Sameer-Naina TS: Fulfillment (Part 2 updated on Page 7) - Page 14

Originally posted by: lizzb1987

Awesome post, you write sooo beautifully.

Originally posted by: moumita04

Aww Sur... Office me padha...!! I hope nobody asked you why you are blushing..!! 😳

@Bold: Thank you so so much...!! You simply made my day...!! 😃😃 But, it isn't true that you cannot write like this... Your "Aag Barasti Hai - OS" is simply breathtaking and did make me feel all the tremors that Naina must have felt... 😳

@Red: Hahaa... Not a part 3 to this story... but I am contemplating about another situation that could take their relationship further... maybe an OS... 😉

Thanks a lot for your constant encouragement Sur...!! I am really looking forward to your college story..!! 😊

Originally posted by: swaram

That was so sensuous yet so simply innocent of two young lovers just starting to explore intimacy and give in to their passion. I so love your writing! ❤️

Originally posted by: mishkatfanfrevr

no words i read both parts .omggg..wait will write more after i come back to my senses😆

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Moumita!!!

I don't know whether to hug you or scold you!!! 😃 I had just recovered from fever and now this!!!!

Loved reading it...

Your entire story is at one end and this line "I don't want to be saved" on the other end...you won me over with this dialog.

And Naina's transformation from a girl to a woman was well done...

Love

Kshithi

PS: Okay. fine.. you deserve a hug..😆🤗

Love

Kshithi

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Just re-read this once again...
You truly are an amazing writer.
You have a way with words that is very hard to describe...
Well done once again