Sameer--Naina OS -Sacred Hunger (16+) - Page 5

Minu Darling,

Originally posted by: AaishaM

😆 I have to study and here I am reading one OS after the other. Kya hoga mera😆

Anyway I loved it👏 The OS had everything. From eagerness of meeting after so long to jealousy to roothna Manana, everything showing their deep love for each other. Samaina's love is so pure and innocent and you incorporated it in the OS too

Ohhoho I can so relate to Naina catching Sameer and his gang watching po*n. I have been through this and I had the exact same reaction, chi tum ye sab kaise dekh sakte ho. Chi, chi ,chi 😆 Preeti is love❤️ aisi saali bhagwan har jija ko de😛

Coming to the hawt hawt vala part, I kept blushing throughout☺️ phone ki ghanti kyu Baja Di kyuuu😆

Kaash separation ke Baad ek aisa scene show me bhi mil jae to baat ban jae

This forum is fu of talented people. What writing skills you people possess, what imagination and creativity you people have👏 never stop writing ya.

PS: I was so lost while reading this ki bed se girte girte bachi😆

I don't know why but the like button is not working for me😕

Thank you Aaisha so much for the lovely note of appreciation.😃 Means a lot to me.😳 That scene of watching rated things so usual when you have friends who are asanskaari yet good at heart 😆 Happened many times with me..have caught several 😆 Glad that you loved it so much.😃

Originally posted by: -Aniisha-

Now this is my kinda story ☺️

What a beautiful OS Minu 😳 Im speechless at the sheer beauty of your writing. I think this would be my personal favorite of your works till now. I was blushing throughout while reading ☺️ "Let me check" was my fav part.

I absolutely loved reading this Minu 😊
Thanks for the PM

Thanks Ani for the appreciation 😃 Aww! Personal fav..So sweet of you 😳 Thanks for the encouragement that you pour in with your every reply.😃

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

HOT HOT MINU😉😆

And u did a great job minu..

Not overly vulgar but beautifully penned the hidden desires of lovers who were apart...

Though the start was hilarious 😆

Naina catching the trio watching ****😆

Very well done.

Thanks Di.😃 Feeling really happy with your review 😳 Glad you loved it.😃

Originally posted by: Violet_orchid

Amazing minu..loved it

Thank you dear for appreciation😃

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Minu Darling,

This is amazing...🤗

You impress more and more every time you write.

Their trembling lips wrote the poem of love...and their hearts were busy waiting in anticipation of the unknown.

Did you say Eros? No...it was Aphrodite herself who blessed them...

They, who were discovering the touch that would ignite their hunger, had started the first step of the waltz as new as a bud, and as old as time.

Love

Kshithi

Hi Kshiti! So glad to see your reply and review.Thank you for the kind words of appreciation 😳 Loved the beautiful lines about poem of love..Its making me blush ☺️ Thanks for the appreciation and encouragement.Means a lot to me..😳