SaIna FF: Aakhir ho gaya na..; Last part on Pg 44 - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago
Naina is quite intelligent(or rather you Manisha Di 😉) The plan was amazing and actually practical. So Sameer said I love you here.Ahan tables have turned, though in game. Naina has used her father correctly here 😛. Rakesh sir ke naam ki dhamki kahin toh kaam ayi 😆. Maybe Sameer was feeling happy inside ki 'librarian aaj kaam aa gya 😃'. So Mr.Sameer is on his way to become best student. Good luck for him.
Really a very nice and a perfect chapter Manisha DI! I really can't wait to know what happens next.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Your update is always fab 👍🏼,
Loved it, the plan was awesome had a big smile on my face when the rival guy got slapped by Naina.
and the last scene it was so emotional aankhon mein aansoo agai thi, kitna dard tha jab dono back face kar rahe te.
rooting for Sameer so he can be successful to get naina back. 👏
Can't wait for you to update again. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Beautiful update 😳Loving Sameer's determination ❤️I hope he wins Update soon 😊


Thanks a lot Mansi...yeah he would win...but how you need to wait😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Behind my smile is a hurting heart.

Behind my laugh, am falling apart.
Look closely and you will see,
the girl i am, isn't me..

Nothing is more then being disappointed by the one person who you thought wud never hurt you!
Very nicely given the impression of a sweet girl Naina, who is too good, who helps the one who give her tears, she has given him a lot that it's hurting for her to trust him again, though she is a believer to see the positive in every one she come across!
Naina cud have gone miles to defame Sameer, she cud have dome the damage to him for the bet! But she preferred the chance be given! She opted the advise she got from the elders! She magnified a good heart in sameer, and saved him and his hair and his reputation!
Three Cheers To Naina!!! !!! !!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks a lot for the beautiful lines and for liking my take on Naina's character...this is how I percieved her to be😃
It was a treat to watch the truth and dare game Manisha, very thoughtful of you 👏
The things started fallen into the places and the outcome is funny and magical and with some lessons learnt! ⭐️
Though the rivals are out, the friends are left and left is the determination of both to see each other happier!

They both are now determined to keep each other happy and they would do everything possible for this😃

I so loved his words to swati to take care of Niana, as he has to prove himself to be a friend of hers, and what his Nanu expects him to be!
Very nice portrayal of sameer, where it is obvious that he will put his mind, soul and heart to win her back! And this time he needs no friends and only himself! And this may prove to him how much he loves and adore her!
Winning back will make him working hard. willing to do things he never did, and this can take long for him to understand life!

He has to work hard as he has never done before...but thats his test...and he needs to come up with flying colours this time😃

Thanks Sweetie, for this very nice take, it's a marve, and i cud see how you have penned down the theme! 👏
Loved it, and luv ya ❤️ 🤗

Thanks a lot Bhabhi for liking the concept and the update😃🤗
Love ya too Bhabhi😃🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Waah waah waah yr! Maza aa gaya padh ke 👏

The truth and dare scene was pure genius- what a way to complete the bet and evade the humiliation...and the way Sam n Naina handled the bet- so mature!!!
Mohabbat ka imtehaan aa hi gaya aakhir- dono ke liye ye bahot mushkil hone wala hai aur Sam ke liye doing something without Naina's help- real difficult...I loved it when he said, tum khud ko mat badalna meri wajah se...kyunki iske baad mujhe tumhari dosti chahiye...I love men who are determined n confident...👏
Really well written dear- it touched my soul...thanks for sharing n share the next update soon 😊


Thanks dear for your appreciation and i loved reading your comment😃
Sameer wants Naina as she is😃
Thats why he is determined to win her trust back...and he would do everything possible for this😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nishi05

Wonderful lines Swati...You are awesome...⭐️👏👏
Want more from you n Bro...😳

Bless you dear..!!!


Yeah Di...you are absolutely right...she is just awesome...i also want more...much more😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinynew

Naina is quite intelligent(or rather you Manisha Di 😉) The plan was amazing and actually practical. So Sameer said I love you here.Ahan tables have turned, though in game. Naina has used her father correctly here 😛. Rakesh sir ke naam ki dhamki kahin toh kaam ayi 😆. Maybe Sameer was feeling happy inside ki 'librarian aaj kaam aa gya 😃'. So Mr.Sameer is on his way to become best student. Good luck for him.

Really a very nice and a perfect chapter Manisha DI! I really can't wait to know what happens next.
Thanks for pm.


Hahahaha...really Rakesh Sir ka naam aise mein kamal kar sakta hai...koi bhi unse panga nahi lega😆🤣
Thats why I used this idea😃
Thanks a lot Shiny for liking this...soon ill be updating the next part😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: worldequalsyou

Your update is always fab 👍🏼,

Loved it, the plan was awesome had a big smile on my face when the rival guy got slapped by Naina.
and the last scene it was so emotional aankhon mein aansoo agai thi, kitna dard tha jab dono back face kar rahe te.
rooting for Sameer so he can be successful to get naina back. 👏
Can't wait for you to update again. 😃


Thanks dear😃
i know all of you are waiting for the next update...I'll soon do that dear...ill not make you wait for long😃
maybe tday or tmrrw ill update😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Finally I got some time to read your story
Let me first thank you for ur updates..
Intresting n Fascinating one manisha Didi 👏 Every moment of reading I am realizing SamAina N I loved ur way of writing n usage
Well done Plz Update n write more I love to see
Fabulous one ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NIDHI1414

Finally I got some time to read your story

Let me first thank you for ur updates..
Intresting n Fascinating one manisha Didi 👏 Every moment of reading I am realizing SamAina N I loved ur way of writing n usage
Well done Plz Update n write more I love to see
Fabulous one ⭐️


Thanks a lot Nidhi...waiting for you to be more active here😛😃

Will be updating now😃

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