His True Love (Part 4|Pg 20|Jan 17)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi! Hope you all are fine. I m back again with a new story. Bassically this concept isn't mine at all.
You all may known about the Rimjhim's Di
Writing challenge(LINK).
If you dont its a writing challenge in certain concept. You all can peek; if you want(mentioned the link). And i m trying my hand on concept 10. Just hoping ki I won't destroy the whole idea of Rimjhim Di's work.

Original concept:-Sagun come back to Raman and adiru but get shocked seeing Ishita bonding with them along with Ishra's two cuties.
I m changing some things here. They are:-
# It's not base in yhm except the charecters and their names.
# Adi-Ruhi are twins.
# Raman-Sagun never married nor they had a proper relation.

# Last but not the least; Ishra are gonna have kids later on the story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue : Below
Part 1
Part 2
Teaser
Part 3
Part 4

MY INDEX:- GIA'S GALLERY
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Prologue

Sagun smiled as she sit on her seat and soon the plane take off. Taday she is returning to Mumbai from Dehli. She look out of the plane remembering the past.
Sagun; a orphan; always wanted to be a supermodel and to get contact she later began to date some businessman. It would fulfill her desire and she would get some assingments also. One day in such party; she met Raman kumar Bhalla; the business tycoon of whole Asia. And they just spend a night but it cause her pregnancy. Though she wanted to abort it; she didnt thinking she could trap him with her forever but he did all test test to actually confirm that the baby was his and later agreed to take responsibility of the baby only. She spend that 9 months a great life but Raman didnt marry her. Though he had asked her once after her delivery that they could spend some time and maybe get married as the kids will need both of them; but she denied as she got a good modelling contract. And she just left.
At first it was good but later producer and director began to force them on her. She also got to known that she only got the contract as she was seen with Raman. After spending 5 yrs in modelling field also she couldnt get any fame nor earn good money. And some days before one of her friend asked her why dont she try to get Raman back as she is the mother of his child. So this is how she landed in Mumbai airport. But she couldnot get any info about Raman's whereabout and personal life; he was still the business tycoon but his personal life is too much personal. But she is also Sagun; she thought flipping her hairs back from the shoulder.
As she step out of Mumbai airport; she spotted a white Audi with RK marked in the front with gold. She knew Raman liked to kept everything ready to use; may it be his private jet or his seperate room in every best hotel in country but seing his favroite car in airport she was shocked. She remember she had once sat on it when her water broke and Raman was so scared that sth would happen to babies; he took them on this car. She thought to check if Raman is there or not.
As she got close; she was imperessed seeing a woman clad in driver's uniform but couldnt see her face aas she had cap on her face.
She knocked the glass and waited to she who it was but she was shocked seeing Ishita there.
Ishita Iyer; beauty with brain; topper of her clg and second most beautiful girl in her clg(of course; acc. to her) is in front her in Raman' fav car in a DRIVER's uniform???
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Finally; updated the prologue. Will be waiting for your replies.
Need at least 30 likes to start it. So pls if want to read more do like and comment.
love you all;
Gia
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update soon
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nycc prologue
lovely title
waiting fr uodt
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congo fr d new story
plz updt RKB's doll
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice prologue.
But ishu in driver uniform.
Confusing.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR UR NEW STORY DEAR
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Interesting Prologe dear
ishu is in driver uniform..
raman is rich n wealthy
update soon
thanks for pm

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