SamAina FF:- A Broken Future of Togetherness? (NOTE Page 34)

AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Radkam
Protective & jealous Sameer wrapped in one! R v gonna have a sholay scene now! 🥳

Let's see if we do! 😉

Thank you so much!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Priya2910
Fantastic update. Loved it.
I like this Sameer. Naina is so broken but I know Sameer will bring her back to normalcy. Of course Rohit is a total creep but I guess he has to play his role to unite the two lovers back.

Please update asap.

Thank you so much!

Rohit's character is much needed for the progression of their relationship...I'm glad to hear you liked it!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: _shweta98
This was so heartwrenching. how could he do this..
i want Naina to understand as soon as possible and believe sameer over that guy immediately. waiting for next already!
Update soon..

It's all about trust after all. It takes no time for your trust on someone to break but ages to restore your trust on someone ...

Thank you so much! 😃

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ruchi3179

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Brilliant story telling.always wanTed intense confrontation in our show but getting that here in this story.eagerly waiting muskan

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#185

They say better late than never, so here I am with a review hopefully done justice to the wonderful update, that too dedicated to me! What shall I say, I am so humbled by your love and loads from my side too. You say I motivate you then let me give you a trivia, your support and motivation for me inspires to work harder. I instantly connected with you when you said you find writing in third person a little challenging as the feeling is mutual and now I have you as one of my best friend here and I couldn't be anymore happy. ❤️

The game has turned uglier, when the broken, the determined and the intruder's paths clashes, it was supposed to be something of a conflagration.

The jealous are possessed by a mad devil and a dull spirit at the same time.

I would say, Sameer has successfully entered one of the common stages in love- Denial. Denial of Love. Denial of Jealousy. Denial of everything that proves a person is in love. He cares, surely, but as a best friend. Or so he says. The whole world can see it, feel it, agrees to it but the one who is in love makes the fact unseen, denies it albeit he feels it thoroughly.

Rohit, another guy who makes me confused, I disliked him when he conveniently pushed the blame onto the mad lover, Sameer but then I wonder, why did he do so? Did he just want to escape the situation or did he twist the situation the way he wanted to satisfy his ulterior motive? What kind of ulterior motive as the smirk after Naina exited from the situation left me a little uneasy.

Maybe he has feelings for Naina, but not a healthy one for sure. Somehow it seems he has sensed the fact that Sameer is a threat for him so he sees everything as a competition.

It ached my heart when Naina stood there, asking for an explanation for the series of events which were playing out before her. You succeeded, the Mount Abu memories rushing through my mind. Unlike last time where the mask of love was pulled away, this time the worst happened, the mask of misunderstandings were just put on.

The flashback stole my heart, as usual. He had started knowing her too well that my heart is repeatedly fluttering with anxiety and happiness. The sudden boldness that Naina exhibited, Sameer brought the best in her and I proudly declare, it was vice versa too.

These were the two things running in my mind...

Naina: I have millions, no billions of mistakes in my life but falling in love with you is not one of them.

Sameer: If I was a mistake, I hope I was your favourite one.

I am eagerly waiting for the next, you have left me craving more of them. You are wrong, three hearts skipped a beat and one is mine. This was written crisply and it has left me smiling, beautiful and loved it my dear! 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Hey dear.Your story is one the best one read in forum.Do updt dear .Waiting for the confrontation between them.

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Shreya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#187

I am one of your annoying readers who pesters you to update the story every now and then...😆

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: ruchi3179
Brilliant story telling.always wanTed intense confrontation in our show but getting that here in this story.eagerly waiting muskan

Thank you so much! Your wait finally ends...I'll be updating very soon! 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#189

They say better late than never, so here I am with a review hopefully done justice to the wonderful update, that too dedicated to me! What shall I say, I am so humbled by your love and loads from my side too. You say I motivate you then let me give you a trivia, your support and motivation for me inspires to work harder. I instantly connected with you when you said you find writing in third person a little challenging as the feeling is mutual and now I have you as one of my best friend here and I couldn't be anymore happy. ❤️

I guess the same applies to me too. Better late than never. I admit I had read your comment five times before, the happiness intensifying each time I did...but I had promised myself I'd reply to such a beautiful comment once I have the next chapter ready. And that day has finally come! Shreya, you truly are a gem! Not only do you relate to me so well, but you give me so much inspiration! Thank you so much! 🤗

The game has turned uglier, when the broken, the determined and the intruder's paths clashes, it was supposed to be something of a conflagration.

The jealous are possessed by a mad devil and a dull spirit at the same time.

I would say, Sameer has successfully entered one of the common stages in love- Denial. Denial of Love. Denial of Jealousy. Denial of everything that proves a person is in love. He cares, surely, but as a best friend. Or so he says. The whole world can see it, feel it, agrees to it but the one who is in love makes the fact unseen, denies it albeit he feels it thoroughly.

The best phase of love, in my opinion. The constant battle between the heart and mind which leads to a beautiful realization. The inner turmoil is so painful yet so needed. This is the phase where you connect best with yourself and can look deeper into you...your feelings, your emotions, your love for the one who loves you! Maybe Sameer too has experienced that realization.

Rohit, another guy who makes me confused, I disliked him when he conveniently pushed the blame onto the mad lover, Sameer but then I wonder, why did he do so? Did he just want to escape the situation or did he twist the situation the way he wanted to satisfy his ulterior motive? What kind of ulterior motive as the smirk after Naina exited from the situation left me a little uneasy.

Maybe he has feelings for Naina, but not a healthy one for sure. Somehow it seems he has sensed the fact that Sameer is a threat for him so he sees everything as a competition.

Rohit, a character I had never planned yet ended up being an important one in their love story. Maybe Rohit too could see how much Sameer loved his Naina and understood he was incomparable in front of Sameer Maheshwari. Maybe he did love, but never understood the meaning of love. Maybe he did have some other motive; maybe he wanted to obliterate their relationship. A lot of maybes and unanswered questions...let's see how the story unfolds.

It ached my heart when Naina stood there, asking for an explanation for the series of events which were playing out before her. You succeeded, the Mount Abu memories rushing through my mind. Unlike last time where the mask of love was pulled away, this time the worst happened, the mask of misunderstandings were just put on.

The worst part of every relationship; the thing that puts any relationship on the verge of destruction - misunderstandings. It's hard to trust someone, and its harder to escape misunderstandings about those you trust.

The flashback stole my heart, as usual. He had started knowing her too well that my heart is repeatedly fluttering with anxiety and happiness. The sudden boldness that Naina exhibited, Sameer brought the best in her and I proudly declare, it was vice versa too.

And your reviews stole my heart! 😳 Writing flashbacks are a treat for me amidst the depressing sequences in the story. However, each emotion has its perks and hopefully the next chapter will leave you happier. 😃

These were the two things running in my mind...

Naina: I have millions, no billions of mistakes in my life but falling in love with you is not one of them.

Sameer: If I was a mistake, I hope I was your favourite one.

Beautiful lines, Shreya! Kya pata, those lines are exactly what Naina and Sameer need 😉

I am eagerly waiting for the next, you have left me craving more of them. You are wrong, three hearts skipped a beat and one is mine. This was written crisply and it has left me smiling, beautiful and loved it my dear! 😳

After reading this, another heart skipped a beat, and that's mine! Thank you so much for such a beautiful review, Shreya! I can't wait to read your reaction on the next one! 😃

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Your in-depth review deserves a round of applause! 👏

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Posted: 6 years ago