#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29

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EmeraldStar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Lovely OS

Raman jealous

Ishra so adorable

Loved the way u penned

Totally loved it

Thanks for the pm

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Divanru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Lovely OS .

So perfect for the song .

Ishra had breakup but Raman couldn't take other men ogling on his girl .

Ishita had purposely done this

They patched up .

Nice onec

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lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

The best romantic update dear

What an written dear

No one can beat you in romantic written up dear

Doesn't feel vulgar in any part more than that it make me to read it again and again love it like anything dear

It was perfect

Mihir said about ishra love story to mihika was cute

Jallu puttar is treat to watch

I am thinking both are breakup due to his new car both are more than baby

Their reunion was so hot

I am unable to express in words what I feel while reading dear

A romantic movie filled with so much love

Both give tough time in making love to each other

Love you so much dear

God bless you always

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aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

awesome... romantic os di...
raman broke up with her because she hated his new car seriously...raman bhi na...loved possessive raman...
finally they patch up once again...
totally loved it

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

fabulous OS Akriti
super hot
they patched up finally

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Halidha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Raman is possessive and wild lol..Ishu just dressed up to provoke Raman and the consequence was too hot to handle..This crazy couple just broke up for ishu hating new car and at last got patch up ..

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Ishrasoul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

hi friends...
My first one shot of this thon.. Fingers crossed i hope you all will enjoy this full emotional story..
Enjoy reading
Ishra One Shot: Itna Karo na Muje Pyaar
Bhalla house was decorated like a bride as it was very special day for them their only son was returning from London after completing his studies and mr and mrs bhalla were very proud of their son they wanted to welcome their son in a grand style and they have a surprise for their son also...
As the door bell rings an emotional mother runs towards the door and hurriedly opens it and gets happy seeing her son after a long time of two years finally her wait is over her son is in front of her she hugs him and cries happily...
Raman: maa... Meri achi maa... stop crying... ab to mein laut aya hoon...
Mr bhalla comes and smiles at his son and says: don't stop your mother from crying you don't know how difficult it was for your mother...
Raman: dad... hum daily baat to karty thy...
Mr bhalla: jab tu baap banega na tab hum poochain gay ...
Raman: kiya dad... abhi shadi nahe hui aur ap aisi baatain kar rahy hain... lagta hai mere maa papa ko dada dadi bane ki bohat jaldi hai... pehli kaha hota I would have impressed any girl in London and would have come back with your dil and grandchild...
Mrs bhalla hits him and says: pagal hai tu...
Mr bhalla: go and have rest...
Raman: no dad I want to spend time with you and maa
Mrs bhalla: sham mein party hai phr rest nahe miley ga you go and have rest
Raman: okay maa... love you...
Mrs bhalla smiles raman leaves while mr bhalla asks: toshi jee we are not doing anything wrong na...
Mrs bhalla: is mein galat kya hai apne bete ki engagement hi to karwa rahy hain..
Mr bhalla: we should ask him once...
Mrs bhalla: iski koi zaroorat nahe hai raman ishita ko pasand karta hai mein maa hoon raman ki mein janti hoon...
Mr bhalla smiles...
Evening
Party was on full swing while bhalla were early waiting for iyers to come... raman was enjoying all the attention he was getting from his friends after a long time... soon iyer too shows up along with ishita who was dressed in golden heavy embrioded anarkali dress... bhallas greets iyers and welcomes them... as he sees ishita standing with his mother his smile grew wider and his heart start beating fastly...
Raman thinks: arey ye madrasan yahan kya kar rahi hai... uffo raman kaisa sawal hai obviously maa papa ne invite kiya hoga ... kitni pretty lag rahi hai ...
His chain of thoughts break as mr bhalla calls raman... raman walks towards him and greets mr and mrs iyer while ishita looks down feeling his gaze on herself...
Raman: hi...he smiles lightly at ishita...
Ishita too smiles back and responds: hello...
Raman: so... kya chal raha hai... he start the conversation... mrs bhalla signs mr bhalla and whispers: see bhalla jee I am right... mr bhalla nods...
Ishita looks at raman and says: I have started internship..
Raman: congratulation...
Ishita: thank you...
Raman: wesy aik baat kahon? He asks...
Ishita: sure...
Raman: in do saalon mein... tum kaafi badal gayi hoon... ishita looks at raman trying to understand what he is saying.. raman continues to says: I meen to say... tum aur bhi khoobsorat hogayi ho... He winks at her making her heart flutter... she looks down and smiles shyly while her cheek turn pink... Raman chuckles seeing ishita and admires her.. both were busy in their own world when mr bhalla calls out: ladies and gentlemen... as you all know today my son return from London after completing his education and I am very proud of my son... I have one more announcement ...
Raman questioningly sees his father... mr bhalla continues to say: I am really feeling happy that my friendship with mr iyer is now turning into relation... I am announcing the engagement of raman kumar bhalla with ishita iyer...
All claps...
Raman surprisingly looks at his mother who smiles at him... raman mouths: I love you mom you are best...
Mrs bhalla caresses his hairs and asks: kaisa laga surprise...
Raman: its best... he smiles..
Mr bhalla: now I call raman and ishita on stage to exchange the rings...
Iyers bring ishita to stage while raman too came along with his mother... raman forward his hand and ask: may i...
Ishita gives her hand to raman who slips the ring into her finger... all claps...Ishita too makes raman wear the engagement ring... both smiles at each other and shares an serene eyelock..
Soft music start in background and mr bhalla announces couple dance... raman goes on his knees and forward his hand and say: may I have the honor to dance with most beautiful lady of the evening...
Ishita slip her hand into his and says: sure my would be hubby... Both smiles and start swaying on the music...
beliya ye tune kya kiyaMaine kiya tera intezar ...
Raman twirls her both were looking into each other eyes lovingly...
itna karo na muje pyar...
raman pulls her closer and rest his hands on her waist while ishita put her head on his shoulder both moves their body on the rhythm of the song...
Sathiya ye tune kya kiya... beliya ye tune kya kiyaMaine kiya tera intezar ...
Raman: I am really lucky that you are coming in my life...
itna karo na muje pyar...
ishita: acha... muje to laga tha kay I am lucky that I am getting you as my lifepartner...
Sathiya ye tune kya kaha... beliya ye tune kya kaha...
raman tucks her loose hair behind her ear and came close to her making her heart skip beat... he whispers: wesy aik baat aur hai... ishita looks at him...
U na kabhi karma intezar...
Raman: mein ne kya hai tumse pyaar...
maine kiya hai tumse pyar... Song plays in background
ishita looks into his eyes and says: itna karo na muje pyaar... both smiles... both hugs each other and song ended...
soon time start flying their marriage were fixed after one month... ishita and raman were enjoying the beautiful phase of their life.. raman surprises ishita with his sweet gestures always sometime takes her on long drive or coffee date... both were living a heavenly life full of happiness and love...
soon their marriage day comes, both were sitting infront of holy fire while pandit was chanting mantras.. raman holds her hand and winks at her... ishita smiles and sign him to concentrate on the Pooja... pandit ask raman to tie the mangalsutra around her neck.. raman complies... raman fills her partition with sindoor... pandit declares both as husband wife...
all blessed the couple for a joyful life... ishita bids her parents bye emotionally while raman holds her hand and assures her that he will be with her always... bhallas welcome their daughter in law grandly and perfrom rituals... raman and ishita start their journey of new life... their love was blooming with the passage of time...
everything was perfectly going six month passed...suddenly, raman health start worsening he was losing his weight and continuous headache was making raman all dull... one he day looses his conscious during the client meeting... all rushes to hospital... doctor start taking different test.. raman stops his assistant from calling family and meets doctor...
doc: mr bhalla.. I am really sorry to inform you that you are having brain tumor...
raman shockingly looks at doctor...
doc: see mr bhalla its on last stage... you have only six months...
raman feels his whole world crashed down... his phone rings, he takes the call... it was ishita... : hello raman... where are you?? Mein kabse wait kar rahi hoon... ap jaldi ghar ajao...
raman: mera wait na kiya karo ishita...
ishita: ap ghar to ao...
Raman humms in response and takes the report and leaves to home... as raman enters the house all shouts surprise... he happily looks at all and sees whole house was looking like a nursery... baby cloths, toys, crib, balloon flowers were every where... he looks at ishita who was sitting on sofa and smiling at him...
He walks towards her and sits beside her... ishita cups his face and says: congratulations raman... you are becoming father... I am pregnant...
Raman gets teary... he closes his eyes and says: I am so happy ishita... You cant imagine how much I am happy... muje ab aur kuch nahe chahiye... tum aur humara bacha... bus itna hi kaafi hai... now I can easily die...
Itni mohababt saha na sakungaSach mani zinda raha na sakunga
all gets worried seeing raman talking like this.. ishita tightly holds his hand and says: ap hamesha mere saath rahogay... aisi baatain phr mat kijiyega... she cries...
raman: arry... Wo to bus wesy hi keh diya... tum janti ho na ajkal meri tabiyaat..
ishita: promise me you will not leave me.. bus ap muje aur humare bache ko sambhalain mien hoon na apko sambhalne... raman nods... ishita opens her arms raman hugs her feeling close to her heart...
Tujko samloo ye mera zimmaMain hu to kya hai jane tamanna...
raman thinks: I will not tell you anything ishita.. you need a tension free environment... mein to wesy bhi ja raha hoon... bus ye kuch din mein itni khushiyaan jeena chahta hoon kay koi kasak na rahy...
Ab jeena marana mera janam tere hath hai
feeling him restless ishita caresses his back and says: I am with you raman...
Maine kaha na sanam ...ab tu mere sath hai
raman: I know ... tum ho mere saath...
To phir samhalle me chala Jana kaha aa dil me aa...
all rejoicing the happy news... time start passing fastly... raman doenst leave any chance to love or pamper ishita... raman was living his last days happily trying to collect all happiness in this short span while ishita was happy with her life... what else she want from her life although she was unknown to the fact that destiny is going to snatch her raman from her...
it was the day of ishita ghodbharai... ishita was siting on bed waiting for raman while raman was taking forever to come... raman enters the room tiredly... he lays on bed... ishita caresses his hairs and says: raman... ap kuch chupa rahy ho kiya??? I am noticing that you are not alright... aur itni dair kahan hoty ho office phone karo to wahan bhi nahe hote...
raman looks at ishita... ishita holds his hand raman winces in pain... ishita sees the mark of the drip on raman hand...
ishita: raman... ye kiya hai... drip lagi kiya???
Raman: nahe... wo... he fumble...
Ishita: muje batao raman...
Raman looks at ishita and thinks: kiya bataon ishita.. ye bataon tumhara raman bohat jald tumse door ho jayega... ye bataon itna ilaaj karwane kay bawajood mein maut kay aur najdeek ja raha hoon... tum muje kho dogi ishita... his eyes gets filled with tears...
Ishita: raman...
Raman: wo.. aik dost ko blood ki zaroorat thi... tum ready nahe hui abhi tak..
Ishita: I am feeling tired raman...
Raman: aj mein tumhain ready karwa deta hoon...
Ishita smiles listening to raman and says: pleasure is mine...
Dil ke chaman ka hasna to dekha...
ishita was enjoying raman pampering while raman was making ishita ready with all his love... He just want to get a chance to see his baby once to just hold his babies once... from when he got to know that he is going to have twins his love and care for ishita is doubled and this is the only reason he is not telling the truth to ishita...
Jagi nazar ka sapna to dekha
as raman fills her partition with sindoor ishita hugs him tightly and smiles...
Ese bane hum ek jaan ek dil tu hai ke main huKahena ho mushkiljhoota basanti hai tu tan hai gulabi mera
raman kisses her forehead while she closes her eyes feeling his soft touch... raman trails down his kisses from her eyes to nose and finally to her lips... he was slowly kissing her as gentle as ever like he want to get lost in this moment...
Do rang milen ke baad hote nahi hai juda
the knock on door breaks their moment... ishita does her final touch up and sees raman and says: jaldi neeche ana...mein intezaar karongi...
raman nods...
Rituals begin raman was admiring his angel with all his love while ishita was enjoying her special day... mrs bhalla ask raman to come and sit beside ishita... raman smiles and start walking towards ishita.. his vision was getting blury while his head start blowing off with acute pain... he was trying to gets stable the only face he sees was hers... her smile... her eyes...
Ishita looks at raman and thinks something is wrong with raman... raman unable to hold his body falls down screaming holding his head in pain all rushes to raman... ishita shouts raman name seeing him in too much pain...
Hospital
As he was laying on bed while numerous wires were attached to his body... devastated ishita come and holds raman hands... he slowly opens his eyes and sees ishita..
Ishita: aisa kaise kar sakty hain ap you promised me that you will be with me always...she cries...
Raman: shush...I will be with you always in the form of our babies... you have to be strong for our babies... ishita... mein duniyia say ja raha hoon per hamesh tumhare dil mien rahonga...ishita hugs him...
Soon his heartbeat gets low... his hand on her head falls down with no life...
To phir samhalle me chala
seeing him lifeless, ishita scream in pain NO!!!!!!!!!!... raman... get up raman... Nahe... abhi nahe raman...abhi nahe raman... Please abhi nahe...
Jana kaha aa dil me aa...
their happy moments flashes while bhallas and iyers tries to console the broken ishita...
sathiya ye tune kya kiya... beliya ye tune kya kaha...
Raman left ishita to wait till she unite with raman in eternal world...

The end.
Thats it my dear friends i really hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comments and response dont forget to hit like also
Love you

Edited by ishrasoul - 7 years ago

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Akriti154

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

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Reading d note I was thinking raman won't like his parents surprise

But ishra had a fairytale wedding n a happy life until he got to know about his health

He didn't told anyone about it as ishiIs was pregnant

D last part was emo

He couldn't even hold his kids once

Thanks for pm

Edited by akriti154 - 7 years ago

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Res
Unres
Awesome Os dii
Very much emotional..
I love ur this type of writing I think I'm reading something by u after long tym..
Its starts as a simple beautiful fairytale love story
Loved Raman & Ishita's love for each other..
Both got each other & life spending smoothly bt one Strom comes as raman's health..
Poor her suffering from this big disease bt didn't said anything to anyone for shake of ishu & his babies..
Last part is so heart wrenching.. 😭
Thx for pm..

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago

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Rithika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Emotional one dii
Ishra love each other so much
Raman hid his health issues so that she won't be stressed
He so wanted to see their babies but couldn't
So heart touching.. loved it
Thnx for the pm

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