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Sorry for been so late to respond


Its ok... Dear😊
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Fabulous Chapter

Oh hell poor Mihika and Mihir now both have to suffer because
of Raman and Ishita and both Raman and Ishita have failed to realize
that its not about them but about Mihika and Mihir
Amma on one side praises Raman and feels he would be a perfect partner
for Ishita while Toshiji wants to look for a suitable girl that will color Raman's life
it was actually good to see that unknowingly thoughts of Ishita brought a smile to Raman's lips who would have thought this

I'm already waiting for the next chapter


Poor mihir and mihika always stuck in ishra fight😆
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Hello guys...i Hope you all r doing great ...today i m back with next update hope u all like it... And thanx for ur likes and lovely comments
Part 4...

Ishita: mihiku... I will tell u everything... But not here... Come let's go out...i will tell u at home...

She spoke with pleading eyes, Mihika had so many questions about ishra and she wanted answers of them and they rushed out from there. Mihir was also in the same boat like mihika. He was staring raman like he had seen a ghost . Raman saw this and spoke getting irritated.

Raman: what.why are you staring at me like that... Its nothing like that what u r thinking about me and this madrasan. I m telling you beforehand... There is nothing between us.

Mihir: acha agar yeh baat hai toh jo ishita ji bol rhi thi uska kya...

Mihir spoke raising his eyebrows raman spoke getting pissed off

Raman(greeting his teeth) : tujhe apna chehra yhin bigadna hai ya ghar jaa kr decide krle...

Mihir and raman on the way to home. Mihir was confused by this sudden turn of events and was thinking about ishra and also stealing glances of raman time and again

Mihir(st): i think something is going on between bhai and ishitaji...then why bhai always behave rude with her may be he doesn't want to show it in front of people.. Agar esa hai then it will be great for us... Mihir was smiling like an idiot and lost in his thoughts. Raman stop the car in front of bhalla house and said to mihir

Raman: chlo...
On the other hand mihir was lost in his thoughts and was smiling, raman saw mihir and shook him.

Raman: o... Dukhi aatma khaan khoya hai...why are you smiling like that..

Mihir without thinking spoke: apke or bhabhi ke bare mein..

Suddenly he realized what he said and spoke getting scared

Mihir:bhai...may i ask you something...

Raman: bol... Bole bina toh tujhe chain ayega nhi...

Raman said making dirty face on him.

Mihir(smilingly): bhai apko ishita ji kesi lagti hai... And please sach bolna

Raman: kesi lagti hai... Jhansi ki rani lagti hai bilkul...always behind me with her sword

Mihir( curiously) : then why did u kiss her..

Raman(irritatedly): i m not owe you any explanation on this...don't u dare to ask me these sort of things about that ishita..

After that raman came out of the car and rushed to bhalla house. While mihir was confused about raman's behaviour, and thought

Mihir(st): yeh bhai bhi na...kitna ajeeb behave kr rhe hain kuch din se...khair ajeeb toh hain hi vo... But jbse iyers ke saath contract mila hai kuch jyada hi ajeeb behave kr rhe hain... Mujhe iske baare mein baat krni hogi kisise... Pr kisse.. Haan mihika mihika ko call krta hu... He called mihika

On the other hand ishmi reached home and they were about to enter suddenly mihika's phone buzzed and they stopped at the door way, she picked up without noticing the name

Mihir: hello mihika..

Mihika: haan bolo mihir

She spoke looking at ishita and ishita was also looking at her all confused

Mihir: mihika... Can u meet me tomorrow at coffee shop near my office at lunch time..

Mihika: what happened mihir... Is everything fine...

She asked getting confused by mihir behavior

Mihir: "haan mihika everything is fine with me.. I want to meet you to talk about bhai and bha..."He was about to say bhabhi but stopped in mid and realized what he was going to address ishita and corrected himself and said .." tumhari akka ke bare mein"

Mihika : ok as u say...

Mihir: ok be on time bye..

They disconnect the call. After mihir's call and ishmi entered the house and saw vandu was sitting in the hall. Both ishita and mihika exclaimed in excitement and ran towards vandu.

Ishita and mihika(unison): vandu akka...

Vandu smile seeing them. Vandu hugged ishita and mihika and spoke faking sadness

Vandu: nobody missed me and nobody bothered to call me for once...

Ishita: akka u know.. How busy i m in handling business and all

Mihika after listening her thought to tease her and said elbowing her

Mihika: "haan... Everybody knows how much you are with your business cum bf " she winked at ishita

Ishita opened her mouth in o shape and signals mihika not to speak anything about the coffee shop incident. mihika assured her with her eyes which was not go unnoticed by vandu she got suspicious about them and spoke

Vandu: "what are you people talking via signs.." she asked raising her eyebrows

Ishita(stammer): "nothing akka...vo toh ese hi... Apko toh pta hai na mihika ka... Kitni naughty hai.." she said hitting her head a little

Mihika: yes yes vandi akka there is nothing...by the way where is my champ...

She said seeing here and there and called out for him.

Mihika: shrvu... Shrvu...

Shrvu: chitti...

He ran towards ishmi and hugged them. Ishita picked him up in her arms and spoke kissing him.

Ishita: hey... My cutie... How are you...

Shrvu frowned at ishita listening her and spoke

Shrvu(irritatedly): i m not cute chitti... I m not a girl...

Ishita: awww...my shrvu is most handsome boy in the world... Ab khush

She said pecking his cheek fondly

Shrvu: chitti ab aap aa gye ho toh hum kehlne chlte hain mere room mein...

Vandu: No... Shrvu chitti abhi bhara se ayi hain na... Toh abhi unko rest krne do phir kl kehlna unke sath tum...ok abhi jao apne room. Mein kehlo

Shrvu ran away saying ok. Vandita turned to ishmi and said "jao abhi freshen up ho jao fir dinner ke baad krenge baat ". Ishmi went upstair to their room. After entering the room ishita spoke glaring mihika.

Ishita: mihiku... What was that...

Mihika spoke while taking out her night clothes from cupboard : what akka...

Ishita turn her towards herself and spoke : what were u saying downstairs...u know very well there's nothing between us then also u were hinting vandu akka about raman and me...

Mihika thought to tease her bit and spoke: oh hoo... Raman and me...aur kbse vo ravan kumar se raman bn gya haan... Bolo...

Mihika spoke raising her eyebrows and elbowing her.

Ishita making dirty face : esa kuch nhi hai... Mai or vo ravan kumar... Kbhi ho hi nhi skta...

Mihika: vese akka u haven't told me yet about your and your ravan kumar's kiss ka kissa...

Mihika spoke in teasing tone. Hearing her ishita rolled her eyes and spoke

Ishita: yeh kya lga rkha hai your ravan kumar... Mene kha na esa kuch nhi hai...u know mihiku i hate him...and if u want to know then suno..

She narrated everything to her skipping their first meeting. Mihika was all shocked as well as confused on his behaviour towards ishita.

Mihika(confused): "I think akka he likes u but he doesn't admit it because of his ego... U know na male ego and all... " she said making dirty faces.

Ishita sat on bed and closed her eyes and spoke as if assuring herself: i don't think so...we are rivals and top of that he hate me just like i hate him to the core. Moreover what happened that day was just out of revenge nothing else, he wants me to back off from this project. Pr vo ravan kumar bhul gya hai ki i m ISHITA IYER... Who doesn't give up so easily...

Mihika sat beside her and kept her hand on her shoulder and spoke : " akka pr ek project ke liye apko eh sb sehne ki jrurat nhi hai...i think u should tell about him to appa...

Ishita was about to say something meanwhile vandu called them for dinner and ishita spoke getting up: mihiku please tum yeh sb appa ko mat btana or haan iss matter ko mai smbhal loongi.. Don't worry she said with sweet smile and rushed towards the washroom to get changed



At the same time In bhalla house
All were having their dinner, mihir was also having his dinner at bhalla house. Then toshiji thought to initiate the talk with raman about marriage and spoke

Toshiji: raman puttar mene tujhe bola tha na ki pammi se mene kuch ladkiyon ki photos magvai hain teri shadi ke liye tu dekh ke bta de teri choice toh fir mai baat age bda doogi...

Raman getting irritated spoke: maa aap fir shuru ho gye.. Mene kha na mujhe abhi shadi nhi krni...

Toshiji( faking tears): tujhe teri maa ki kuch bhi fikar nhi hai na raman...hmesha apni manmani krni hai...tujhe apni maa ki tbiyat ka zrra sa bhi khyal nhi hai na... Or mene kb kha ki tu abhi shadi kr pehle ladki dekh le agar pasand ayi tbhi shadi krvaugi ese hi thodi...

Raman felt guilty for bhaving like this with his mother and spoke softly : maa maa please aap ese mata bolo please... Acha ok...sirf apke liye mai photos dekh loonga pr meri ek condition hai...

Toshiji got happy hearing raman and said getting excited : bol bol... Puttar kya condition hai...

Raman: yehi ki agar mujhe koi bhi ladki pasand nhi ayi un photos mein se toh..aap mujhe force nhi krengi shadi ke liye...

Toshiji: haan mai kyu krungi esa... Mai apne puttar ki icha ke khilaf thodi teri sahdi krvaungi... Thik hai mai tere room mein already photos rakh di hain table pr tu dekh lena...

Mean while mihir whisper in raman ear

Mihir: "bhai vese shadi ke liye ishita ji bhi buri ladki nhi hai... She has all the abilities to handle you ...if u want then I can help you with this... " he spoke while chewing his food

Raman glared him seeing raman mihir got scared and lowered his eyes. Mr. Bhalla finished his dinner and spoke getting from his seat

Mr.bhalla: mihir aaj raat tum yahin ruk jao ...raat boht ho gyi hai...

Mihir nodded and spoke : ok uncle ji...

All had their dinner at bhalla house and retired to their respective rooms but mihir followed raman to his room after entering the room he said " bhai apne mujhe cafe wali baat nhi btayi abhi tk... "

Raman sat on couch and spoke : so what... I won't tell you... Kyuki mai tujhe jwab dena jruri nhi smjhta... Or haan tu mere or ishita ke matter se door rho... Smjhe...

Mihir: but bhai..

Raman cut him in mid and said : mene kha na mihir kuch nhi hai hmare beech mein...moreover u should concentrate on ur and mihika's matter... Don't bother about useless things around u...now go and sleep

Mihir huffed as he knew that raman is not gonna tell him anything so there is no use of staying here, he went to his room saying good night to raman
After mihir's exit raman's eyes fall over a packet which was laid upon the table beside his laptop he thought to go through it. He picked it up and open to know that it contained some girls photos and he started flipping those photos one by one suddenly he halted at his task when he found photo of ishita. She was wearing blue kanjiwaram saree with golden border and red blouse. She was looking breathtaking in that saree.he was staring at her curves all lost. He was dumbstruck after seeing her in that awtar. He was just drowing in her hazel eyes which was showing him other emotions of her instead of business woman and yes jhansi ki rani too. Her smile was so pure, the glow on her face was something which was adding her beauty. She has beautiful sharp features. Raman was staring her photo without blinking his eyes and he thought
Raman(st): "how beautiful she is...her innocent smile... Her eyes, lips" then he chided himself for thinking like that about her" raman kya kr rha hai yeh tu... Pta hai na kon hai yeh... Ishita iyer vo hi ishita iyer jisne tujhe thapped mara tha... Jiski vjha se papa ne tujhe sbke samne danta... Or tujhe isse bdla lena hai...u have to teach her a nice lesson for slapping RKB... Yes don't fall for her beauty... Just focus on your task... But why she sent u her pic for marriage... Khin yeh uska koi plan toh nhi... I have to be careful

At the same time in iyer house ishita vandita and mihika was chatting in ishita's room they were talking about vandita's marriage days

vandita :ishu...do u remember... Tumhare mehndi kitni dark thi...or kehte hain ki jis ladki ki mehndi jitni dark hoti hai uska husband usse utna hi jyada pyaar krta hai..
She said elbowing ishita

Ishita: esa kuch nhi hai akka... Or vese apki bhi kam nhi thi...toh

Mihika cut her in mid and spoke
Mihika: so what akka... Bala jiju loves vandu akka alot...vandu akka keh rhi thi ki apke husband yani ki mere hone wale jiju apse boht love krenge..

Listening mihika ishita felt goosebumps all over her body. Then vandita spoke with teasing smile

Vandita: vese ishu... Amma was saying that she has started seeing a good looking and handsome guy for u...

Meanwhile mihika spoke : akka amma ki sui toh raman bhalla per tiki rehti hai hr vaqt...

Vandita: so what... He is handsome yaar... Have u seen him properly... What a charming personality he is... Dashing, handsome, moreover a business tycoon...

She was saying dreamily seeing her akka ishita spoke

Ishita: akka... Hold on your horses... U know naa...u r married also had a child...i must say akka i have to warn jiju beforehand...

She said making serious face listening ishita vandita quirk and spoke

Vandita: oh my god ishu...r u jealous for Raman...

Ishita: why would I akka... I m not jealous for anyone... And u know he is my business rival and i hate him... Yes

Mihika didn't let her complete her sentence and spoke
Mihika: u know naa akka...love starts from only hate...or apka toh

She was about to speak further but ishita glared her and spoke getting furious

Ishita: please mihika... Yeh kya lga rkha hai... Love and all... I don't like all this... Or don't try to add my name with that ravan kumar... If u do that again i swear i will kill u with my bare hands...

Vandita: why are u getting angry ishu... We were just joking kanna... U know that...

She said trying to calm her down then mihika spoke with sorry face

Mihika: i m sorry akka... I was just kidding... U know naa... Mai toh bs ese hi bol rhi thi

seeing mihika and vandita's face ishita broke into laughter, seeing her laughing vandita and mihika saw each other confusingly then ishita spoke while controlling her laughter

Ishita: mihiku, akka... i was also joking like u two...
Hearing this from her mihika and vandita opened their mouth in o shape and start hitting her

Vandu: ishu... Tune toh dra hi diya tha... Mene socha ab toh gyi bhains pani mein...

Mihika: u are very bad akka...

Ishita: acha ji...what was that u two were doing with me haan... Pyaar n all haan... Vo bhi uss ravan kumar se never ever in my life at least its not possible in this birth...

She said getting up from bed then vandita also got up and spoke

Vandita: ok ok... Pta hai hume...jyada bolne ki jrurta nhi hai...chlo .i m going to sleep now u two also go to sleep its too late...

Ishita: haan jao jao... Bala jiju wait kr rhe honge apka...apke bina unko nind nhi ati hogi ab toh... She said with teasing smile

Vandita: koi baat nhi ishu... Jb tera time ayega toh dekh loogin tujhe bhi...tere wala toh tujhe ek pal ke liye bhi akela nhi chodega...

Saying So, she went out from room then mihika spoke yawning

Mihika: akka m sleepy... Mai toh jaa rhi hu sone ke liye good night
After a while ishita also lay down on her bed and was thinking about vandita's word for Raman she thought

Ishita(st) : kya mai jealous thi akka ko raman ki ese praise krte hue sun kr... Pta nhi kyu mene ese suddenly react kiya pehle toh kbhi mene esa kiya nhi...kitni baar mihiku and akka mujhe tease krte hai aur tarif krte hain dusre ladko ko bhi lekr pr unke liye mene kbhi ese react nhi kiya...nhi nhi esa nhi oh skta vo toh sirf ese hi tha... Mai jealous kyu houngi vo bhi raman ke liye... Vo toh bs kuch jyada hi praise kr rhe the raman ki tb mene esa bola... Haan esa hi hai...
She assured herself and after a while she fall asleep

Next day in iyer house ishita was getting ready for office in white crisp shirt with blue denim and mihika was still sleeping. ishita shook her and tried to wake her up

Ishita: mihiku get up... U will be late for ur college its already 7:45 ... She said while making pony tail of her hair. Listening her mihika got up in jerk and spoke going towards the washroom

Mihika: what akka...pehle nhi utha skte the... U should have woken me up earlier, Now i will get late because of you only...

Ishita saw her from mirror and said" acha ji...meri wajha se late ho gyi madam... what if wouldn't have woken u up then...ab jao jldi se ready ho jao... I m going downstairs ...come soon.

Saying so, ishita went downstairs and mihika went for her morning chores

At the same time at bhalla house all were having breakfast in silent then after a while toshiji broke the silence

Toshiji: raman puttar tune dekhi photos... Jo mene rakhi thi tere room mein... Koi kudi(girl) pasand ayi tujhe unme se...mujhe photo dede fir mai tere rishtey ki baat age chla doongi... Thik hai mera puttar..

Raman(while eating) : maa mene koi ladki pasand nhi ki...actually mene vo photos dekhi bhi nhi...

Toshiji: phir dekh le na puttar jaldi bta mujhe...chlo Aaj shaam ko dekh ke bta dena thika hai...

Raman: thik hai maa bta doonga...khush...papa m leaving for office aap aajan...mihir ho gya tera breakfast chal tu bhi mere sath chal...

Mihir: yeah bhai chlo...byee every one..
Both raman and mihir left and toshiji spoke to mr. Bhalla while retreating raman figure

Toshiji: bhalla ji vo jo apke business partner hai... Jinke sath raman kaam kr rha hai aaj kal... Unki beti ki photo bhi hai usme... Vo kya naam hai uska...

Mr. Bhalla: ishita...he spoke while eating

Toshiji: haan vo hi ...kinni soni kudi(girl) hai bhalla ji vo... Apko kesi lagi apko toh pta hoga na uska...

Mr. Bhalla: kudi toh changgi hai toshiji... Ek baar yeh project complete ho jaye phir mai inn dono ke rishtey ke baare mein sochunga.

Toshiji: pr bhalla ji agar raman ko ek baar puch na chahiye iske baare mein... Agar usse koi or kudi pasand hui toh...

Mr. Bhalla: thik hai toshiji... Puch lena aap usse... Chlo ab mai office ke liye nikal rha hu... Shaam ko baat krenge..

He went out after finishing his breakfast and toshiji indulge herself in household work after finishing breakfast.

At the same time in iyer house mrs. Iyer was having her breakfast with vandita, mr. Iyer and bala, ishita and mihika had already left for their respective destination

Mrs. Iyer: vishwa... Mene ishu ki photo bheji hai uski shadi ke liye and kuch photos mangvai bhi thi...thik kiya na mene

Mr. Iyer: madhu... U should have asked her before... If she get angry then.

Vandita: amma...ishu ko pta hai...

Mrs. Iyer: nhi...yehi toh problem hai ki usse kese btao ya puchoo...u know naa... How she is...bala kanna tum baat kro usse, tumhari baat toh sunti hai vo...

Bala: ok amma...i will try to talk to her.

Mrs. Iyer: thik hai kanna...Agar ho ske toh evening tk puch lena

Everybody finished their breakfast and got busy in their work

It was lunch time in bhalla industry and raman was sitting in his cabin fully engrossed in his laptop after a while mihir entered the cabin and spoke settling himself on chair in front of raman

Mihir: bhai! Its lunch time

Raman: tujhe pta hai na three four days gurugram jana hai meeting ke liye

Mihir: bhai i forgot to tell u that meeting is tomorrow itself vese apke asth ishita ji bhi jayengi na. He said observing raman's expression as he wanted to know that whether ishita's mention do something to raman or not

Raman got shocked hearing him and spoke: what...who told u...

Mihir: bhai...i came here to tell u this only... They have prepond the meeting as their boss have to leave abroad till next week

Raman: this is so unprofessional of them...how is this possible... I haven't completed my work here... I think i should talk to them personally...

Listening raman mihir gets tensed and try to convince raman: bhai bhai...u don't worry about work , I'll handle it... I think u should go as i already called them and they apologized for it and bhai i have already fixed ur meeting with them day after tomorrow itself

He spoke bitting his tongue under his teeth getting scared of raman's reaction.

That's enough for this part... I hope u all like it... Please comment it gives encourage to write further...

Precap: ishra journey for gurugram
Edited by Sukhvi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for next part
Plzzz... Continue soon dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update
Ishita told mihika she will fell at home they left mihir was asking raman again and again raman got irritated mihir asked mihika to meet him in cafe next day ishita mihika and vandu scene was cute raman found ishitas pic in between other girls pic which toshiji had asked him to chose for marraige raman was ogling at ishita he was lost in her beauty but realized what he is doing he chided himself toshiji want raman to marry ishita mr.bhalla said let this project complete he will get ishra married what mihir is planning
Pls update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome
Thank you so much for the update
Please update next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update love this story please give more of ishra part in story totally loving it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you for the update... This chapter is engaging and exciting. .. There is a tinge of jealousy and facade. .. Mihir and Mihika are stunned on knowing about the other side of IshRa.. They try to pull each other's leg...

Mihir visibly happy, is busy in contriving to bring IshRa closer.. Mihika and Ishita involve in some banter with Vandu. . Ishita blurts out the happenings in the office and assures Mihika that she would take care of Raman..

Elsewhere, Raman who was emotionally blackmailed by Toshiji starts looking at the prospective brides and gets lost in the beauty of Ishita.. .He drools over her and his thoughts are preoccupied. .. Similarly, Ishita too gets jealous when Vandu goes gaga over Raman. .. Her POV was very convincing, in a state of confusion, rightly so. ..

Mihir fakes up an emergency to give some space for IshRa. .. IshRa are living in a bubble, they will eventually fall for the other. ..
Edited by srini18 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was such a Fabulous Chapter

I totally enjoyed it

Oh I'm loving how both Ishita and Raman speaks about each other
they hate each other yet Ishita almost spoke as if she was jealous
hearing Raman's praises while Raman alone in his room was admiring Ishita
at first before he realizes what he was doing
I admire the bond between the three sisters
now why did Ishita hide her first meeting with Raman , if she has hatred for him she will
surely speak about everything to Mihika while Raman too just avoids to tell Mihir
about his avenge towards Ishita
while both their mothers like Ishita and Raman for each other

waiting to see what will happen next
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: divz9769

Superb update

Ishita told mihika she will fell at home they left mihir was asking raman again and again raman got irritated mihir asked mihika to meet him in cafe next day ishita mihika and vandu scene was cute raman found ishitas pic in between other girls pic which toshiji had asked him to chose for marraige raman was ogling at ishita he was lost in her beauty but realized what he is doing he chided himself toshiji want raman to marry ishita mr.bhalla said let this project complete he will get ishra married what mihir is planning
Pls update soon
Thanks for the pm


Thanks dear😊

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