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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Friends How Are You this story Amma accident track se hai

Amma accident adi ne nahi shagun ne kiya hai so story start with raman going to picinic with shagun in this story me ashok support ishitha nd he is good man now nd ageki story me vidhuth character interduce kartha hu ishita aur vidhuth dono milkar raman achese sabak sikhayenge

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice concept continue soon .waiting eagerly for it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: venu66

Nice concept continue soon .waiting eagerly for it

thank u kal hi update kartha hu
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Cvs already had done much damage to ramans character and showing as if ishita is a solo lead of serial atleast in stories we shouldn't do it ...just a thought not mind
Best of luck
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting
But I think ishra bond should be stronger than that of shagun and raman or ishitha and ashok
Anyways All the best
Just an advice
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Posted: 6 years ago
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part 1

Ishitha raman love each other but dono ne love ko ek dusare ko batha nahi diya ishitha aur raman ki love us vakth strong hogaya ki amma accident. Amma accident ek dosere ko kareeb laya unki love feeling donko strong hogaya liken undonoki jindagime

Raman loves ishithaRaman goes picinic with shagun man me raman ishitha mujhe maf kardo me majboor hu me sab adi keliye karraha hu mujhe jalath math samjho me sab tik kardunga please ishitha maf kar do

Shagun in mind dekh ishitha me raman ko thujh se kaise door kardiya ( don't sad frinda raman ishitha ke tadpayenke in this story ishita strong ok nd shitan ka bazza adi ko bhi nahi chodunga me)

All members land in picinic spot ruhi ko bura laga raman se bhi bahuth gussa hai lekin ishita kehne par vo chup thi raman ruhi ko dekha vunko bura laga usko uski maa se dur kardiya lekin adi ki vaga se chup thi

On other side raman jane ke baad ishitha cries heart out mr & mrs bhalla ko ishitha ki halath nahi dekh jaraha hai

T : ishitha puttar shanth ho javo

I: kye mammi ji me unki biwi nahi hu me unki family nahi hu kye paraya kardiya maa me bahuth badi jalthi kiya maa unse payar karke me hi jalath hu maa unki jhoota cansan ko dekh kar me behak jaya ma vo abhi bhi shagun se payar karte hai shagun tic kehrahehai maa me ek banz hu unki bachonko aya hu

T : na puttar na tum banz nahi ho tum ma ho dil chota na kar puttar aaj pehli bar raman ko dekh kar mughe sharmida hu tu fikar na kar puttar hum sab tere sath hai me raman ko ache tarh sabak sikavunga vo bazar aurth buri saya meri parivar par nahi pade nahi dungi me vada karthi hu me kisi bhi hal me me tera aur raman ka rishtha nahi tootne nahi dungi me vada karthi hu all bhalla family members promise to ishitha .mihir bhi vahi hai all members ishita ke sath hai

I : kye ma kaya vaza ho sakth hai raman hum sab ki kilaf jake shagun ko saath diya

In mean time ashok vaha agaya

A : kye ki thumhari amma accident shagun ne kiya

All family members shock

I : kye

A: ha ishitha amma accident shagun ne kiya me paas sabuth hai us vayatd shagun ne adi bahana banke undone raman ko majboor kar diya raman uske jal me phasaya ashok see cctv futege all family members all members shock kaas kar ishitha

I: ishita ye sab dekh kar heart break hogaya undonki hug ko dekh kar puri tarh toot gaye us vakth ishita nazrome raman niche girgaya unke liye pyar bhi katham ishitha goes from there criers heart out all family members ishotha ko akela chod diya todi der keliye kye raman tum yesa kye kiye phiche dinom se thum amma ko insaf dilane ke liye ithna sab kiya ye accident shagu ne kiya yebath tum jankar un ko protect kar rahe ho sab kuch natak chii I hate u raman chi tum se pyar kiya bas ishita tum us insan ke nahi rona chahiya be strong ishita tum kamjor nahi vo insan emotional fool hai aaj se sab kuch katam raman hamari donoka rishta phir se ruhi ki maa aur papa bas is jayada kuch nahi

Other side raman adi bahuth enjoy kar raha hai raman adi ko dekh kar bahuth kush hai ruhi ye sabh dekh kar roke room me chala jaya ye sabh raman dekha ruhi phiche chala jaya ruhi kya huva beta tum ro kuye rahi ho

R: mujhe nahi rehna yeha me ishimaa pas jana hai please mujhe ishimaa ke paa jana hi

Ra: ruhi ko dekh kar bahuth bura laga ruhi yeha avo hum jarur ishitmaa ke paas jate hai par ab nahi hai beta adi bayya pehibar hamari saath ayana hum sab enjoy karenge phir hum ishimaa ke pas jayenge tike na

R : ruhi gussa agaya bas papa vo bhai nahi hai vo hamari family nahi hai na vo meri mamma nahi hai kye hum yaha agaya ishimaa ko chod ke hai adi bhayya sach kaha vo jo kahe ge tum vasye kar rahe ho nd said cries

Ra : ruhi tum kya bol rahi ho beta yesa nahi hai

R : vasa hi hai papa adi bayya kehrahi hai hum sab ek family hai tum adi me shagun ishimaa out sider ek banz hai tab me kaha yesa nahi meri ishima hai tab adi kaha pagal ruhi papa tumhari baath nahi man raha hai vo hum log ke bath sunthe hai me aur shgun mamma ki

R : yesa nahi hai meri papa me aur meri mamma se bhuth payyar karte hai

A: hahahaha pagal vo thume se payar nahi me aur meri mamma se payar kartha hai ek bath puch ti hut hum yaha anese interested nahi hai na tun bhi kehdiya hoga tum yaha nahi ana hai iam right

Ru : nodes yas

A: papa tumhari bath suni nani na me aur meri mamma keh diya hum picnic jana hai vo bhi ishitha ke bina vo hamari bath man kar ishitha ko chod ke picinic agaya hum ek family tarh ab bathavo papa kis ki bath mante hai me keh dunga vu ishita ko chod ke hum sab ek sath rahe hai vo bath bhi papa manege

Ru: cries heart out

R : gussa agaya adi ke bathome tabh realize huva me bhuth badi kardiya mene ruhi ko dekh kar raman ki ansu rukh nahi raha asa nahi beta meri bath suno

Ru: yesa hi hai papa tum vunlog ki baath mante ho ek bath kankol kar sunlo papa me unlog ke saath nahi rehna hai me ishimaa ke bina nahi rahunga tum chahe to unke pas javo me nahi ana hai vo lag ko meri kuch nahi lagthi nahi to vnlog ki baath sunke mujhe ishimaa se door kardiya na me mar javuna

Ra : ruhiii tun kya bol rahe ho yesa nahi hai beta santh hoja meri baath suno

Ru : jhoot math bolo papa tum vunlog baath mante ho ye sach hai papa mereko ishimaa se door kardiya na e sach mar javunga ro ro ke behosh ho gaye

Ra: raman shock ruhi anke kol beta please me kise samjavo tum ko mebhi teri ishima ke bina nahi ji sakth ilove har ruhi please anke kolo hum abhi thumari ishima ke paas jate hai mujh se bahuth badi jalthi ho gaye hai adi ko samjane ki baza unki baath mankar sab ki dil ki tod diya mughe nahi hoga me sab ishitha ko bathavunga ruhi me hum ishimaa ke paas jathe hai phir hum tino tum aur me aur ishimaa picinic par ake kub sari enjoy karege tum aur ishitha ko bahuth dukh diya na me sab tic karunga

Raman pics ruhi bags ke sath bahar agaya adi hum vapas jana hai

A: kye hum sab enjoy karene ge papa hum abhi aye na yaha

R : ruhi tabiyath tic nahi hai me ruhi ishitha ke pass le jana hai so bags jaldi pack karke avo me ghadi ke paas wai karth hu

A: me nahi ane hai me yahi rahunga thumb hi yehi rukh na ho ga me paas nahi to me tum se baath nahi karunga

R: adi ruhi tabiyath tic nahi hai hum jana hai please

A; nahi ruhi natak kar rahi hai thum kya bol rahi ho ishitha uski maa nahi hai shogun mamma uski ma hai unko shagun mamma paas chodo vohi samhal legi

R: adiii jaldi pack kar avo time nahi hai

Sh: adi sahi kaha raman mujhe do ruhi ko me samlunga adi ko tumhari jarurath hai shagun raman ke paas chala gaya

R: nkabad dare k shabd bolana tum ruhi maa nahi ho ishita uski maa hai jaldi pak karke avo varna me tum donko yehi chod ke chala gavunga

Sh: vo ma nahi hai hai raman vo ek banz hai meri beti aya hai vo yaad nahi to me yadd dilavunga thum asko chubhi nahi kiya abhi bhi tun mujhe payar karte ye bath puri hone se phela raman keech ke shagun ko tappad mara

R: kabad dar meri biwi ko ek lafz bola na me yehi mar dunga tujhe kya lagtha hai thum jh bola me vahi kar rahi hu ye teri jalath family hai me ye sab adi keliye kiya ab ye bhi nahime sab ishita ko batavunga vahi sab samlegi mejarha hu tum log jab ana chahte ho tab ana good bye

Bechre raman ko patha nahi alreay tufani uski jindagi me agaya


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: komal29

Cvs already had done much damage to ramans character and showing as if ishita is a solo lead of serial atleast in stories we shouldn't do it ...just a thought not mind

Best of luck

😊😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Interesting
But I think ishra bond should be stronger than that of shagun and raman or ishitha and ashok
Anyways All the best
Just an advice

pakka shugun ache se band bajavunga us shitan bache kobhi nahi chodunga
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good story at about old story dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update
Enjoyed reading

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