Ishra TS: Na Jaane Kab Pyaar Ho Gaya (Part 6 on pg 37 on 31/5/2020) - Page 21

Originally posted by: Lura

Waiting for the update

Originally posted by: srini18

Hey Mam,

I was reading some stories and came across your work, which is quite captivating...It's so fresh, appealing and engrossing... Though the basic characters are same but characterisations are pretty tangential which caught my attention...Coming to Raman, he lost his wife Shagun in an accident and as expected was webbed in his own world of gleam and sorrow... Adi, the only child of Raman is an apple of Bhalla's family but devoid of paternal love because of Raman's insecurities and harrowing past... Raman cloaks his inner self and presents himself as rude, arrogant, cold hearted businessman... To be honest, there is nothing different about this RKB of yours, but for whom I fell for is ACP Ishita...

Jeez, all the stories I have read so far mostly depicted Ishita as a doctor, student, housewife or at the most Business woman but your ACP Ishita stood out for me ...Yes she is righteous, she put her husband behind bars for illegal activities and divorced him ... Yes she is bold and independent, became the real JKR , mauling the goons single handedly..Yes she is a warm and affectionate person, she could sense the pain of Adi and made Raman realize his mistake...

Though all these qualities make her to be an ideal role model but the most standout trait is her role as a mother... The way she brought up Ruhi without making her feel the absence of father is exemplary.. A perfect example of how even a single parent can raise a child without any goof ups...Moreover, Rooh's upbringing was a lesson , I felt... Ishita made her daughter a replica of herself...She made her strong, wise and instilled courage, belief and hope but at the same time her innocence wasn't lost... The hospital scene was a perfect example of how strong and yet at the same time attached Ruhi was ..Ruhi, surprisingly and shockingly consoled all the others but the little girl was her own self when she was with her mother...She broke down like every child and took solace in the embrace of her mother's wamth...

However, Adi was emotionally weak, more fragile and less matured as compared to Ruhi... This was a result of too much pampering inflicted on him.. He was always protected, cocooned by Bhallas without
exposing him to the real world...He could feel a void in his life.. and his breakdown during the essay writing scene is a testimony to the above mentioned fact... However, the way Ruhi made him realise was fabulous...

Coming to Ishra, though each of them haven't had a positive opinion at the beginning, but now started understanding better... Moreover, Raman started feeling for her due to Ishita's inherent good traits but don't see Ishita reciprocating the same... However, since you have treaded a different path, I request you to think on different lines as far as their relationship is considered too, not the mundane, cliched love story...

I request you to keep me in loop, when you come up with further updates. Thank you

Originally posted by: akriti154

Beautiful update

So Raman has developed feelings already

I like it

But he's gonna get scolded badly

Let's see

Interesting precap

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot for the lovely response.

Part-5

It was 10:34pm when Raman entered in the Bhalla house all tired due to work load. The house was all silent and only a few lights were on but as he was going upstairs, someone switched on the lights. He smiled and turned only to see her standing there. She told him to go and come back after changing till she is warming his dinner. He simply nodded in yes and went away knowing well that there is no use of arguments as she will not listen to him. He came back after 10 minutes and saw his dinner was all ready on dining table. He thanked her with a sweet smile and settled to have dinner while she too sat beside him till he completed and then both left.

Next morning, all got ready for the day and left. Only Raman and Mrs Bhalla were at home, Mrs Bhalla was in her room while Raman was sitting in hall itself working on laptop when he heard some footsteps and looked at the entrance only to see her coming while she too smiled brightly seeing him again at home at this time waiting for her only. He kept the laptop on the table while she too came to him and both shared a side hug. He told her to go and take a bath, then they will have breakfast. She left and came back after half an hour only to see Mrs Bhalla and Raman sitting in Hall and talking. She went to Mrs Bhalla greeting her and asked,

I - Kaise ho mummy ji?

Mrs Bhalla- Ek dum first class. Tu bta, thak gayi hogi na bhot.

Ishita smiled and hugged her.

I - I'm very lucky to have a mother in law like you. Aap kitne supportive, caring aur loving ho. Aap nhi hote ho to Kaise handle hota sab kuch? You are world's best mother.

Mrs Bhalla - Tu bhi to world ki best bahu hai.

I - Aap na mummy ji, kabhi bhi aapki tareef Karne Lago to aap Ulta Meri hi tareef karti ho.

Raman - To in short, you both are good. You both had maintained your relationship very well.

I - By the way, aap kya Kar rhe ho Ghar par? Office kyu nhi Gaye?

R - Dekha maa, koi fark hi nhi padta. Pati office ka Kam plus breakfast Tak chod Kar madam ka wait Kar rha tha aur koi Kadar hi nhi hai.

I - Achaji. Chalo breakfast kar lete hai varna aap Mera taano se hi pet bharwa Doge.

Mrs Bhalla - Tum dono breakfast karlo. Main ek friend ke Ghar ja rhi hu.

I - Thik hai mummyji.

She left. Ishita looked at Raman who came to her and holding her hand, took her to dining table. He made her sit on the chair then himself sat beside her, served to both of them and both started having breakfast with little chat about their professional time. After breakfast,

R (wounding his hands around her neck) - So??

I - So now you are getting late for office my dear husband.

R - But I'm not feeling to go leaving my beautiful wife after all I don't get much time with her these days.

I - I know this but you are forgetting that you are handling a very important project.

Without saying anything, Raman was going but turned and said,

R - I hate you madrassan, Tere andar ek bhi romantic bone nhi hai.

Saying so Raman left to office while Ishita smiled and went to have some rest.

At night, Raman came early than usual time and got surprised to see Ishita at home and whole family spending good time together which he missed in last few weeks. Mrs and Mr Bhalla sitting happily living their family time, watching their children and grandchildren's masti, 7 months pregnant Mihika was sitting and Ishita was pampering her to eat dry fruits while Romi was teasing her and Mrs Bhalla was scolding Romi. At the other side, 18 year old Adi and 14 year old Ruhi were enjoying their cute fights while 6 year old Hardik and 5 year old Pihu were lost in themselves only playing and talking anything. He smiled fully living this moment after a long time. Mrs and Mr Bhalla looked at each other feeling contented and then looked at their children and grandchildren, they were happy for their sons, especially Raman who was lost in his grief only after Shagun's death but now both of their sons are happy in their married life, plus their daughters were also happily married, Rinki to Mihir and Simmi to Rajeev. Raman too joined them. Mrs Bhalla told him to have his dinner first. He came after freshen up and saw Ishita still sitting with Mihika. Before he could say anything, ruhi called him for dinner.

R - Kya Ishita, aaj to Meri bachchi ko….

I - Aapki bachchi ko hi karna tha apne Papa ko Khana serve to meri Kya galti?

R - Meri pyari beti ko kuch mat kehna. She was the one who used to wake up for me till I came back in night when you were on night duty. She used to warm food for me.

I - Ha to problem Kya hai? Aaj bhi vhi Kar rhi hai….

R - Sharm Kar…..

He was interrupted by ruhi who took him to have food. Adi came to Ishita and hugged her who was admiring Ruman.

After sometime, all dispersed to their respective rooms. Ishra were lying hugging and talking about their children.

I - Hamare bachche kitne samajhdar aur responsible hai na?

R - Just because of you…

I - Not again Raman.

R - Why not? I will say this again and again till my last breath that it's all because of you what we are today. Ruhi ko to tumne pehle hi aisa banaya tha then you made me and Adi also responsible and loving. Thank you.

I - Ha ab aapka thanks bolna hi reh gaya tha.

R - Ok leave it. Let's talk about something else.

I - What is that?

R - Don't you know?

I - What?

R - Koi nhi yad bhi karwa denge. To madam, aapki jankari ke liye bta du ki do din bad hamari marriage anniversary hai.

I - So what? Anniversary ek din aayegi aur dusre din chali jaayegi.

R - Kya? Sach mein madrassan Tere mein Zara sa bhi romance nhi hai.

I - Excuse me. Romance ki bat Kar Kon rha hai? I think aap bhul Gaye hai ki aap jis romance ki bat Kar the hai na vo Maine hi aapke andar jagaya tha. Aap to rehne hi do. If you forgot then I would like to remind you the day of our first marriage anniversary. You behaved so unromantic. Forget romance, you were so insensitive towards me. And now you are calling me unromantic…..

R (emotionally) - Sorry.

I - Ha ab sorry aur thanks hi kehte rehna…. I'm sorry main vo sab nhi kehna chahti thi…

R - Relax. You said what I did….

I - Leave it. Tell me, what are you thinking to do on our seventh anniversary?

R - I thought to discuss with you but due to your night duty, we didn't get the time. So madam, what do you want….

I - I had already planned.

R - What?

I - Surprise.

R - No, you are going to tell me…

I - No, I will not. And you will not ask me about it. Got it.

R - Ab biwi police wali ho to pati bechara Kya keh sakta hai.

I - Hmmm, mere bechare pati Dev.

She said kissing his cheek. Then they talked about Adi and Ruhi. After some time both slept after talking about their family.

It has been seven years of Ishra marriage. Many ups and downs came in their married life. There were many challenges in front of them like Ishita's profession which may need her attention and time at any time. Many times, she used to be on duty 24 hours leaving her husband, children and family but they were the important support system for her, especially her husband and in-laws who always supported her and never complained to her regarding her duty. They understood the importance of her duty. Her sister, husband and mother in law used to handle home and children in her absence and never complained. Ruhi was already sensible but now become more sensible and responsible. From last few months, she even started to wait for Raman and serve him his dinner relieving Mihika and Mrs Bhalla whenever Ishita went for night duty and Raman had important work. She along with Adi used to study till late so thought to serve him also in that time. Adi also became sensible and responsible with Ruhi and under Ishita's love and guidance.

Next two days passed smoothly. On anniversary day, Raman wake up with the ring of the alarm in his mobile. He opened his eyes slowly and got surprised to see himself in a different room which was decorated and there were many photos of Ishra and family hanging from the ceiling. He then recognized that he is in the farmhouse. He was looking around smiling when he heard,

I - A very good morning my dear husband.

He turned only to see Ishita coming with the bouquet of roses. He got up from bed while she reached to him and said giving the bouquet of flowers to him.

I - Happy anniversary.

Raman took the bouquet and wished her back with a hug. Then he asked breaking the hug.

R - Tum mujhe yahan laai Kaise?

I - Vo Kya hai na, mere pati ko sote huye kuch pta nhi chalta, to bus le aai utha Kar.

R - I know you are strong but not that much that you will carry me. Badi aai utha Kar. Sach bol.

He said wounding his arms around her neck and meeting their foreheads. She smiled and said,

I - Romi aur Adi the na help ke liye.

R - Police bani kidnapper.

I - Kya Kare pati Dev ki complaints hi itni sari thi ki main time nhi deti thik se. So now we are here to spend much needed quality time. All alone…

R (pulling her more closer) - and I'm not going to leave this chance. So…

I (pushing him back) - So first go and freshen up.

R - Ha lekin…

I - Lekin wekin kuch nhi, first go and freshen up, take bath then only you are allowed to come to me.

R - Ab jyada ho rha hai madam.

Before he could do anything, she pushed him in bathroom and ran away from there. Raman smiled.

After sometime, Ishita was keeping breakfast on the dining table when he hugged her from back. She smiled and was saying but interrupted by him,

I - Raman aap….

R - Ab tu bhi mujhe nhi rok sakti kyonki ab main Teri ek bhi nhi sunne wala, ab mere romance me beech koi nhi aa sakta.

He said turning her to him and hold her closer from waist.

I - Even I'm not going to stop you. No rok tok, no haddi, nothing, only you and me and our memories.

R - Ohho madrassan. Mujhe Meri purani romantic biwi vapas mil gayi.

I - Ji, ab hum milkar hamari purani yaadein taaza karenge aur kuch nayi yaadein banayenge.

She said smiling, making him to smile too. She pulled a chair for him and signalled him to sit. He sat while she encircled her arms around his neck from back and said,

I - So my dear husband, ready to have breakfast.

R (holding her hands) - Wah! Aaj to Meri lottery lag gayi. Matlab aaj main Meri pyari biwi ke pyare hatho se bna hua Khana ussi ke hatho se khane wala hu. Kya bat hai?

I - Maine kab kaha ki main apne hatho se khilaungi.

R - Bolne ki Kya jarurat hai, hum to bin bole samajh jate hai aapke dil ki baat.

I - Achaji.

R - Hmmm.

Both smiled. Ishita also sat beside him and served aalu ke paranthe in a plate. She fed him a morsel and was about to feed him again but he fed her. Like this both completed their breakfast along with their usual taunts to each other….

Here I'm ending this part. I will clear it soon how ishra got married and the past.

Precap - Ishra remembering old memories.

Lovely update

What a twist ishra got married and it has been seven years adi is 18 and ruhi is 14 now loved ishra talk that was beautiful raman and his family supported ishita alot it was ishra anniversary ishitas surprise was beautiful

Pls update soon

Thanks for the pm

Beautiful update

Ishita has balanced everything so well

Raman was thankful to her

He apologised to her for his past insensitive behaviour

So many years passed by

She surprised him

Eagerly waiting to read their old memories

Ty 4 d pm too

Awesome update

Continue soon

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Awesome fab fantastic chap

Too good

Ishra are best

Please cont soon

Awesome update

Lovedit

Story got leap

Ishra married

Waiting to know about past

Ishra living happily with adiru

Update soon

Beautiful updt

Many years passed

Adi is 18,ruhi is 14

She surprised him

Updt soon