01.03.2018 ~ First phone call after confession

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First phone call after confession

Post first love confession, first phone call seems so at peace yet awkward, the silence also talks a lot in that call. Both knows that the other person is on the other side of the phone. Knowing that mere existence of the other makes the heart flutter and go jittery all along. Such is the situation of Samaina. They are lost in the thought of confession made to each other and savoring the moment recollection and can't say anything to each other, just lost in the moment. After the long silence Sameer breaks it.




S- Kuch bolo
N- Tum kuch bolo.
S- Nehi, tum kuch bolo
N- Kya kahu! Jo kehna tha woh toh keh diya 😳
S- Ek baar sunke maan nehi bhara. Tum dobara bolo na!
N- uhu..nehi. kuch baatein baas ek baar kahi jaati hai. Aur unhe dil mei sambhal kar rakh liya jata hai. Baar baar kehneki jarurat nehi padhti. Ab tum kuch kaho
S- Nehi. Naina pehle tum bolo.
N- Sameeer. Tum kaho na.
S- Naina, Kahi pehle tum, pehle tum mei raat na beet jaye!
N- Toh beet jaane do! Mei puri raat tumse aise hi baat kar sakti hu. 😳

(Yes they can spend all night like this without saying anything important. Yet it will not feel boring. Each meaningless word will be precious, making them smile and blush. 😳)

N- Waise ek baat kahu. Mujhe aisa kiyu lag raha hai ki tum mujhse kuch kehna chahte ho!
S- Haa! Kehna toh chahta hu.
N- Toh phir kaho na.

(How well she now knows Sameer. Without his saying, she could guess that he has something in mind to ask her. Sameer stands up with the phone and sits on the chair getting ready to ask Naina anxiously)

S- Naina...Mei tumse kuch poochna chahta hu.
N- Poocho
S- Kya tum mujhse
N- Haa, karti hu na tumse pyaar.❤️

(She is so easy with Sameer now to express her love for him. Before he could finish she said that , she loves him. Sameer is happy to hear that, but he has something else in mind)😉

S- Nehi nehi, mujhe tumse kuch aur poochna hai. Kya tum mujhe kaal mil sakti ho!
(He bites his tongue in anticipation of coming reaction from Naina 😆
But Naina replies normally not understanding his intention)

N- Haa, kaal hum school mei toh milenge hi.
S- School mei nehi. School jaane se pehle. Please Naina, mana maat karna
(Naina thinks and agrees)
N- Thik hai, mei tumhe kaal school ke pehle mandir mei milti hu.
(But Sameer remembers the Cow mother's pooch se chaata on him from last time and worried now. 🤣)
S- Nehi, nehi, mandir mei nehi. Waha toh bohot log hotei hai na!
N- Mei tumse akele mei milna chahta hu.
(Now, Naina is worried. )
N- Aa..akele mei kiyu. 😲

(Afraid in mind why he want's to meet me alone. Her breath got stuck for the moment)😳

S- Naina mei tumse akele mei milna chahta hu, kiyuki mei tumhe apni bike pe bitha kar ghumana chahta hu. Naina please mana maat karna. Warna mera dil toot jayega. Aur dus minute ki baat hai. Tum apni zindagi ke dus minute toh mujhe de hi sakti ho na. Kaal school jaane ke pehle law garden ke paas jo colony hai, waha milna. Waha se hum log hum law garden ki taraf jaayenge. Waha uss time koi bhi nehi hota. Aur bas 10 minute mei tumhe apni bike pe bithaunga, aur ghumaunga, aur uske baad tum school chali jaana...Naina, tum mere saath bike pe toh baith na chahti ho na! (He tries with last emotional words and it works)

N- Haa, lekin kisine dekh liya toh!

Naina's voice over- "Un dino ek ladki ka, ek ladke ki bike ki pichle seat pe baithna utni hi badi baat hoti thi, jitni ki aaj ...aaam...aaam...jitni badi baat aaj ki jamane mei koi ho hi nehi sakti. Haa. Un dino ladka ladki ek saath bike pe dikh jaye toh har koi maine pyaar kiya ka yeh dialogue jorur marta tha. Ek ladka aur ladki kabhi dost nehi ho sakte..."
(Toh, humne kab kaha ki yeh dono sirf dost hai😆)

N- Sameer, agar mere gharwalo ko pata chal gaya toh musibat aa jaegi.

S- Tum chinta maat karo. Haamei koi nehi dekhega. Naina, sirf dus minute ki baat hai.

(Oh really..Koi nehi dekhega..., he is so desperate to meet her, not worrying about anyone else coming there. 😆 But Naina now trusts him enough to agree to such offers.👍🏼 😛 )

N- Pakka waha koi nehi hoga na!

S- Haa, pakka koi nehi hoga. Ab toh aaogi na!

N- Thik hai, mei ghar se saare 6 baaje niklungi, aur poune 7 baaje tumhe waha mil jaungi.. aab phone rakho.

S- Naina phone rakhne se pehle I love you bolo na! 😛

(She is again getting laal as tamatar at this cute request.)

N- Sameer, phone rakho. ☺️

(But adamant sameer)

S- Naina!! I love you bolo na pehle.

N- Papa aa gaye... phone rakho

S- Naina, suno...😔

(But she cuts the phone and both smiles anticipating the coming bike ride) 😃

***** I am no more talking about bike ride today. All the threads are going red over the cutest bike ride jo hua bhi hai aur nehi bhi hua hai. I feel no more need to gush over that here. 😆
Just sharing some caps from yesterday



Darn the cutest scene ever
She moving towards him,And him feeling her presence was adorable
Samaina being the most iconic pair ever



How, adorably she was saying sorry, and how Samaina's heart sank.


There aren't just seven wonders of the world
All can count these ajoobe's too
These kids🤣

And thank you all again for making my birthday so special yesterday here in the forum. Love you. 🤗

Laizu ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Laizu thanks so much for posting the dialogues along with analysis and caps.

It was a lovely episode and bike ride was 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The mind can calculate, but the spirit yearns, and the heart knows what the heart knows..-Stephen King
This is what summed for me the whole phone convo.

Their spirits yearned to be with each other and they are ready to even spend the whole night just listening to the meaningful silences of each other.
Her heart knew there was something more which he wanted to ask..She made him comfortable to put the demand.Loved the shot there.
Though they have confessed still they have to come to terms with each other's rules and principles.
He a mostly a free bird and she a caged bird...both need balance to fly together.And now onder why the bike scene was just a telepathy and beautiful imagination than a reality.

His mind calculated the reactions from her,the careful planning of 10 minutes while her mind too joined in the plan.The sneaking out though ended on a sorry note--but they also know this is just the beginning.

Loved how you put each dialogue of the phone convo.Thank you for that effort and lovely analysis.👏

With love-
Minu.😳
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you Laizu for the caps and the dialogues 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Laizu for the post.. one of my fav episodes.. beautiful phone conversation n a beautiful imaginative bike ride .. Randeep n Ashi were brilliant
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Laizu! Another lovely post😳
Reading those dialogues makes me feel like I'm watching the episode with you! Really appreciate your patience to write all those lovely dialogues in your post!

Coming to the episode, what to say about these love struck crazy Samaina! That scene had awesome feels😳 Sameer wants Naina to say ILU again and like Naina quoted that some special words are said only once & you have to save it! I loved that dialogue! But our hero is still adamant and requests her to say it! Naina didn't give in! Sameer is getting desperate in love😉

And bike ride! The way they imagined it was too cute! It was clear that it won't happen after seeing them imagining so much! Poor souls, Rakesh spoiled everything! Munna and Pandit wete very funny! And also they are pushing him to touch her hand which he had been trying for a long time! I hope the touch happens in today's episode itself!

Keep writing Laizu 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you Infofan
canapoem
anjalii123
kb_always_96

for loving my post. 😃

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@ TereLiyeMINU - Minu, I see you another day also posted RES but didn't update.😔
Is it going to be like that this time also! 😆

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@ kb_always_96 - Abhi you said, "Reading those dialogues makes me feel like I'm watching the episode with you!", and that's the reason I post those dialogues here. So, that I can watch the episodes with you.😛 I watch alone at home. 😔

My sister ffkhan (Farzana) has started watching it. Almost reached Mount Abu trip at a go. But till she reaches the latest episode I'll have only you all to share my feelings about episodes. 😳

and you said " I hope the touch happens in today's episode itself!"
I doubt will it happen today, so soon. I think at least it will go to next week.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Unresd 😃 Sorry Laizu! for that resd thing..It was not intentional..Trust me.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a post dear...ur posts always makes us speechless...u describe everything so well k fir Kuch bachta hi nahi!!!
What an episode yr...dreamy bike ride cn also b special never thght...after such a ride nobdy whd complaint if v dint get an actual one!!!
Munna pandit are really the 8 ajoobas...every character is written wonderfully bt munna and Pandit character is written extraordinarily...n Sanjay n Raghav act more than extraordinaryly!!!

This is the power of our CVS v in each episode gv a kudos to them!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

The mind can calculate, but the spirit yearns, and the heart knows what the heart knows..-Stephen King

This is what summed for me the whole phone convo.

Their spirits yearned to be with each other and they are ready to even spend the whole night just listening to the meaningful silences of each other.
Her heart knew there was something more which he wanted to ask..She made him comfortable to put the demand.Loved the shot there.
Though they have confessed still they have to come to terms with each other's rules and principles.
He a mostly a free bird and she a caged bird...both need balance to fly together.And no wonder why the bike scene was just a telepathy and beautiful imagination than a reality.

His mind calculated the reactions from her,the careful planning of 10 minutes while her mind too joined in the plan.The sneaking out though ended on a sorry note--but they also know this is just the beginning.

Loved how you put each dialogue of the phone convo.Thank you for that effort and lovely analysis.👏

With love-
Minu.😳



Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Unresd 😃 Sorry Laizu! for that resd thing..It was not intentional..Trust me.😊



It's Ok dear. I understood. Sometimes we forget in hurry. 😊

Thank you for coming up with such a lovely analysis comment. Your literary analysis I always love. ❤️
The Stephen King quote is awesome and how well you put it here. 👏
And you are right the confession does not make them aware of all rules and restrictions put for each other. They are yet to explore themselves.
That's why Sameer calculated well before asking her for bike ride, and it worked well. She agreed. 😳
In the beautiful love ride journey lets see what comes next and let them explore with all possibilities. 👍🏼

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