Sameer-Naina FF: Kati Patang (Part-30 Updated)PG-134 Note on Pg.143

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#901

Once again I'm saying, update chhota tha😆

Namrata n her mom live in Sameer's house, but still he's alone But now, he has a family.. It's so heartwarming😳

Nisha using Sameer's skates😃 that was my favorite part.. Dil le lo🤗

Bechara guard.. Dar k mare adha ho gya😆

I would love to see ki Sameer Nisha ko skating kaise sikhayega.. These workaholic businessmen playing with their kids, it's so cute😳

Nisha ki masoom demands😉 It was surprising that they didn't just forget it as an awkward moment, but actually talked about a baby😊

Their teasing talks were so cute n husband-wife types😳 Naina yaar😆 Dinner date pe bhi Nisha ko leke jaogi!!

Update soon aur itta chhota nhi rakhna usko😆

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Anya29

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Posted: 7 years ago

#902

I'm new to this forum... loved your writing... itna acha laga ki finished reading all parts in one day... and been waiting for the next parts eagerly...

Your fiction has everything - friendship love concern anger jealousy maturity... keep writing such amazing plot...

Anya

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#903

Hi Minu, so good to see an update for KP!

Trip to Delhi is already giving us lot of insight into Sameer's family situation. Poor guy prefers to live in the quarters even when there is s huge mansion in the city. Naina and Nisha's arrival should now make it a real home for him., somewhere he will look forward to coming back to at the end of the day.

Nisha skating without knowing how to skate brought back memories of me and my brother learning to skate inside the house!

I liked reading the description of the Registers office through her eyes. Different people come there to wed this way for different reasons. But it's not the option they would have liked to choose if possible. Brought back memories of when I was a witness at a friends wedding like this as it was an inter-religious marriage. It is s hard step that people have to take without their families participating in a big event of their life. Though it is meant to be a happy event there is s sense of gloom in that place. Loved how you presented it.

And I fully support Nisha's demand for a baby brother or sister!! Chalo at least date pe ja rahe hai.. 😆

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Priya

@Priya2910

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Posted: 7 years ago

#904

It's a lovely update.

Finally Samaina are lawful Mr and Mrs Maheshwari. Nisha is cute and her demands are so apt. Loving the relationship between the 3 of them.

Glad that Naina initiated romantic conversation between them.

Please send them on a nice romantic dinner date. Wish this relationship grows in leaps and bounds, for both have suffered so badly in the past.

Update soon .

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anjalijain0804

@anjalijain0804

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Posted: 7 years ago

#905

Nice update 👏 keep writing u r very nice writer

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#906

Part 24

Very nice part..

Loved nisha and rishav here..

The matured rishav is too cute..

Liking SamAina here too

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#907

Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it !!

Absolutely fantastic update ...since the bad guys were not there I am a lot relaxed. I liked lil Nisha's demands. I am waiting to see how Sameer is going to balance home and office and his new life with his lady love and Jr.

Eagerly waiting for the next update...

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Isha

@mystique123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#908

Minu...thank you so much for the update even when you are super busy... 🤗

So Naina gets to know more about Sameer and his equations with the family. She knows the pain of being alone when you heart craves for love and care.A mansion becomes home only when there is life in it, happiness of family in it.Now that she has started to feel his loneliness, she would make sure he gets to feel home and family. I also have a hunch that she will be the one who would mend his relationship with his family.⭐️

Naina is home now, their home,the place of origin for their hopes and dreams ...I loved the description of the mansion and the Naina's emotions when she enters into her Ghar.❤️

I love this cutie pie Nisha and her flood of questions😆 You have clearly captured the innocence and apprehensions of a child. Her confusion, puzzled looks and queries...such a treat it is. How can I forget the visualization of Registrar office.Hats Off Minu, you always manage to put down even the minutest detail.👏

Nisha and skates...oh god...she is full of life and you know what Minu, even I panicked for a fraction of second and then realized it is fiction after all, Sameer is fatherly goals and I admire that character sketch of him.

So finally Nisha needs a brother or sister. Someone really had to drill sense into Sameer and Naina, they had just forgotten to romance and now the baby has taken up the role.😆

With Sameer and Naina getting closer emotionally and physically, I am hoping to see hard core romance soon.😊

Eager to read what happens next ❤️

Lots and Lots of Love 🤗

Edited by mystique123 - 7 years ago