Sameer Naina new FF : You are mine forever. Part 1 updated on pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rakesh sir itte polite..phir to padhna pdega😆
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Rakesh sir itte polite..phir to padhna pdega😆

Continue soon


Ha ha..
Father's are the best you know..so wanted to make his character good..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good Start Lakku.
Looking forward to the story.

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start dear.. u write well.. keep writing. Waiting 4 next..
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Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Good Start Lakku.

Looking forward to the story.

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Kshithi


thank you dear..
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Originally posted by: dreamyp

Nice start dear.. u write well.. keep writing. Waiting 4 next..


Thank u dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely start Dear...!N a gud plot too..Pls update soon
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Part 1-- Sameer and Naina meet each other

Nurse : Doctor , aap apne wife se mil sakte ho.

Rakesh : Thank you .. looking at priti.. chalo beta mumma se milte hai..

PRiti was so excited to see her sister .. they both walked hurriedly to pooja.. (rakesh's wife_)

Rakesh : Thank you so much pooja.. muje tumne is duniya ki sabse Khushi dedi.. I became father once again. Priti got her younger sister.

Pooja was crying.. she was so happy to see her baby.. they all had a family hug..

Priti : Mumma.. meine baby ka naam naina rakha hai.. acha hai na ma?

Pooja : Haa beta.. bahut acha naam hai..

Meanwhile, Anand, bela and their baby arrives to hospital.

(Rakesh is very successful doctor in Ahmedabad. He is a well known neurologist. Pooja his wife, is house wife who loves cooking very much.. Rakesh has a younger brother Anand and he is married to Bela. Just 5 months back they had a girl baby and she is swati.)

They all get delighted ..

14 years later.

Priti ,Naina and swati have grown up.. Naina is now 15 years and she has completed her 10th std board exams. Her school is closed for vacation. Naina and swati are in the same class and they are the best friends.

Priti is studying in an engineering college in another city .

(its 5pm.. landline rings..)

Pooja : Naina .. phone utao.. priti ka hoga..

Naina : haa maa..

NAina takes up the phone.. hello priti di..

PRiti : Naina.. kaise ho tum?

Naina : Mein teek ho didi.. aap kab aoge.. mein aap ko bahut miss karti hoon..

PRiti : Mera bi chutti jaldi start hojayega.. mein jaldi ajungi.. mein bi tumko bahut miss karti hoon..

Naina starts crying..

Naina priti and swati are very close. They love each other so much.. When priti had gone to join for her engineering course, naina could not bear it. Since swati was there she was able to manage herself.

Priti : Naina tum mat ro.. mein jaldi aa jaungu..

(they start chit chatting about their school and college life)

Pooja to naina : kitni baate karogi.. muje bi bat karne do..

Naina : haa haa teek hai..mein swati ke ghar jarahi hoon.. priti di.. meine mumma ko phone de rahi hoon.. aap jaldi ajao.. bye..

PRiti : ok naina.. tum aapna dyan rakna.. bye..

Naina every Monday goes to temple. Swati always accompanies her.

Nainas and swatis home are nearby..

Naina : swati, swati.. jaldi se tayyar hojao...

She sees swati.. she is lying in bed..

Are swati tume kya hua?

Swati : mera tabiyat teek nahi hai naina.. mein thodi aram karti hoon..

Naina touches her.. her body is very hot..

Naina : tumhe to bukar hai..

Swati : meine dawayi ka li he.. thoda rest karti hoon..

Naina : tum ache se dhyan rakhna ...aram karo.. mein mandir ke baad ati hoon firse..

She gets sad that she needs to go alone..


Naina : Mumma , mein mandir ja rahi hoon. Aaj swati nahi hai.. uski tabiyat teek nahi hai. Mein akele ja rahi hoon..

Mumma : Teek hai beta , dhyan se. Jaldi ajana..der mat karna. Papa ko bahut chinta hogi..tumhe to pata hai na.. tumhare papa kitna pareshan hote hai.. tumse kitna pyar karte hai..

Naina : haa mumma.. muje sab pata hai.. aap tension mat lo.. mein jaldi ajaungu..

Nain has worn a pink color churidar.

Naina reaches the template. she does pooja to god, and takes the prasad and leaves to home..

When she starts walking to home, she needs to cross one small bridge and slowly it starts drizzling and it becomes darker. She gets scared.

Few boys start coming from the opposite side of the bridge. They make comment. and try to touch her.

Just then one guy comes with yellow color shirt and maroon pant comes in his bullet bike just like salmaan khan.and he is Sameer Maheshwari .

He sees the boys and understands the situation.

He gets down the bike in hero style.

Sameer : kya karahe ho tum log..sharam nahi aata.. aise ladki ko chedte hue. Ha?..

One of the boys: tumhari problem kya hai.. tumse matlab hum jo chahe karenge .and they all start laughing and try to take Naina's dupatta.

Sameer : he holds the guys wrist and just breaks it down.

Naina gets shocked seeing this. she just gazes into his eyes and she is lost.

Meanwhile Sameer fights with other guys..

Those boys runs away.

Sameer to Naina (both of them don't know each other's names yet) : tum teek ho?

Naina : Haa. Thank you so much muje in gundon se bachane ke liye..

Waise aap ka naam kya hai?

Sameer : I am Sameer Maheshwari.. aur tumhara?

Naina : I am naina agarwal.. she gives her hand..

They both handshake..

As soon as their hands touch each other, they both gets lost in each other's eyes.

Suddenly big thunder and lightning comes.

She holds Sameers hand more tight..

Sameer : Naina.. kya hua.. daro mat.. meine tumhe ghar chod deta hoon?

Naina : Nahi mein chali jaungi..

Sameer : Nahi.. dekho .. zor se barsaat hone wali hai.. mein tume jaldi ghar chod deta hoon.. agar fir se

gunde agayeto?

Naina : Teek hai Sameer..

Sameer sits in the bike and with eyes asks her to sit in bike.

Naina feels a bit unconformable .. till now she has not gone in bike apart from her father's

Sameer : Kya hua naina.. chinta mat karo.. aram se baito.. mein jaldi tume ghar chod dunga..

Naina just looks at sameer's eyes..

(to be continued...)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Cute first part...i'm elated to read Rakesh being a loving father...seems so unbelievable😉😆
Naina and Sam's first meeting was a full bollywood movie style meeting...loved it😃👏

Thanks for the pm dear...loved reading you😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update... A different story... Waise Rakesh ko aise imagine karna bhi mushkil hai😆

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