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Inspired by the song Sazaa- Nafees and Mumzy Stranger

Raman's hand slowly let go of Ishita's as she was wheeled away.
"Ishita" he cried dropping to his knees

"Papa, papa" Ruhi shouted as she ran over to him
"Its all my fault, I know she has high BP but do I ever not stress her out"

Kalah Main Baitha
Ya Tere Khyaala Vich Khoya
Ni Tere Bin Dil Nai Lagda
Har Pal Tere Yaadan Naal Ardhna
Ho Sakeya Tu Menu Maaf Kar
Sadeh Toh Galti Hogayee
Inj Na Deh Menu Sazaa Ve
Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye


Raman stood outside of the hospital room, watching Ishita
He closed his eyes

It was like he could still feel her body in his arms
The look in her eyes as she fumbled back and passed out

Slamming his hand against the wall he shouted in agony

Ni Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Ni Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Inj Na Deh Menu Sazaa
Ve Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Menu Sazaa Ve

"You can come in Mr Bhalla"
Raman sat next to Ishita

"You have to come back to me, what am I meant to do without you"
Raman cried, his head resting on her bed as he let out a guttural sob

"I love you Ishita, please just wake up"

Tera Hasna
Tera Rona
Chup Chup Ke Roj Menu Milna
Hun Bas Kar Apna Chirna
Inj Karkeh Ki Tenu Milna?
Tera Mera Rishta Purana
Tere Naal Keetay Si Vaadeh
Oh Tenu Naa Dehna Si Mera


Raman looked down at her pale face, his hand gripped hers, his head full of her memories

Her laugh when he would trip over something and shout at it
Her tears when she watched those old hindi films she loved so much

The way they would meet late at night while the family slept just to hold eachother and watch the stars
The way she teased him

Pushing her hair out of her face he kissed her forehead
"Wake up, please" he begged, his voice breaking

Ni Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Ni Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Inj Na Deh Menu Sazaa
Ve Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Menu Sazaa Ve


Raman stood up, his eyes blurry from the tears
He looked at the many wires attatched to her body

"Tell me off, complain im rude, tell me one more time the jewellery you like but expect me to buy the heavy kind because you know I never listen , just say something madrasan, I cant do this without you, the family need you"

Pausing he looked away
"I need you"

Sadi Pyar Nu Bhuli Na
Mera Dil Na Tu Todi Na
Ik Wari Tu Aah
Zara Sohniye Tu Hass Ke Vekhaa
Kyun Mera Akha Vich Bas Tera Mukhra Disda Ve
Meri Zehn Ch Kholgaya Hun Yaadan Bas Teriyan

Raman wouldnt survive if she didnt open her eyes
She was his everything, his world, the light in his previously dark life

Maybe if he kept his eyes closed it would all be a dream
A nightmare
Because no one could take someone as good, as pure, as beautiful as Ishita away from him

Not even God.

Ni Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Ni Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Inj Na Deh Menu Sazaa
Ve Shad Ke Chaliye Meri Heeriye
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Sazaa Ve
Ehh Na Deh Menu Sazaa Ve

"Raman"
The voice hed thought he would never hear again.
The voice of comfort, love and security

His Ishita's voice, calling out to him.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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M loving all your stories . It's very much emotional and shows ishra love in death .Good to read esp Raman's point of view . Do write more 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachii

M loving all your stories . It's very much emotional and shows ishra love in death .Good to read esp Raman's point of view . Do write more 😊

Aw, thank you! Im glad you like it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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emotional os loved ramans POV
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Originally posted by: sinak

Emotional OS

Loved it.

Hey, thank you, im glad you liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divz9769

emotional os loved ramans POV

Thank you, im glad you liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: myangels

emotional OS...

Liked it...

Thank you, glad you liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh wow another amazing OS!!
So emotional - Raman's POV is always a pleasure to read!!
You really portrayed his emotional beautifully!!
He cannot live with out her!
His family needs her!!
And turning away from her says that he needs her too!!
Superb!!

Looking forward to the next one!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nafnaf

Oh wow another amazing OS!!
So emotional - Raman's POV is always a pleasure to read!!
You really portrayed his emotional beautifully!!
He cannot live with out her!
His family needs her!!
And turning away from her says that he needs her too!!
Superb!!

Looking forward to the next one!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

Hey, I should be thanking you for your lovely comment!
Thank you for taking the time to write this and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
No problem:)
I will write another as soon as my exam is over on monday!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayakhan12

Hey, I should be thanking you for your lovely comment!
Thank you for taking the time to write this and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
No problem:)
I will write another as soon as my exam is over on monday!


Wishing you all the very best in your exams!
I am sure you will succeed with flying colours!!

I am also looking forward to reading more of your stories!!

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