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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Interesting teaser..

Rohan ab Naina se milega...
Dekhte hai kya hota hai...



Hmm nice guess
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92





Note:

Hey guys
Finally my exams are over
Sorry i was stucked yesterday
Vd office work
So couldnt come online
But as i am back
Here i am updating 4th part of jo tu mera humdard hai

Hope you guys will love this one

N most imp..

Ps: for writers i am opening threads slowly i have more than 80 pms to open so it will take time
But will rply to each n every pm of urs
Please pardon me fr delay but will reply for sure

Ok enough of my speech

Next part is in another post have a look..

Luv
NIDA❤️


Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4

It was another day naina reached school to see sameer munna and pandit were standing near the corridor and were laughing about something.. she could see sameer was geniunely happy .. she was smiling seeing sameer and feeling someone looking at him sameer looked up to see smiling at him he smiled back naina was happy that last her wish is fulfilled when swati tapped her from behind saying naina which broke her trance and sameer looked away


Swati: kia hua naina tu aise q khadi hai kone mai... (what happened naina why are you standing in a corner)


Naina nodded her saying nothing and both of them walked into the classroom sameer and gang followed her as it was about to rung.

Sameer settled beside munna which was in same row of naina who was settled with swati...

Soon lochan sir showed up with math test papers and as usual naina has topped in her exams and sameer having the lowest marks...


Naina could see sameer smile fading away as she could see his smile fading she noticed that he is sad and thought to cheer him up but class was going on but she noticed munna and pandit trying to cheer him

Munna: chod na sameer agli baar ache marks le ana(let it be sameer you can work hard next time)

Pandit: dekh hume bhi lochan sir ne kitne kam marks diye hai chod na sameer(see even we have gotten less marks let it be)

Naina was wondering that why all of a sudden sameer is so worried about his marks when he never studies or never cared she soo wanted to talk.. but lochan sir was busy in teaching theorems..

In the break time when naina wanted to go and talk with sameer when english literature teacher called her for rehearsals she knew sameer must be waiting for her but she couldnt excused and had to stay back

Soon school was over and sameer went away naina wanted to talk to him but he rushed out without listening to her naina decided to talk to him the other day that maybe next time he could work hard and achieve good marks

Naina was going back with preeti when she found an elderly man having trouble in walking as if he would fall any minute

She told preeti to go home and inform others that she would cone home after helping him and preeti went away while she helped him sit and gave him some water to drink

Naina: uncle ap theek ho ..(uncle are you fine)

Man: han beta mai theek hun
(Yes i am fine)

Man:beta ab tum ghar jao mera ghar paas hi mai hai mai chala jaoga
(Now you can go my home is near i'll go by myself)

Naina: chale uncle mai ap k sath chalti hun(come uncle i will go with you) she said supporting him

Soon both reached a big mansion and they entered the hall to see sameer looking down and his mother was scolding him

She was surprised to see sameer but before she could react she heard


Vishaka: sameer ye kia tareeqa hai apni maa se baat krne ka tum ik baar phr fail hogaye aur is baat ki galti ka bhi ilzam tum mjh par hi lagao rohan ko dekho apne school mai top kia hai us ne..

(What is this sameer is this way to talk to your mother you have failed again and you are blaming me for this just look at your brother rohan he has topped in his school)


Sameer: han hogaya hun fail par apko is se kia farq parta hai ap apne bete ki first ane ki khushi mai party rakhiye na vese bhi jese pehle chor dia tha ab bhi chor dijiye...

(Yes i have failed but why do you care.. you should celebrate your son has topped in his exam and leave me alone like you did before also)


Sameer pointed towards rohan and said: sab is ki waja se hua hai(all because of him)


Rohan who was almost verge of crying ran out of the house when they saw naina standing at the threshold of the house..


Seeing rohan running away vishaka looked at the door to see naina standing with nana ji sameer rushed to hold him and naina narated how she found him near the shop

Vishaka took him inside to rest while sameer said

Sameer: thankyou .. with a smile

Naina just nodded her head although she wanted to ask alot of questions but sge decided other wise and went out bidding him bye..

Naina was walking out to hear some one sobbing she went near the tree to find rohan crying

Naina: tum rohan ho na( are you rohan)

Rohan just nodded his gead crying

Naina: par tum ro q rahe ho(but why are you crying)

Rohan wiping his tears from both of his hands saying

Rohan: mai tau nhi ro raha( no i am not crying)

Naina: acha tum sameer se gussa ho ( are you angry with sameer)

Rohan: ap bhaiya ko janti ho(do you know my brother)

Naina: han mai tumhare bhaiya ko janti hun vo mere classmate hai(yes he is my classmate)

Rohan: tau phr bhaiya apki baat manege na ap plx bhaiya ko bolo na mjhse gussa na kre sab k bhaiya tau unk chote bhaiyon k sath khelte hai par mere bhaiya tau mere sath khelte hi nhi kia mai itna bura hun didi..
(Will you tell him not to be angry with me every brother loves their brother but he doesnt love me am i so bad)

Naina: bilkul bhi nhi rohan tau bohot acha hai aur tumne tau itne ache marks laye hai ye lo tumhare liye(ofcourse not rohan is very nice and you have achieve even gokd marks here this is for you) giving him the chocolate which she had with her

Naina: aur rahe tumhare bhaiya ki baat unhe tau hum mil k theek krege ok(and about your brother we will make him fine together)

Rohan: promise showing his hand as if asking her to promise him

Naina: promise putting her hand on his...


She sent him inside and went away determined to talk to him as what he is doing with his brother is not right..

She finally was going out to see sameer looking through his window as if waiting for her she looked at him and he went inside..

Naina went home waiting for another day...



Thats all for now..
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Part 4 update
Have a look and do comment..

Btw

Ps i dont how this has turned out .
Have write it in a jiffy..

Luv
Nida❤️
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Cute update Nida😊
Felt bad to see him sad on getting failed again but Naina is a gem...she helps his Nanu and sees him being scolded by his Mom...but nice to see Rohan craving for his brother's love😳
Naina determined to set things right...hmmm...very nice... keep it up dear😃👏👍🏼

Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Awesome update dear
Liked it !! Well penned
Thanks for the pm!
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Nice update Nida
Rohan seems very fond of Sameer
He called Naina didi..I'm relieved😆
Thank God finally your exams r over

Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Beautiful update Nida Rohan craving for his brother's love 😳Naina helping Sameer's Nanu 😳Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Cute update Nida😊

Felt bad to see him sad on getting failed again but Naina is a gem...she helps his Nanu and sees him being scolded by his Mom...but nice to see Rohan craving for his brother's love😳
Naina determined to set things right...hmmm...very nice... keep it up dear😃👏👍🏼

Thanks for the pm😊


Thanks manisha.

Fr this luvly review..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Nice update Nida

Rohan seems very fond of Sameer
He called Naina didi..I'm relieved😆
Thank God finally your exams r over

Update soon


Yeah em back..
Thanks fr comment..

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