Sameer-Naina FF: Kati Patang (Part-30 Updated)PG-134 Note on Pg.143

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Surabhi1995

@Surabhi1995

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Posted: 6 years ago

#991

It was such a long and good update...loved it and i am so happy that naina was safe and she clould manage to get those papers...loved the fact that no miss understanding can make them apart...and the romantic scene was beautifully written 👏

Eagerly waiting for the next update ❤️

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PK21

@Pallavi_PK

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Posted: 6 years ago

#992

Thanks for update dear...it was awesome...

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@SixteenAgain

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+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#993

Hi Minu,

This chapter is something very very special! I started reading it while on the tube and then few minutes into decided that it was something I should read while curled up on the sofa/bed knowing there won't be any disruptions to the flow.

I must admit... I was apprehensive about Naina initiating communication with that Vikram without informing Sameer, especially after promising him to not hide anything from him going forward. I thought this might lead to some major MU between the two.. but it was just you playing with our imagination!

That visit to Vikram was very hard to read... I wonder how Sameer stood outside all that while... it was his agni-pariksha. Not only his trust in her, but his belief in her strength was tested.

Mr Somani is such an arrogant MCP! Unfortunately, it was a species found in abundance in that time... hopefully not so much these days.

Vishakha warning Naina to not risk her family life and equation with Sameer was quite endearing. I pity that woman above all else, she has lost a lot in trying to hold on to that second marriage. She probably did not think that she had any options...

And then Samaina feeling compelled to bridge that small and yet at the same time gaping distance between them was just awesome! Physical intimacy between a couple is not required for love and romance, but it completes the surrender of the individuals to each other.. into each other's keeping. At least that my view of things.

I am not not at all bothered by the knock or the interruption in their love making.. so me they have already completed each other!

And big congrats on completion of 1 year!! We have loved every part of it!!! 🤗

Lots of love,

May.

Edited by SixteenAgain - 6 years ago

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Yudkbh30

@Yudkbh30

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Posted: 6 years ago

#994

Awesome update

& last few paras are so hot & passionate

Plz update soon

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#995

Minu again this was a balanced diet, right amount of all the emotions... How cheap that Vikram guy can get 😡 first of all he had the audacity to invite her at his home and then trying to take dirty advances towards her... The moment Naina escaped I too was relieved... Phewww. ... But sach mein Naina bhi Jhansi ki Rani se kam nhi😆 hr problem ka solution khud krne nikal pdti h but here our very own Mr Maheshwari comes into play ...how can a husband be soo supportive for his wife and her decisions .Though unwillingly he took her there but not a single second he doubted her or her intentions.. ..little scenes which u added of Nisha Sameer and Nisha Naina were so sweet shows the growing bond between them... Naina was always her mother but growth of Sameer as a father has been tremendous ...what more a girl can ask for in a husband ...loving caring protective supportive and good father to her child and Mr maheshwari has it all.Vishaka , bobby and Naina scene was superb ...i loved how Naina turned bold when someome dared to speak against her husband ...this Naina is something we crave for on the show ..Preeti and Pandit scene was fab too ...jo roasting ki agarwals ki pandit ne maza aagya ...and final mention to the last scene u aced it ...that frustration longing and desire which Sameer showed was his haq ...his whisper meri ho jao hamesha k liye summed up the scene...its not that he doubted her ...it was just claiming what was his ...all his insecurties and fear to loose her was well depicted in his behavior ... I just loved the whole update

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#996

I forgot to congratulate u

A big congratulations ...KP turns one

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#997

IMPORTANT NOTE

Due to lack of readership and response on the story,I have come to conclusion that this story has no more takers now.After so much of hard work that goes into writing an update such response has clearly discouraged me.But I shall not discontinue the story .Hence I have decided to shift to my personal blog and PM the blog link to those only who are regular on this and following it.

Thank you all.

-Minu.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 6 years ago

#998

Originally posted by: myprimechicago
Awesome update...
what happened to confidencial file???
also it might be Nisha banging at the door

Thank you dear.Your answers are in upcoming updates.😳

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sona27

@sona27

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#999

Please continue on the forum only. I am a silent reader and love your story a lot. It is fabulous and amazing as it is different from others.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#1000

Originally posted by: Surabhi1995
It was such a long and good update...loved it and i am so happy that naina was safe and she clould manage to get those papers...loved the fact that no miss understanding can make them apart...and the romantic scene was beautifully written 👏
Eagerly waiting for the next update ❤️

Thank you Surabhi for your appreciation.😳 Glad you liked the sequences.