dena
Humare pyaar mein kabhi judaai na aaye, do din bas yahi dua karna

Kuchh aisa hi kaha tha Sameer ne jab woh Naina se aakhri baar mila tha. Lekin usse kaha pata tha ki pyaar ka doosra naam hi judaai hai. Kitabon mein sahi kaha gaya hai dooriyon se pyaar khatam nahi hota, balki pyaar aur gehra ho jaata hai. Aaj jab woh Naina se milo door hai, tabhi toh woh uss tadap ko samajh pa raha hai. Uss se raabta karne ki tadap, uski awaaz bas ek baar sunn ne ki tadap, usse bas ek baar dekhne ki, usse mehsoos karne ki tadap. Jitne zyada din woh Naina se door hai utna uska yakeen pakka hota ja raha hai ki uske pyaar mein milo ki dooriyan toh aa sakti hai, par dilo mein dooriyan kabhi nahi aa sakti. Usse yakeen hai ki Naina bhi uske liye utni hi bechain aur udaas hai jitna woh uske liye hai. Naina ko bhi Sameer ki tasveer dekhe bina chain nahi pad raha. Sameer na sahi, aakhir uski tasveer se toh apna mann bhar paaye, yahi soch ke toh woh roz uss tasveer ko apne seene se laga ke uske aane ki raah dekhti hai.

Aur ab jaake, Sameer na sahi, lekin kam se kam uska khat toh aaya. Naina ne maano itne dino ke kaale baadlon ke baad jaise aaj khula aasmaan dekh liya ho. Suraj ki roshni ki tarah Sameer ka khat Naina ki zindagi mein bhi roshni le aaya. Mohabbat mein shayad yahi taakat hoti hai. Sanam ka likha chhotasa khat jeene ki wajah ban jaata hai. Uske pyaar bhare do kalaam padhke insaan ka dil khushi se jhoom uthta hai.

Jab milo ki dooriyan hoti hai, tab har insaan ko ek darr humesha sataata hai, chahe phir woh pyaar karnewala aaj ke zamane ka ho ya beete zamane ka. Darr iss baat ki naye log, nayi duniya aur naye shehar ki bheed mein kahin woh mujhe aur meri mohabbat ko bhul toh nahi jayega? Sameer aur Naina bhi koi alag nahi. Aaj jab Naina Sameer ka khat padhke jhoom rahi thi, tab uske chehre par sirf khat milne ki khushi nahi thi. Uske chehre par ek itminaan tha, iss baat ka itminaan ki uss naye shehar ki bheed--bhaad mein bhi mera Sameer mujhe aur mere pyaar ko yaad karta hai. Usne apne pyaar ka izhaar iss khat mein bhi kiya hai, matlab uske dil mein abhi bhi main hi kirayedaar hoon. Woh mere bina nayi school jaana pasand nahi karta, matlab woh duniya mein jahaan bhi jaaye, mujhe apne saath apne paas chahta hai.

Khair Sameer toh shayar hai, so usne toh woh shayari kitne khoobsurati se keh di. Naina koi shayar nahi, lekin Naina ke dil ka haal shayad iss sher mein bakhoobi bayaan ho jaaye:

Jazbon ki sadaaqat ka bharam toot na jaaye
Main tujhse bahot door hoon, milne ki dua kar

Let the belief of sincerity of emotions never break
I'm far away from you, pray we meet soon

Jab do log pyaar mein hote hai, woh humesha iss meethe se bharam mein hote hai ki unke ek doosre ke liye jazbaat sachhe hai. Unke jazbaat sadaaqat (sincerity) bhare hai. Lekin milo ki dooriyaan dilo mein darr paida karti hai iss bharam ke toot jaane ka. Tabhi toh do dil judaai mein dua karte hai ek doosre se mulaqat ki, ek doosre ko ek nazar dekhne ki, ek doosre ko mehsoos karne ki, taaki yeh bharam aur yeh yakeen bana rahe kuchh aur samay tak. Aaj Sameer ke uss pyaar bhare khat ne bhi Naina ke bharam aur yakeen ko kuchh isi tarah pakka kiya hai. Aur ab dono bas ek doosre se jald milne ki dua kar rahe hai.


PS: Philophical long (and may be boring) post. Aaj ka episode dekh ke bahot dino baad mann hua kuchh achha likhne ka. Hope you liked it! If not bring on the ande, tamatar, pyaaz, I will cook something. 😆
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Kavila thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
😲zulu di us back iska Matlab wakeyi ep me bat thi ..
Never commented as such in your posts but

It's always beautiful aur aj to I got tears reading this
.such a beautiful nd soulful post .
.ek ek sabd nano moti samman ❤️

Apratim 👏❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavila

😲zulu di us back iska Matlab wakeyi ep me bat thi ..

Never commented as such in your posts but

It's always beautiful aur aj to I got tears reading this
.such a beautiful nd soulful post .
.ek ek sabd nano moti samman ❤️

Apratim 👏❤️

Thank you Kavila🤗
Episode mein wakeyi mein baat thi...you are right...tabhi toh I was tempted to write

I'm glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
Ande n tamatar are u serious Zulu...I whd gift u bouque full of chocolates...this one is the best post infact the most lovely post!!!

I have not yet seen the episode...n trust me the negativity arnd was making it difficult for me nyways...bt this post has brought me back!!!

Such a beautifully written thing...u so well wrote about the dooriyan and milne k tadap...ek khaat ka value unke life...vo jasbaat jise vo khaat likha tha...vo jasbaat jise naina ne vo khaat padha tha...vo dooriyan Jo us khatam ne khatam Kar di...vo Bharosa Jo us ek khaat me Diya...so wonderfully u hv written!!

It is really bliss to read such things...plz write such things more!!!!
Edited by Niakhush - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ab Ye Dil Dhadakte Hain
Milte Aur Bichhadte Hain
Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...

Hope is the power of being cheerful in circumstances that we know to be desperate..
Loved the post..😃

Loved how in the letter he brought out his emotions and I would sum up this in one line-
'The simple lack of her is more to him than others' presence.
Absence is to love as wind is to fire; it extinguishes the small and kindles the great...
How desperate both were to meet each other..
The 'tadpan',the 'khushi ke anshoo..' so relatable and beautifully portrayed.

Many relationships weaken with distance, but others get stronger, and there are good things that can come with distance too.

They would develop personal strength and consistency.Would learn slowly how to make a commitment, even when things are difficult. They would discover the power of their relationship to overcome all obstacles.


Waqt Ka Hai Ye Faisla
Hum Tum Ho Jaayein Juda
Maangein Khushiyon Ki Dua

Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...

Sorry for random musings..😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
#6
Wonderfully written Zulu👏, the feelings of the two lovers separated by circumstance and distance.

I was automatically singing this song 😆(from the movie Sirf Tum) after the episode today
Pehli Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai
Kuch Na Samajh Mein Aaye Main Kya Karoon
Ishq Ne Meri Aisi Haalat Ki Hai
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
Tamatar. Pyaaz, andaa...arre yaar aise post dekh ke mun bharta Hai.
Very nice post ...



Judai Mai bhi pyaar hai ...
Intezaar Mai bhi pyaar hai ...
Iss intezaar Mai tumhare diye hua ummid jo kayam hai


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Zulu Di...
This post really describes why Naina was so happy for the letter.
As Minu has posted earlier...that you need assurance in love.
The letters and phone calls are assurance.
Pyar ki ek lafz hi kaafi hain jeene ke liye..
And they say Distance makes heart go fonder..
Sameer would not have said all these..if he could not have been far from her.

Jab milo ki dooriyan hoti hai, tab har insaan ko ek darr humesha sataata hai, chahe phir woh pyaar karnewala aaj ke zamane ka ho ya beete zamane ka. Darr iss baat ki naye log, nayi duniya aur naye shehar ki bheed mein kahin woh mujhe aur meri mohabbat ko bhul toh nahi jayega?

Loved these lines.
It is the reality.
In love with your writings.
Keep writing.
Love
Sweety.
Edited by sweetylina - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
waah zulu madam
dil khush hogaya
sameer ki shayri maine theek se nahi suni kyunki situation aaram ki nahi thi
but mai aaram se woh scene phir se dekhungi
aur aapke hotey hue woh shayri ki lines maine dekhli
itss sooo beautiful
sammy ke dialouges kam sunai diye but uski intense voice aur I love u naina sunkar bada sukoon mila dil ko mere
naina ki tarah hi
aapki hindi post mujhe bahot alag tarah ka sukoon dete hai
dil bhar aata hai sameer aur naina ke ehsaas ki jhalak aapke post mei dekh kar
seriously u r just amazing...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing post and beautifully summarised todays epi👍🏼
todays epi was really cute... after a long time felt like yes we r watching YUDKBH 😳

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