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Posted: 7 years ago
Di...yeh week khatam hone aaya. Kab update karoge... please please please please please please please please update kardona...chapter 14
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Posted: 7 years ago
Guyz m so planning to pen it down today and max by Tom...jaise hi I own it down...I will update...max by Mon or Tue pakka this time...this time its a promise!!!!

M actually stuck up with many things guyz...Mumbai Pune travelling only makes me tired...last week se to episodes bhi nahi dekhe!!!

Bt I myself want to write it now...next week back to back updates honge...like in 2 days one update...pakka!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niakhush

Guyz m so planning to pen it down today and max by Tom...jaise hi I own it down...I will update...max by Mon or Tue pakka this time...this time its a promise!!!!

M actually stuck up with many things guyz...Mumbai Pune travelling only makes me tired...last week se to episodes bhi nahi dekhe!!!

Bt I myself want to write it now...next week back to back updates honge...like in 2 days one update...pakka!!!

It's ok we'll wait.
Jab itna wait kiya toh thoda aur sahi..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing story dear superb continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Di...update kar do na

Please
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Tuesday as Gaya please update n
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Posted: 7 years ago
First of all sorry for being pretty late...bt as promised I am here on Tuesday with and update!!! This one is a small update...bt this is just a teaser to samina reunion...as I dint want u guyz to wait...this one may not b the best...bt next part will b better than this...I dnt promise is to b best though!!!!

CHAPTER 14:-

AGARWAL HOUSE:-

Preeti ans swati were back home after meeting munna and pandit...and they were full ready to b in action tomorrow morning for samina reunion...bt will they succeed...or again destiny will play some role ...and if destiny plays a role...will it b for good or bad...Chalo let's find out!!!

Agarwal family a their dinner together.. after ages everyone was purely enjoying the dinner ...after all this dinner was happening after 8 yrs...n there were 2 reasons to celebrate...Agarwal girls were back...and naina did win the bail hearing!!!!After dinner...Swati decided to stay at Agarwal house only today...all the three friends were having a gala time...after sometime...Swati and Preeti were tired and they went off to bed... after all they had a big day tomorrow!!! It was already midnight... everybody at Agarwal house was fast asleep except one soul naina Agarwal!!!

On the other side munna and pandit had decided to stay at sameer's place...all three of them had a blast and finally munna and pandit retired for bed ...after the determination to get their bhabhi back into their brother life tomorrow morning!!! Bt sleep was far away for sameer!!!!

Naina was deep in her thoughts" Kya bolugi me tumhe sameer Kal. kaise face karugi tumhe???? Tumhari ankho me mere liye aaj bhi wah pyaar hai...bt Kya me us pyaar k layak bhi hu????"

Sameer on the other hand was also in his thoughts" To Finally tum aa hi gayi...mere sapno me hi Sahi ...tumne saach bola tha...jab bhi me problem me giruga...tum muje bachane zarur aaugi...magr tumhari ankho me vo Kya tha Jo me nahi padh paya...ek unknown sa daard tha...me tumhe daard ne nahi dekh sakta naina!!!!"

In their own thoughts when did naina and sameer sleep even they did not realise...it was already morning...the morning all these 6 ppl have waited for since long...the new beginning for everyone...bt will it really b a start to something new or will it end something old!!!!

Preeti and swati were yet asleep...where as naina woke up early as per the tradition in Agarwal house...she did her Pooja and left the house...with a message for Preeti!!!
Preeti:- " Swati uth uthna swati!!!!"
Swati-" Sone de Na yaar Preeti...neend mat kharab Kar Meri...Varna merko dark circles aa jayenge!!!!"
Preeti-" Yaha naina sameer ka future pura dark hai...n tune dark circles k padi hai...Swati my munna's darling...Naina gharpe nahi hai...she has already left!!!"
Listening to this swati gets up with a shock:-" Kya...kaha gayi vo??? aur kab gayi??? aur Kyu gayi???
Preeti-" Pata hoti to tuje uthane me time waste karti me...yaar lata nahi...mummy ko bolke gayi hai k Preeti n swati ko directly munna k Ghar pauchne bolo...yaar ab plan ka Kya hoga...phone bhi nahi lekar gayi...Purana adat hai bhulna k!!!"
Swati:- " Ab Kya karenge...munna n pandit se Kya bolege???"
Preeti-" Sochte Kuch baadme...phele tu tyaar ho fatafat...Tere sasural Jana hai...me pandit ko inform karti!!!"
Swati-" Oh ha mere sasural Jana hai...me Kuch traditional phenti!!!!"

Preeti-" Hello pandit... good morning!!!"
Pandit-" Kya good morning...yaha bad morning hai!!!"
Preeti-" Kyu Kya hua????"
Pandit-" Plan cancel...pata nahi sameer kaha Chala gaya hai subh subh me...phone bhi nahi utha raha...ab hum use lekar kaise aye???"
Preeti-" To tum log jaldi nahi uth sakte ek din...bola tha na Mene Kal!!!"
Pandit-" Sorry Preeti...bt tum tensn mat lo...tum school jao...hum use lekar ate hai...dhundkar!!!!"
Preeti-" Uski Zarurat nHi...plan for bhi cancel hoga!!!"
Pandit-"Kyu???"
Preeti-" hum bhi late uthe...vo naina subh subh kahi chali gayi hai!!!!"
Pandit-"Wah...ulta chor kotwal ko daate!!!!...nyways dono hi gayab hai...may b destiny will make them meet!!!"
Preeti-" Ya I hope destiny forces them to cross their paths again!!! Nyways cya at munna's place in one hour!!!"

Meanwhile naina reaches mandir... somehow her eyes were searching for someone...as if she knew he will come here!!!
Sameer-" ye ankhe shayad muje dhoond rahi hai!!!"
Naina was happy to see sameer...bt she did not show" Nahi to...ye ankhe kisko nahi dhoond rahi!!!"
Sameer-" Jooth bolna aaj bhi nahi Ata tumhe!!!!"
Naina-""Kya???"
Sameer:-" Kuch nahi...Chalo maan liya ye ankhe muje nahi dhoond rahi thi...bt ye kisiko to dhoond rahi thi!!!"
Naina:- " Vo chodo...tum yaha subh subh!!!"
Sameer:-" Naraaz tha me inse...8 saal se inke darwaze pe nahi aya...aaj gussa shant hua to Chala aya!!!"
Naina- " Bhagwan se naraazgi kaisi????"
Sameer-" Kyu Na Naraaz hota ...kaam hi inhone Isa kiya tha!!!"
Naina-" Isa Kya kiya tha bhagwan ne...Jo tum 8 saal se Naraaz the inse...ek baar aakar to dekhte...Badi takkat hai inme!!!"
Sameer:-" Sahi kaha tumne bhaut takkat n himmat hai inme ...isliye ek hi din me inhone Meri himmat tod di aur Meri duniya badal di!!!"
Naina-" Sameer!!!!"
Sameer:- " Nahi naina...8 saal se Naraaz hu inse ...ek hi din me mere sabse pyaare Nanu ko inhone apne pass bula liya...aur us difficult time me Meri himmat n Meri takkat( He by himmat n takkat He is referring to naina) apne pass rok k Rakha tha vo bhi mere intezaar me!!!"

This was it for naina she could not control anymore...she just said..." M sorry sameer" and ran from. there...behind the temple...where she and sameer use to meet before!!!!

He by now knew naina had broken down...and he could not see naina in pain and now he could read her eyes properly..." that unknown thing which I could not read I ur eyes was guilt of these 8 yrs...ate u blaming urself for these 8 yrs!!!!" Sameer though himself...no naina what happened was destiny...I will get u out if this guilt!!!!

He went behind the temple were naina was crying...with a determination to get her back...to make her his again!!!!

Sameer-" Naina tum yaha Kya Kar Rahi ho...Chalo jaldi!!!"
Naina stops crying and looks at sameer fully confused!!!
Sameer hold her hand and takes her along...by now naina had stopped crying and was walking with sameer ...fully confused!!!
Naina:-" Sameer...hum kaha ja Rahe hai????"
Sameer-" me tumhe kidnap karke lekar ja raha hu!!!"
Naina-" Sameer me khud tumhare sath Chal Rahi hu... legally ise kidnap nahi kehte!!!!"
Sameer:-" Are Meri lawyer madam...Sameer k dictionary duniya wale se alag hai...ab Chalo jaldi!!!"
Sameer takes naina towards his car holding her hand!!! Though naina was scared...but she was loving it and enjoying it!!!!

Sameer makes naina sit in the car and he drives to his destination!!!
Naina-" Sameer hum kaha ja Rahe hai????"
Sameer-" Naina Agarwal kahi kho gayi hai...use dhoodne ja Rahe hai!!!"
Naina gets more confused by now..."Kya bol Rahe ho sameer...me yaha to Bethi hu tumhare samne!!!!"
Sameer-" Are yaar tum lawyer itne jyada question puchne k bimari hai kya..har mamle me enquiry start!!!"
Naina- " Aur tum businessmen ko secrets rakhne k bimari hoti hai Kya!!!"
Sameer-" Are business me secrets rakhne paste hai... business ka rule hai secret rakh Kar hi bada dhamaka kiya ja sakta hai!!!!"
Naina-"Aur tumhara profit hota hai!!!"
Sameer:-" Me jayprakash maheshwari ka beta hu...Sirf apna nahi...samne wale ka bhi profit dekhta hi...aur lo hum pauch gaye!!!!"
Naina gets out if the car and is nostalgic...tears of happiness automatically came into her eyes!!!
Sameer had brought her to the place where she had most of her memoires...be it good or bad...this was a place where her story started ...This was the place where naina Agarwal lost herself...yes correct sameer brought naina to PRAGATI VIDYA kA MANDIR!!!!!

so guyz I end here...bt bt bt picture Abhi Baki hai mere dost!!! This one was a bit boring according to me...how was it guyz...Saachi Saachi batao!!!

N next update will b tom...and I will send the pm also tom!!!
So guyz plz comments!!!! Was it worth the wait!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's chotu update but very nice
Beautifully describe
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

It's chotu update but very nice

Beautifully describe



thnx u dear...ya I knw it was a chotu sa update...bt was tired yr...cud just type this much...will try Making next one a longer update!!!!
Edited by Niakhush - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update...But it got over pretty soon 😭
You should try giving us a big update next time

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