New FF: tum meri ho part 16 (pg 53) April 30 updated; no pms for this - Page 37

Originally posted by: Aruna.Ladva

Very nice updat... I am addicted to ur updates!

Please try and update soon, hard to wait for it.

Regards

Badhiya update. Balcony scene was superb ❤️

Sameer The Tease Maheshwari .. sab past hai bande ko ke apni bandi ko kis tarhan se Kia Karna hai .. finally you updated .. and no doubt it was a beautiful update .. hahaha the way naina was hiding behind Swati and Sameer was teasing her .. Swati moving from between .. hayeee .. too good and their lovely scene .. on point .. <3 loved it .. waiting for next part to know what made him angry young man ..

Originally posted by: Veda1125

Badhiya update. Balcony scene was superb ❤️

Keep updating!!!

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Sameer The Tease Maheshwari .. sab past hai bande ko ke apni bandi ko kis tarhan se Kia Karna hai .. finally you updated .. and no doubt it was a beautiful update .. hahaha the way naina was hiding behind Swati and Sameer was teasing her .. Swati moving from between .. hayeee .. too good and their lovely scene .. on point .. <3 loved it .. waiting for next part to know what made him angry young man ..

Thank you for loving the story😃 yes angry young man can be dangerous, we will find out about Sameer next chapter lol😆

First of all, I am so sorry that I did not comment on the last part. Needless to say, it was truly amazing. So hot and passionate!! I love when you write romantic scenes. They are simply amazing and sometimes words fall short for compliments.

Part 15 was too good. There are certain things that I really really love about it. The naughtiness of Sameer is too adorable and irresistible at the same time. He respects Naina's wishes yet has so much confidence in himself that he will still get his way. Like he promised Naina he will stay away from her but he knows she can't stay away. He knows he will win. I just loved the scene when she looks down from the balcony and Sameer is staring at her standing by his bike. At this point, I am thinking, where can I find a Sameer? Unfortunately, only in my dreams lol. I loved the way he said, "Jab mujse door nahin reh sakti, to koshish kyun karti ho. My heart literally fluttered and fell in love with Sameer. O bai!!!! I am so dead. Lol.

Sameer wanting to get married and Naina pacifying him. This scene you were very true to their personalities from the show. Sameer is aggressive and impatient, and acts in haste and Naina is calm, thinks multiple times before making a decision, and level-headed. Loved the way he asked her for kissey everyday lol. Too cute!!!

Can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon as I can't wait to find out what you have in store for us next. Your story is one of the ones I eagerly wait for you to update and then when you do, I save it to read at night when I am in bed so I can read it peacefully and without any disturbances. It's kind of like a stress reliever and enjoyment mixed in one. I truly enjoy reading your writing. Keep writing and sharing your wonderful imagination with us. I know you writers work very hard to write these stories for us to enjoy. So thank you so much for all the hard work and effort you put in in writing and posting for all of us to read. I know there are so many silent members. Even though they don't comment or sometimes don't hit like, but I am very sure they thoroughly enjoy reading everyone's writing.

Originally posted by: Kiran1018

First of all, I am so sorry that I did not comment on the last part. Needless to say, it was truly amazing. So hot and passionate!! I love when you write romantic scenes. They are simply amazing and sometimes words fall short for compliments.

Part 15 was too good. There are certain things that I really really love about it. The naughtiness of Sameer is too adorable and irresistible at the same time. He respects Naina's wishes yet has so much confidence in himself that he will still get his way. Like he promised Naina he will stay away from her but he knows she can't stay away. He knows he will win. I just loved the scene when she looks down from the balcony and Sameer is staring at her standing by his bike. At this point, I am thinking, where can I find a Sameer? Unfortunately, only in my dreams lol. I loved the way he said, "Jab mujse door nahin reh sakti, to koshish kyun karti ho. My heart literally fluttered and fell in love with Sameer. O bai!!!! I am so dead. Lol.

Sameer wanting to get married and Naina pacifying him. This scene you were very true to their personalities from the show. Sameer is aggressive and impatient, and acts in haste and Naina is calm, thinks multiple times before making a decision, and level-headed. Loved the way he asked her for kissey everyday lol. Too cute!!!

Can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon as I can't wait to find out what you have in store for us next. Your story is one of the ones I eagerly wait for you to update and then when you do, I save it to read at night when I am in bed so I can read it peacefully and without any disturbances. It's kind of like a stress reliever and enjoyment mixed in one. I truly enjoy reading your writing. Keep writing and sharing your wonderful imagination with us. I know you writers work very hard to write these stories for us to enjoy. So thank you so much for all the hard work and effort you put in in writing and posting for all of us to read. I know there are so many silent members. Even though they don't comment or sometimes don't hit like, but I am very sure they thoroughly enjoy reading everyone's writing.

awww Thank you so much Kiran for such a wonderful comment. Your comment always makes my day. Writing is my stress buster, and reading all of your guys's comments, cheers up my mood whenever I am down. So thank you so much for commenting. And so glad you enjoying the story so much😃

Originally posted by: Uv78

Update soon...

Will try my best to update soon dear.

Hey guys. I know I didn't update from long time. I am very busy at work...Leave in your comments, likes etc...this may be my last part as its very busy at work...

Part 16

Next day, all were back in school. All classes were basically review classes for all. As usual all were busy studying. After few hours, it was lunch time, and all students went out to the ground and so did Sameer and Naina.

It was a new day, a beautiful sunny day. Sameer was busy playing with his boys. And Naina was busy playing with her girls. They were both fooling around with their corresponding friends.

When Naina was busy with Swathi and Preeti, just than a guy came upto her. A tall, slim, and well groomed fellow. He started talking to Naina. Preeti and Swathi excused themselves, and left from there to get some water. Naina continued talking to the guy. She was laughing and talking away. Both were laughing away together like anything, as if he had cracked some joke, and Naina couldn't control her laughter. He held his hand out as if asking for a high-five from her, and she high-fived him, and they just kept giggling, and smiling.

Sameer's eye suddenly fell in the direction of Naina. He saw some guy with her, and she was so comfortable with him. She was smiling, and laughing, and her hand was in his hand. Sameer first glared at both of their faces, and than at their hands. And he noticed that she was not doing anything to remove her hand from that guy's hand. Sameer was boiling in anger. As the seconds passed, Sameer's anger was growing seeing them laughing away.

As nice and as loving as Sameer was, he couldn't fathom the idea of another guy holding his Naina's hand. Not even for a minute. And here he was seeing Naina completely lost in conversation with this guy, that she even failed to realize that they were holding hands.

Munna saw the anger on Sameer's face, and placed his hand on his shoulder.
Munna: kya hua yaar, itna gusse se kisko dekh raha hai?
Sameer greeted his teeth, and didn't respond, and just kept starring in direction of Naina.
Munna shook him.
Munna: kya hua yaar, kooch toh bol...
Than he looked in the direction where Sameer was looking, and noticed Naina and some guy comfortably talking to each other. He understood why Sameer looked so angry.

Munna: Sameer shant hoja. dekh hum school mein hai...koi scene create mat kardena.
Sameer didn't pay a hid to what Munna was saying, and just marched to where Naina and that guy were.

And he just literally walked from between them in such a way that their hands separated. Naina and the guy were surprised, and when Naina looked to who it was, she noticed Sameer leaving from there, followed by Munna after him trying to stop it.

Naina felt that something was up but, she didn't go after him as she thought may be something happened between Sameer and Munna. She failed to realize the real reason for his behavior.

After talking to that guy, Naina went into the school building. There was still half an hour left in the break to finish. As she was approaching the water cooler, she felt a hard pull on her hand, and she was pulled inside a small store room. The person who pulled her in closed the door, and covered her mouth with his hand as Naina was about to scream.

As her eyes adjusted to the darkness in the room, she realized that it was Sameer that had pulled her in.

He removed his hand from her mouth, and caged her with his arms on the wall. Naina looked in his eyes, and was slightly taken a back with the anger in his eyes.

Naina: yeh sab kya hai Sameer? hum school mein hai, tum aise kaise mujhe andar khich sakte ho?
Sameer (in his furious avatar, looking right into her eyes): accha, mein tumhe aise nahin khich sakta...toh woh kya tha joh tum kar rahi thi bahar? haan???
Naina (confused): kya kar rahi thi mein Sameer?
Sameer: yeh tum mujhe se pooch rahi ho?
Naina: ab tumse nahin toh kisse poochun?
Sameer: listen Naina, ek baat tum gaanth bandhlo...koi tumhare paas aaye, tumhe chooye, is baat ko mein kabhi bardaasht nahin karunga.
Naina: par Sameer...
Putting his hand up to stop her from speaking.
Sameer: agar agli baar tumhe kisi se is tarah baat karte hue dekha, toh mein gusse mein kya kar bethun, uska tum andaaza bhi nahin laga sakti...
Naina: par sameer, meri baat toh suno...
Sameer: bas bahot ho gaya. ab ek aur word bhi nahin...agar meine kisi bhi ladke koh tumhare aas paas bhi dekha, aise haath mein haath daale toh mein sab bhoool jaunga ki kon aas paas hai, aur fir woh hoga joh Sameer Maheshwari chahta hai...

and he left from there in his angry form.

Naina couldn't understand why he was reacting that way.

Naina(mumbling to herself): yeh Sameer ko ho kya gaya hai? yeh aise kyon behave kar raha hai...matlab ab mein kisi se baat bhi karun, toh bhi isse problem hai? matlab has hai yaar, meri baat bhi nahin suni, aur itna sab kooch suna ke chala gaya...chalo koi baat nahin...jab shant hoga tab pooch lungi...


She left from there.

In the evening, when the school got over, all were leaving from the front gate one after another. As Sameer exited the school building to go to the Bike parking area, he again noticed Naina with the same guy.

Again both of them were laughing and talking. And as the guy was about to leave, he did a half hug to Naina, and left. Naina waved him good bye, and smiled. She didn't realize again that Sameer was standing a little distance away from her, and was observing everything and burning in anger.

She just walked out the building out the school gates. She didn't bring her bike that day, and she decided to walk. Preety and Swathi had stayed behind for some work. So she had to walk alone.

Soon after she started walking, she felt the whole road was deserted. But still she continued walking. After a little while, she saw a bike stopped in front of her. She realized it was Sameer. He looked towards her, still having the same anger in his eyes. This time around for some weird reason, she felt a little scared of him.

She looked toward him, and he signalled her with his eyes to sit on his bike. She looked away and started walking. He moved forward with his bike, and stopped right in front of her.

Sameer (angrily): betho...
She didn't budge, and folded her arms looking away from him.
Sameer parked his bike, and approached her. He grabbed her hand, and took her to his bike and made her sit.

Naina: Sameer mujhe chodo, koi dekh lega...mujhe ghar jana hai...
Sameer: choop chaap betho...

Naina tried to resist so, he grabbed her hand and lifted her up, and made her sit in front of him, and he sat behind her, and drove off. His both hands were encircling her, and his face was very close to her ear. She could feel his warm breath on her neck. This closeness and his anger was unsettling her. Sameer didn't look her way, and just focused on the road. While she just casted her eyes down, and just shook from the proximity. Her little mind couldn't understand why he was behaving this way.

Soon the bike stopped in front of Sameer's home. Sameer got off, and Naina breathed a sigh of relief. She looked around, and noticed that he didn't bring her to her house but, to his.

Naina: Sameer yeh kya hai, tum mujhe yahaan kyon laye ho. Mujhe ghar jana hai. Sab pareshan ho rahe honge.

Sameer: choop chaap andar chalo

Naina (adamant, not willing to get off his bike): nahin utrungi. Mujhe ghar jana hai...bahot ho gaya ab. Mujhe ghar jana hai.

Sameer got further infuriated. As it is he was mad about seeing that guy with Naina, and being all close with her. And here she was not listening to him further, making him angry even further.

Sameer (in super angry tone, and fire spitting out of his eyes): chalo warna, sabke saamne utha ke leke jaunga...

And he grabbed her hand, and just took her inside the house without listening to anything she had to say.

Naina struggled to get her hand out of his but, he just didn't let go.

Finally they reached inside the house, and he brought her in. And went on to close the door.

Naina: yeh kya badtameezi hai Sameer? Koi aise karta hai kya?

Sameer: tumhe yeh badtameezi lagti hai?

Naina: haan, toh isse aur kya kahenge?

Sameer: mere haath pakadne se mein badtameez ho jata hoon...aur who kyat ha joh who ladka kar raha tha haan? (he grabbed her by her arms)

Naina: kon ladka Sameer? Aur yeh tum kya bakwaa kar rahe ho?

Sameer: who ladka kon tha? Joh tumhe haath laga ke has has ke baatein kar raha tha...uski himmat kaise hui tumhe haath lagane ki?

Naina: konsa ladka? Meine kisi ladke se aise baat nahin kari...

Sameer: jooth mat bolo Naina, meine apni aankho se dekha hai...

Naina: par Sameer...

Sameer: uski himaat kaise hui tumhe haath lagane ki? Aur tumne use roka bhi nahin?

Naina: kya bakwaas kar rahe ho Sameer?

Sameer: mein bakwaas kar raha hoon (eyes spitting fire), mein?

Naina: haan haan tum? Tum aise kaise baat kar sakte ho mujhse?

Sameer: mein aise kaise baat kar sakta hoon? Mein? (moving away from her, rubbing his hands in anger)...look Naina, tumhe koi aur dekhe, tumhe koi aur choove, tumpe koi aur hak jaataye, yeh mein kabhi bardaast nahin karungaa...(grabbing her hand again) samjhi tum??

Naina: chodo mujhe Sameer...

Sameer: nahin chodunga...tumhe choone ka, tumse pyaar karneka, tumhe dekhe ka haq sirf mera hai...

Naina lost her cool now...

Naina: kis haq ki baat kar rahe ho tum Sameer? Mein koi tumhari biwi nahin hoon...bina soche samjhe kooch bhi bole jaa rahe ho...

Sameer (got further angry); theek kahaa tumne, tum meri biwi nahin ho...

He looked around, here and there...anger dripping from his eyes...and he stepped away for few minutes. He came back with something tightly enclosed in his fist.

He suddenly came close to Naina, and rubbed something on her head. Naina was shocked.

Her eyes wide open, her mouth formed an O. She couldn't believe what Sameer just did.

Sameer applied Sindoor to her maang. (The cameras were rotating in circle, a fast music was playing in the background...mohabbat, mohabbat, mohabbat)...

Sameer looked at her face, and than at her maang.

Naina couldn't comprehend what just happened...she couldn't understand what Sameer just did...She always waited for this moment but, she never thought that he would do this. Anger got the best of Sameer. He couldn't imagine losing her to anyone else. So he decided to mark her as his forever.

Sameer: is haq se...tum sirf meri ho...sirf meri...samjhi tum...sirf meri...tumhe choone ka, tumhe pyaar karne ka, tumhe dekhne ka...tumpe haq jatane ka haq sirf mera hai...sirf mera...tumhare pati ka...sirf Sameer Maheshwari ka...

Tears started dropping from Naina's eyes. Sameer grabbed her face with both his hands, and wiped her tears. She fell to the floor, almost at his feet, crying...

Naina: yeh kya kar diya tumne Sameer? (wheeping horribly)

He got down on his knees and faced her...and tried to wipe her tears...

Naina: choona mat mujhe...koi aise karta hai kya???? Who mera cousin tha Sameer, meri mosi ka ladka...tum aise kaise kar sakte ho?

Sameer realizing the truth felt like an idiot.

Sameer: sorry Naina...lekin

Naina: lekin kya Sameer? Tumhe koi andaza bhi hai ki tumne gusse mein kya kar diya hai? Aur logo ko pata chalega toh kya sochenge?

Sameer got up from his spot.

Sameer: mein manta hoon ki meine over react kiyaa...lekin Naina...mujhe nahin lagta meine kooch galat kiya hai...

Naina got up from her spot and wiped her tears.

Naina: Sameer tum samajh bhi rahe ho tum kya keh rahe ho?

Sameer: haan, mujhe pata hai mein kya keh aur kar raha hoon?

Naina (frustrated): arghhh...Sameer tum nahin samajh rahe ho, and she marched to leave out the door...but Sameer grabbed her hand...

She looked in his direction angrily.

Sameer: mujhe nahin lagta joh mein kiya usmein kooch galat hai...yeh aaj nahin toh kal hona hi tha...

Naina: bas Sameer ab bas karo...

He pulled her closer to him...and encircled her in his arms closer to him...

Naina: chodo mujhe...

Sameer: nahin chodunga...mujhe nahin lagta meine joh kiya woh galat tha...tum meri ho, aur tumhi ne toh poocha tha ki konse haq se mein tumhe who sab keh raha hoon...toh joh ab tak hamare dil mein tha, meine sirf usko final kar diya...tumhe hamesha ke liye mera banake...

Naina struggled to get out of his grip...

Naina (angry): Sameer tum pagal ho gaye ho...chodo mujhe aur jane do...

She pushed him...

As she was leaving out the door...

Sameer: Naina Sameer Maheshwari (she stopped in her tracks) ...tum jitna bhagna hai bhaglo...lekin ab tum hamesha hamesha ke liye meri ban gayi ho...sirf meri...aaj nahin toh kal, tumhe mere paas hi aana hoga...and he winked and smooched in the air towards her...

Naina got shocked, and nervous and ran away from there...

Ok guys, leave in your comments, likes etc. I know its after long time and it is not a very long update but, i hope it lives upto the mark :)

Ridz

Excellent update. Loved the angry and possessive Sameer.