Samaina FF : HUM TUM Note on pg.64 feb 20,19 - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niakhush

Awesome update dear...jaise serial me bina kahe sab hota sane is ur story Bina kahe sab mil jata!!!
Nw it whd b difficult to wait for the next one...it is gng to b superb one...plz jaldi upload karo!!!


Yeah that unsaid feelings.. so pure.. jo aaj ke time me dekhne ko nh milti but ye to unn dino ki bat hai na😆😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Komalp1391

Loved your update Sameer and his possessiveness were a treat to rear


Thnxxx dear.. 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Read all parts in one go totally loving it .. wow the way u are protraying them is love .. u describe the story so well ..
Truly your an amazing writer

Keep writing like this and give us more SamAina I'm glad you have given PreeDit from starting hope you will start Swati and Munna's story soon
Waitung for next part

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Read all parts in one go totally loving it .. wow the way u are protraying them is love .. u describe the story so well ..

Truly your an amazing writer

Keep writing like this and give us more SamAina I'm glad you have given PreeDit from starting hope you will start Swati and Munna's story soon
Waitung for next part

Pm me


Thnxxx dear for making me happy😆
Ll pm u surely.. n about munna n swati ok from next part ll start their story..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Pt 16

Naina saw a beautiful n well built house in front of her.. she was amazed😲.. sam rang the door bell n chotu came to open the door..
Chotu opened the door n seeing him naina hide behind sameer.. he did ishara to chotu and he went in kitchen..

S - naina.. wo gya..
She came infront n her eyes got wide seeing beautiful decor..
S - accha lga? (He has a proud feel on his face)
N (giving big smile)- bahot..😛
S - chalen??

Don't know how many times he said this word 'chalen' every tym it sounds more beautiful😳.. it was the moment when 1st time naina was coming to his home.. he was feeling happy anxious nervous..
Unknowingly both entered together..Like a new couple do..

Mrs. M came downstairs n saw sameer n a beautiful girl .. seeing her naina got nervous but sam whispered in her ears - ghabrao mt.. meri mom hai.. (like he understand her hesitance)

Mrs. M - sameer.. tum
Before she says anything sameer cut her in between..
S - wo maa.. ye naina hai, meri classmate.. hum wapis school ja rhe the pr barish aa gyi or me ise ghar le aaya..
Naina went n took her blessings.. Mrs.M smiled..😊

Mrs M - jeeti rho.. n caressed her cheeks.. naina felt the mothers love..
Mrs M - beta tum to puri bheeg gyi ho.. chlo me tumhe dusre kapde de deti hu..
Naina - nh aunty iski koi jarurt nh hai.. me sukh jaugi thodi der me..
Mrs M - jrurt kaise nh h.. thnd lg jaegi beta..
Naina could not argue more n just nodded..

Sameer was standing at his place n smiling😊 seeing the beautiful scene..
Sam - by the way me b bheega hua hu.. to ap thoda dhyan mujpe b de skti ho..😆

Mrs M came to sam n slapped him lightly on shoulder..😃
Mrs M - tumhara room upar hai.. jao or kapde badal lo.. badmaash
Naina smiled seeing mother son bonding..
Mrs M - or naina beta tum mere sath aao..

Naina nervously looks to sam but he assured her through eyes.. Mrs M noticed their eye talk but didn't said anything that time.. n they both went in room.. (Mrs M n naina.. not sameer n naina)

Radha (Mrs M) opened her wardrobe n picked a beautiful red suit..
Radha - ye lo naina.. pta h jb me 18 saal ki hui thi tb maa ne muje ye tohfe me diya tha..
She smiled remembering her old memories..😊
Radha - chlo jldi se kapde badl lo warna thand lg jaegi..

Naina was hesitant to wear that suit but radha assured her that she ll look beautiful in it..
Radha - tum kapde bdlo me zara kitchen me dekhti hu kya bn rha hai..
Naina just nodded n smiled..😊

Upstairs, in sam room..
He picked up yellow night suit.. all the time he was humming dil deewana bin sajna ke mane na song. He was very happy today..😃😆😛
Wearing night suit he came out from bathroom and noticed the first button was not present..He cribed like a small child🤔 and ran downstairs to radha to fix button..

Forgetting naina presence , he opened the door n cribed - maa ye button tuta..
His voice got struck in his throat when he looked the sight infront..
Naina who just came from bathroom got scared n surprised seeing sameer standing there.. she was looking extremely beautiful in that red suit..
Her cheeks went crimson red☺️ seeing sameer eyes which were fixed on her now..

Mere rang me rangne wali..
Pari ho ya ho pariyon ki rani..
Ya ho meri prem kahani...❤️

after a moment sam noticed naina's bare neck instantly he turned around n closed his eyes.. huffed naina ran to bed, picked up duppata n set it on neck..
Naina - tum .. yahan ??😲😕

S - m really sorry yrr.. me bss button.. maine kuch nh dekha kasam se (bite his tongue)
Naina's eyes got wide open listening his statement..🥱
S - me bad me aata hu.. n he went out of room.. naina was standing there like statue recalling just happened incident..

Naina to herself - jhootha.. kbse to dekh rha tha.. realising wat she said, instantly covered her face with palm due to shyness..☺️

Sam came out from room n stand by wall.. calming down his raised heartbeats..
S - sameer tu pagal ho gya hai.. use ghoor rha tha pr kaha ki kuch nh dekha.. kya sochegi wo mere bare me? (He got worried)
S - pr naina kitni khoobsurat lg rh thi na bilkul pari jaisi (dreamingly)

Radha came there n tapped on his shoulder seeing him lost..
Radha - tu yahan kya kr rha h? (Raising her eyebrow)😎
Sam - wo.. me..Yahan.. haan aap ke pas hi to aa rha tha.. ye iska button tuta hua hai..
Radha - tuje yhi kapde mile? Ghar pe mehman hai or tuje night suit phnna hai??
S - mehman? Kon aaya hai?
Radha slapped him again..This time lil harder..

S - ouch...
R - naina.. tu hi to laya tha..
S - pr naina mehman thodi hai..
R - to fir kon hai?
S - wo.. wo.. wo meri classmate hai..( giving nervous smile)
R - tu b na.. ja upar or dhng ke kapde phenke aa..

And he went upstairs again to change. Poor guy..
Radha knocked on door n went inside.. she saw naina who was looking like a new bride..
She just went to her n kissed her forehead..
R - bhot pyari lg rh ho..
Naina again took her blessing n said thankyou ..
R - chlo khana tyar hai..
N - khana? Pr aunty.. wo ghar pe sb pareshan ho rhe honge..
R - bat to sahi h tumhari.. chlo apne ghar phone krdo or meri bat karado.. tumhare papa se me bat kr leti hu.. waise b abi barish ruki nh h to bahar jana theek nh..

Naina nodded n they came in hall.. she dialed her home no. Chachi ji picked up phone..
Chachi - hello..
N - chachi ji.. me naina..
Bss itna sunte hi chachi ji just started her mail express..
C - naina.. kaha hai? Bahar kitni barish ho rh h. Bhagwan jhooth na bulae itni laparwahi.. hum kbse pareshan ho rhe hai.. n she went on n on..
Seeing naina mute radha take the receiver from naina's hand..
R - hello..
C - hello... Kon?
N radha narrated all the happening n assured her that naina is in her home safe n sound.. or barish rukte hi wo naina ko ghar chod degi..
Chachi ji got relaxed now..🥱

C - theek h bhenji.. khyal rakhna meri bacchi ka.. or barish rukte hi ghar chudwa dena..
R - aap chinta na kare.. naina bilkul meri bacchi jaisi hi hai..
N they put phone down..
Naina - thnkewww aunty warna muje bhot dant padti ghar jake..
R - isme thnku ki kya bat hai. Tum b to meri beti jaisi ho.. chlo ab khana khalo.. n gave a assuring smile..
Both went to dining table n sat.. talking n chatting.. 😊


P.S. I hope it's a long update.. me thak gyi 😆 ll pm later.. thnx for liking the story. Keep showering ur love..😊
Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow..
It was too good dear..
Loved this update.
Please give longer update.
This was not sufficient
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Posted: 7 years ago
In love with this story... Beautiful update 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb, Excellent, Mindblowing
We are lalchi...please update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely update.. ..loved the yellow night suite Wala part...Thu ka episode yaad aa gaya!!!!
U knw wht dear kitna bhi long update de do...v all will always feel less nly!!!
Dil Bharta hi nahi hamara...u r really a gr8 writer!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely story. I wish it was a bit longer though. I had assumed naina was going to put the button back for sameer. Such lovely scene that would have been.

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