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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Sanjana..I came across your story in wattpad and then finally found you in IF😃
Do update as soon as your exam finishes!
This story is too good and you have left it at an interesting point..
Love,
Shreya
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
SO so so sorry people. Its been a LOONG time I know. Just been busy with life. I am not abandoning this story it's too close to my heart. I will try to update more frequently from now on. But for now, here is part 7:

PART 7:


The lunch break ended and all the students made their way back to the classroom. Sameer and his boys followed the trio of Naina, Swati and Prem, Sameer glaring daggers at Prem all the while.

Munna: Kasam se, iss Prem ko maza to chakhaana hi padega. Saala ladkiyon ko chodhta hi nahi.

Pandit: Munna, tu sikhayega sabak? Kadh dekha hai uska? Do second mein masal ke rakh dega.

Sameer: Haath to lagaa ke dikhaaye.

Munna: Arre Kadh-vadh ko maar goli. Apna Sameer hai na. Humaare saamne koi tik ke to dikhaaye.

As they were making their way into the classroom, they saw Rakesh Sir entering the class. The boys looked at him in surprise.

Pandit: Arre yaar, ye period to Sanskriti teacher ka tha na? Ye Librarian yahan pe kya kar raha hai?

Munna: Abbe Sanskriti teacher to aaj aayi hi nahi, main to bhool hi gaya tha. Gaye hum sab. Lagta hai Sanskriti teacher ki jagah ye vala period Rakesh Sir lagaayenge. Sun, Sameer, yahan se chalte hain. Acha hua abhi tak hum class mein nahi gaye the, abhi khisak lete hain.

Munna tried to pull Sameer backwards, but Sameer stood rooted to the spot. Naina and Swati were already in the room. And so was Prem.

Sameer: Nahi Munna, andar Naina aur Prem dono hain. aur Sanskriti teacher nahi hai to uss badbole Prem ko e kaur mauka mil jaayega. Hum iss class mein jaa rahe hain.

Pandit: arre of Naina ke Aashiq, tu bhool raha hai ke vo daanav teri Naina ka baap bhi hai. Uske saamne Prem kuch nahi kar sakta aur Naina bhi koi badhaava nahi degi. Chal abhi yahan se. Andar jaayenge to khaa-ma-khaa beizati hi hogi.

Sameer: Nahi Pandit. Main ye chance nahi le sakta. Tum dono ko nahi aana to mat aao, main to jaa raha hoon.

Munna and Pandit exchanged a glance.

Pandit: Ye humein bhi marvaayega.

Munna: Ab dost ko akele khaayi mein koodhne to nahi de sakte. Chal Pandat.

The trio made their way into the classroom and took their seats.

Rakesh: Aa gaye teenon nikamme. Tum teenon ka yahan aane ka matlab nahi samajh aata mujhe. Rayees baap ke bigre huye bache. Na to khud kuch seekhna chahte hain, aur na hi auron ko seekhne dete hain.

Rakesh Sir's continuous taunts got under the skin of all three of them. Munna almost had gotten up from his seat to back-answer but Sameer held him down. Not as a sign of defeat but just as a sign of respect. And of course, also for Naina. It would not bode well with her if he insulted her father. Prem observed this interaction with a lot of interest. He knew there was some story going on here, as Sameer's focused attention on Naina had not escaped his notice. He had tried to talk to her during lunch but Naina had ignored him totally. And now, Naina's father was taunting him and his friends. Weird. Prem internally praised Sameer for his patience. If someone had spoken to him or his friends that way, he would have blasted. He'd seen Munna start to get up, and Sameer hold him back. He saw the way Sameer's hands fisted in restraint and the amount of energy it took for him to stay seated. He wondered what was going on but it was not his business and so he let it go. Naina too, was sitting with her head bent. Why did her father always have to say things to Sameer? She didn't like him anymore, but that was a different matter. Why did her father always have to be so rude and mean to him? Couldn't he just let it go? The thoughts plagued Naina but there was nothing she could do. She wished she could just erase the chapter of Sameer from her life, but unfortunately that was not possible. She'd just have to deal with it. She was brought back to the reality with the sound of Prem's voice.

Prem had stood up from his seat and went to Rakesh. Naina held her breath wondering what was going on. She wanted to stop Prem. Her father was very unpredictable, god knows what he would say to Prem. Prem bent down and touched Rakesh's feet and Rakesh looked at him in surprise.

Prem: Namaste Sir, mera naam Prem hai. Main aaj hi school mein naya aaya hoon.

The entire class waited for Rakesh's sharp comeback. Prem was a sweet guy, and no one really wanted him to face Rakesh's wrath, except three people who you could probably guess- Sameer, Munna and Pandit. They looked at the scene in front of them with a hint of a smirk on their faces, waiting for Rakesh to spew out some venom. But to everyone's shock, Rakesh patted Prem on the back, good-naturedly, and SMILED. It would be an understatement to say that the entire class' mouth dropped open. RAKESH AGGARWAL was being NICE to a STUDENT?

Rakesh: Tumhaara Swagat hai Prem. Main jaanta hoon tumhaare baare mein. Tumhaare pichle school ke report dekhe hain maine. Bahut ache vidyarthi ho. sports mein bhi ache ho aur bahut kaabil ho. Mera beta Arjun yahan pe head boy hai. Usse jaa ke mil lena. Vo tumhaari madad kar sakta hai yahan pe theek se apni jagah banaane mein.

Prem: Ji Shukriya Sir. Agar aapke jaise teachers ka saath ho to har student chamakte sitaare ki tarah roshan karega.

Rakesh turned to the class with his chest puffed out.

Rakesh: Dekha, aise karte hain apne adhyapak ki izzat. Seekho kuch isse. Aaj hi aaya hai ye ladka. Kitna acha hai. Jao beta, apni jagah pe jaa kar baitho. Meri Beti Naina issi class mein hai. Tumhe kuch bhi chahiye ho to usse pooch lena. Naina, ye ladka saal ke beech mein aaya hai. Isski madad kar.

Naina: Ji paa- mera matlab Sir.

Prem winked at Naina and Swati as he made his way back to his seat. Naina smiled in wonder at him.

Swati: Arre wah Prem. Tumhe RAKESH SIR ko pataa liya? Tum cheez kya ho?

Prem: arre Swati abhi to tumne kuch dekha hi nahi hai. Aage aage dekho hota hai kya.

While the entire class looked at Prem in wonder, Sameer fumed some more. He had put all his hopes on Rakesh Sir. But as usual, he dashed them all. The one time he had actually hoped Rakesh Sir would actually be of some use, he proved to be useless at that too. What was HAPPENING with him? Now Prem had open entry into Naina's life. If it was a cartoon, Sameer would have probably blown up with the amount of anger he was feeling. Only he knows how he spent the remaining 30 minutes of the period. By the end he was ready to bolt out of the room, which is exactly what he did when the bell finally rang.

The next period was Physical training. The boys all made their way into the sports ground while the girls went to the badminton court. Once there the boys divided into teams and went to play cricket. Prem went to talk to the coach about the cricket team. The coach asked him to display his skills and so he called on Sameer to bowl an over to Prem. Prem stood at the crease with the bat, determination shining in his eyes. Sameer bowled the first ball, which went for a 4, agitating Sameer. The following balls also went quite similarly, with Prem scoring two 4's as well as one 6, impressing the coach and the spectators. Sameer looked at Prem with a fire in his eyes, and he focused on the wickets behind Prem. He built up his run, and bowled the final ball of the over. It felt like time slowed down as Sameer followed the ball which hit the pitch once, spun and went straight into the wickets. OUT. Prem looked at Sameer, quite impressed. It was not an easy task to bowl Prem out. Sameer looked at Prem with a little smugness. The coach walked up to the two of them, clearly happy with the performance.

Coach: Sameer, mujhe pata hai tum ek batsman ho, lekin uske baad bhi bowling achi thi tumhaari. Prem tum bhi ek tajurbedaar (experienced) ballebaaz ho. mujhe yakeen hai ke tumhaari aur Sameer ki partnership humaari team ke liye bahut khoob hogi. Team mein tumhaara swagat hai.

Prem: Thank you sir.

Coach: Aur Sameer, main tumse kuch baat karna chahta tha.

Sameer: ji Sir?

Coach: Tum iss team ke sabse ache khilaadi ho, aur tumhaare nirdeshan mein team acha khelti bhi hai. Main tumhe iss team ka kaptaan banana chahta hoon. Ab se team ki training, practice sab tumhaari zimmedaari hai. Aur Sameer, mujhe vo inter-school trophy chahiye. All the best.

Sameer smiled wide, elated. Cricket was one of his major loves, and to be made captain was a great honour and responsibility. An added factor was the hold that he now had over Prem, but that was just an extra perk.

Sameer: thank you so much Sir. Main aapse vaada karta hoon, aapko shikaayat ka mauka nahi doonga.

Coach: hmm. Mujhe asha hai ke mera faisla galat saabit nahi hoga.

Saying this, the coach left the boys to continue their practice. Sameer called all the team members aside.

Sameer: Dekho doston, coach sir ne humpe bharosa kar ke humein ye zimmedaari di hai. Humein unki umeedon ko poora karna hai. Mujhe pata hai k hum sab ye kar sakte hain. magar humein mehnat karni hogi. Har subha, school se ek ghanta pehle hum yahan par practice karenge. Theek hai?

The team members all nodded in agreement, apart from one.

Prem: Arre Sameer? Time thoda change nahi ho sakta? Mujhe padhna hota hai uss time par.

Sameer: Sorry Prem. Tumhaare hisaab se sabka samay nahi chal sakta. Ab ye tumhe dekhna hai tumhaare liye kya zyaada zaroori hai. Aur vaise bhi, sirf ek ghanta hai, tum school ke baad bhi to padh sakte ho?

Prem: Sameer vo

Sameer: sorry, main kuch nahi kar sakta.

Sameer (mentally smirking): Mujhe pata hai tum kyu nahi aa sakte Prem. Lekin mere hote huye tum Naina se padhoge, aisa main hone nahi doonga. Ab dekhta hoon tumhe har subha Naina kaise padhaati hai?



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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
Madam!! You took a sabbatical from this forum n left me hanging...You have no idea how much I missed you n this story...funnily enough, I was thinking of you n this story yesterday...n see you are back today...:) welcome back dear! Till then res!
Unresd- So, fandom ki demand...Mr. Jealous Maheshwari is back...you know your story is the only one which is fully dedicated to Sameer's jealousy! Prem...huh! Bada aaya! Chalu lag raha hai ab mujhe yeh...kind of despo type...itni jaldi usne to ladkiyon se dosti kar li...arey tab bhi 90s hi tha na...ek bhi ladke se to dosti karne ki koshish nai ki...ye gore gore se chore! 😡
Sameer se zyada taqleef mujhe ho rai thi...bechare Sam ne Tayyab Ali ko jhela n look at this good-for nothing sasurji! 😡 Tareef kar rahe hain uski...Acha kiya Sam ne isko gilli hi uda di! Huh! Ab main bhi dekhun kaise padhega tu subah...beta tu bhi Sameer Maheshwari ko jaanta nai hai! 😳
When can we expect the next update? 😆 Greedy me! 😉
BTW...meri stories aaram se padhna aur batana kaisi lagi! 😃
Lots of love Mrs. Rai 😉
Sur
Edited by Samaina_1990 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Madam!! You took a sabbatical from this forum n left me hanging...You have no idea how much I missed you n this story...funnily enough, I was thinking of you n this story yesterday...n see you are back today...:) welcome back dear! Till then res!



I cannot tell you how happy i am to see your comment!! I missed it too trust me but was just so caught up... Hahah... Dekha.. Tumne bulaaya aur hum chale aaye... I will catch up with all your stories promiseee... Much love!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely update dear and Welcome back :)
Prem ke observation skills ki daad deni padegi! he has already notices so many things about Sameer! Kahi isse bhi Sameer pe crush toh nahi ho gaya? 🤣

Prem has handled Rakesh Sir so well... Sam ko bolo kuch seekh jaye!

Cricket mein dono ka tashan padhne mein maja aa gaya!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
After so long, you've finally updated n I'm very happy with that
Sameer is using all saam daam dand bhed to get Prem out of Naina's life.. Lekin bande ki Kismat itti kharab h ki Rakesh sir ko bhi Prem pasand h

Now what I'm excited for is, Prem n Naina's reactions on knowing why Sameer is doing all this😆

Please update asap n is bar gayab mat ho jana
Edited by Anjali33 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Welcome back. And thank you for such an amazing part.
I was hoping Rakesh doesnt like prem also.
Thank you for the pm. Eagerly awaiting to see how Sameer wins Naina back
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Glad u updated this one .. it was nice update ... This time pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome back.. And an awesome update dear 😊

Prem has left an impression on Rakesh Sir.. Jo Sameer na kar paya wo Prem ne kar diya 😆

Sameer is trying hard to keep Prem away from Naina.. Let's see how long he succeeds 😉

Update soon and thanks for the PM

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Mrs Rai ,I was just wondering how I missed such a wonderful story...well I guess u started it before I joined the forum ...and ur last update is my first view of this story...

Excellent stuff...
Love to see a jealous Sameer
Somehow I started to imagine things...and feeling this may go the "mujhse Shaadi karoge " track ...

Whether it goes or not...u hv great writing skills ...the flair is Crystal clear

PL do update soon
Waiting!!!!!?

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