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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

Superb Zulekha... what a beautiful piece of writing... I recalled that special track ... I loved to read about pepsi cola and gold spot... yaadein fir taaza ho gayi😃👏

Great job dear... keep writing... and thanks for the pm 😃

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Laizu Khan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Very well written. Loved it. 👍🏼

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Abhinaya_Abhi

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Posted: 7 years ago

wow!! Loved each and every line👏

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May

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Posted: 7 years ago

Lovely piece of writing Zulekha!

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

Haaye...Sameer wo jo Naina ke chehre pe halki halki muskaan thi na...wo Vanasthali na jakar tumhare pass rehne, tumhe padhane ke liye hi thi...tumhare liye thi...kyunki use to tumse ishq ho gaya hai...tumhe jald hi pata chalega...

Loved how Sameer captured this observation in his diary...any guy would have noticed that.

I was about to point out the chronological sequence, but you already posted in the PS. Good one...waiting for more excerpts!

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