SS- when destiny forces you to cross the path!Chp 20 pg 90(updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great start dear..😊👏
Suspense keeps people hooked to the story..😆
Would like to know what happened in the past..and how they will cross there paths in future.. connect the dots soon..
Update next part soon..😳
-shira
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesoem nia u r a good writer it seems to be interesting
Kamya ki entry krva hi di aapne vi bhi itne danger style me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey thanks for the pm ... Its a wonderful start .. i think i can get hint may be naina the lawyer will fight case of sameer and bring him out of this mess ... Lets see if i m wrong or right
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Suspense..hmm!! It's mazedaar Nia😃
Part b ka intezaar h..humko bhi krna h, connect d dot s!!😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations! Shubhaarambh kiya jaaye!

P.S. I may not be that active but will try to catch up as and when possible. All the best!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A great start nia... I'm so excited for the next part... Pls update soon dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -HJ-

Congratulations! Shubhaarambh kiya jaaye!

P.S. I may not be that active but will try to catch up as and when possible. All the best!!



thnx u dear...do check ur pm when free!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thnx u so much for the lovely comments guyz.. .it really motivates me!!!

I will update part (b) in some time!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thnx u for the motivation guyz!!! Means a lot!!!

CHAPTER 1 PART(b)

Location:- Delhi, Year 2001

Preeti and naina the famous Agarwal sisters live in one two BHK apartment in Delhi!!

It was Saturday night 7p.m. Preeti came home already to find Naina home. Naina had after ages cooked tinde for Preeti...Preeti so hated eating tinde...naina recalled all her jokes on tinde...she recalled how Preeti use to say shaadi to ushi ladke se karugi jise tinde Na pasand ho... but listening to pandit Interview naina was taken into past and remembering past she just prepared tinde!!!

Preeti came she saw tinde were prepared but today without a word she ate tinde because even she wanted to relive the memories of past after Pandit interview!! Preeti always had beautiful carefree memories of past but her sister had bitter memories of past and she could sacrifice anything for her sister, hence when naina took the decision to shift Delhi for higher education, she joined her knowing her state and knowing her sister would need her!!! They Wer sister may b sister from another mother, but both knew each other better than they knew themselves!!

Preeti understood naina has seen the interview and hence this tinde came up after ages and naina understood Preeti eating silently means she has also seen the interview!!

Preeti got up, cleared all the utensils and planned to retire for bed as she was in hurray to go and read the book...but before going to bed she went near naina and spoke to her!!
Preeti- I knw you have got the book, have the courage to read it, the book answers your questions which are haunting you since past 8 yrs...A coin always has 2 sides, it is important to know his side story as well...u never gave me chance to mend things and enquire further this book is an opportunity to get things cleared!!! Listening to Pandit's interview gives me a feeling that may b we hurried coming to Delhi, we shall have waited for the answers!!!"

Naina:- We had given him a chance, he never turned up, he lost the chance because he never had any answers, he was wrong and there is no reason how whould he justify himself!!!"

Preeti:- "Do you need the answer to your question or you need justification for his doing????"

Naina looked into Preeti's eyes confused...she cud not understand what Preeti was saying...rather say she understood but she was not accepting what Preeti was saying!!!

Naina:- Placing a bet and breaking a heart, What would he justify in this??? Making a girl leave her own state her own family, how whould he justify this!!! Making me a heartless person who would never believe in love anymore how whould he justify this??? Making a topper of class a joke in front of people, how whould he justify this????

Preeti:- Are these justifications which are haunting you since past 8 yrs, do these justifications yet matter Naina??? Or you just need an answer to you question DID HE EVER LOVE YOU TRUELY????" Preeti spoke in anger she always thght her sister shd have handled this in a more mature way...but whatever it was he had done a mistake and hence Preeti never stopped supporting Naina!!!

Preeti:- I would suggest you to read the book, it will give you alteast justification if not answers!! It is high time naina 8 yrs is not a joke...u have to overcome ur past!!! This is just my suggestion, other wise it's ur choice...I am there for u always!!!

Naina looked at Preeti with a blank smile and both the sisters retired for the day!!!

Location:- Ahmedabad, year 2001

In Ahmedabad the news had been spread like fire the youngest CEO had been arrested because he tried to get physical with his secretary!!
Munna reached Ahmedabad to be with his friend to know the truth!!
In jail, Munna -" Sameer you need not worry, I will hire the best lawyers and get you out from here, just have Patience!!!
Sameer:- " History is repeating itself Munna, I placed the bet and made a joke of naina in school and now this world is making a joke out of me...I am being punished for my sins...for breaking my naina heart!!!

Munna:- Don't loose hope it is nothing like that these allegations are false similarly like the false allegations which naina has made in you due to her misunderstanding!! And my heart says this time you whould be out off all allegations!!!"

Munna left from there leaving sameer in his own world.Munna called up Pandit and informed him about the happening, Pandit was in shock, he was with Swati when munna called!!
Swati and Pandit got hold of the first flight to Ahmedabad and. landed in Ahmedabad...taking the feel of the fresh air...feeling that something is going to change now!!!

The paths were about to cross, all open dots were about to close!!
Munna , Pandit, Swati and Sameer all were in Ahmedabad, The place where the story started...finally circle was about to close, Was it really???.

This is it guyz!!! First part ends all the introduction ends and suspense begins!!!

Plz let me know how did this turn up???
Edited by Niakhush - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Wonderful update Nia... 👍🏼
It's a little sad to read that Naina and Sameer's misunderstanding continues for 8 years...!! But again good to read that each of them have their own support system...! And Sameer loves Naina - yoohoo!! 😳

Jaldi jaldi update karo next part... and make it longer please...!! We are all greedy souls!! 😃

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