Sameer-Naina TS: Fulfillment (Part 2 updated on Page 7)

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lizzb1987
Awesome post, you write sooo beautifully.

Thank you Payal... 😊

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: moumita04

Aww Sur... Office me padha...!! I hope nobody asked you why you are blushing..!! 😳

@Bold: Thank you so so much...!! You simply made my day...!! 😃😃 But, it isn't true that you cannot write like this... Your "Aag Barasti Hai - OS" is simply breathtaking and did make me feel all the tremors that Naina must have felt... 😳

@Red: Hahaa... Not a part 3 to this story... but I am contemplating about another situation that could take their relationship further... maybe an OS... 😉

Thanks a lot for your constant encouragement Sur...!! I am really looking forward to your college story..!! 😊

Na na darling...you are just being generous!! You are a class apart...u r my fav asanskari writer now 😉

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swaram

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

That was so sensuous yet so simply innocent of two young lovers just starting to explore intimacy and give in to their passion. I so love your writing! ❤️

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: swaram
That was so sensuous yet so simply innocent of two young lovers just starting to explore intimacy and give in to their passion. I so love your writing! ❤️

Hey Swaram! 😊 (I hope I can call you that, or else please let me know your name)

Thank you so much for appreciating this piece of work...

This one is very close to my heart as I really wanted to delve into their first exploration of intimacy... show how innocent Naina is yet learning to open up... 😳

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mishkatfanfrevr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

no words i read both parts .omggg..wait will write more after i come back to my senses😆

Edited by mishkatfanfrevr - 7 years ago

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: mishkatfanfrevr
no words i read both parts .omggg..wait will write more after i come back to my senses😆

Hahaha.. Thanks Mishy..!! 😃

I will look forward to read more, take your time! 😊

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Kshithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Moumita!!!

I don't know whether to hug you or scold you!!! 😃 I had just recovered from fever and now this!!!!

Loved reading it...

Your entire story is at one end and this line "I don't want to be saved" on the other end...you won me over with this dialog.

And Naina's transformation from a girl to a woman was well done...

Love

Kshithi

PS: Okay. fine.. you deserve a hug..😆🤗

Love

Kshithi

Edited by Muggle_Diaries - 7 years ago

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries
Moumita!!!
I don't know whether to hug you or scold you!!! 😃 I had just recovered from fever and now this!!!!

Loved reading it...

Your entire story is at one end and this line "I don't want to be saved" on the other end...you won me over with this dialog.

And Naina's transformation from a girl to a woman was well done...

Love
Kshithi

PS: Okay. fine.. you deserve a hug..😆🤗

Love
Kshithi

Oh Kshithi... You are back...!! 😃

So good to see you... and happy to know that you are fully recovered... 🤗

Yes, Sameer really doesn't want to be saved...!! Thanks a lot for the appreciation dear..!! Aur bahot stories hogi inbox me dheere dheere padhna... This was just the beginning..! 😳😳

Hugs right back at you... 🤗

Love,

Mou

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Azraa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#139

Just re-read this once again...
You truly are an amazing writer.
You have a way with words that is very hard to describe...
Well done once again

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Just re-read this once again...
You truly are an amazing writer.
You have a way with words that is very hard to describe...
Well done once again

Azraa dear... you made me so happy yaar...!! 🤗

You re-read and then took the time to comment again... Thank you so much...!! 😳😳