OS: Kyunki - Page 4

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Amazing OS Surbhi 😃⭐️

Just hope this dream comes true but really show mein aisa kuchh nahi hone wala hai 😳

But atleast gotta read it through your pen and it was just what we all need it at present 😃👏

You made me emotional 😳

Thanks for the pm dear and do keep writing more 😃🤗

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

What an amazing piece of work Sur..

You captured Sameer's apathy towards his surroundings, his loneliness, his disnterest...and then that hope when he glimpses his Naina...then the crushing defeat when he realized that it is all a dream...

Beautiful...

And the end was well done...his dream literally came true...

Love

kshithi

Originally posted by: Angel2002

OMG this story was so amazing

I was disappointed when I read it was a dream but a big smile came on my face after reading that she really was there with her sameer

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

''Remember that wherever your heart is, there you will find your treasure''-Paul Coelho.

Loved this piece.Its all about magic and you beautifully encapsulated the essence of it in beautiful and appropriate words.👏👏

Sameer though dreamt of her he wanted it from his heart and there he found his treasure.😳 Loved how you incorporated Rohan in this.The whole of it was lit.

Keep coming with more and thanks for the PM.

With love-

Minu😳

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Aww dear ..thank you so much yaar!! Sach me can't see Sameer like this...he's broken...he's numb...like the VO said, Naina hoti to wo sambhal jata...

Aisa log kehte to hain vaise...can't really say!! Mujhe ya to sapne aate nai or aate hain to bade hi ajeeb hote hain...n thankfully wo ajeeb wale sach nai huye😆 I guess it has got something to do with your subconscious...as morning approaches, ur sleep tends to get less deep...ur brain starts becoming active...n maybe ur subconscious desires come to the fore in the form of a dream...n because it is something we may desperately want...it has chances to turn into reality...my theory😆 ande tamatar welcome

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

Beautiful OS
I can't tell you how happy you made me with the OS 😳
Beautifully penned like always 👏
Thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome os
so beautiful

Originally posted by: Niakhush

beautiful os...first u gave me a shock by bringing naina to delhi...that was so sweet...bt then u broke our hearts by making it a dream...bt kyuki subh k sapne saach hote n there should be a happy ending v again had naina... beautiful os!!!!