A comment, long overdue.
This is one FF that I look forward to with as much interest I have in the show. Even more at times.
Reading parts 11 and 12 had left me in a state of confusion. I was shocked when Sameer asked Naina about Nisha's parents in the presence of the Rishav and Nisha herself. I had been like 'How could he?'. Guess Sam went a little 'Emozzanally overboard!' 😃 As if the impulsive, young Sameer suddenly emerged out from behind a refined, composed adult Sameer. I am still upset with him for doing that, but after reading chapter 13, I at least better understand why he got emotional; I understand his urgency better!
The story had taken an unexpected course over chapters 11 and 12 that I couldn't somehow articulate my feelings into comments then. I wanted to wait till a little more was revealed. 'The sinking in' phase, you could call it. This chapter has made me more oriented.
Must say you've penned the chapters really well. The planning is visible! While suspense keeps building, a set of things are getting unfolded parallely too. I had been on the assumption that whatever feeling Sameer had for Naina in the present was based on the guilt from schooldays. But the flashback meeting, or rather ordeal in Bangalore says that what is to happen in Almora is not 'blooming' of love, but rekindling of a spark; that spark, which has always been there between Naina and Sameer, but could not turn into a full fledged flame ever! The flashback also explains the easiness with which the present Sameer and Naina talk to each other in spite of not having met in a long time. Rightfully audacious, they both sound.
Varsha is a little crazy, but a genuine and relatable character. And happens that Sameer had wronged her too, albeit unintentionally. Waiting to know more of that!
And Sudeep continues to remains a mystery, just like Nisha!
Me sabar karna jaanti toh zarur hu, phir bhi I'd say, please bring part 14 as early as you can! :) More eager than ever!
Love!
