Ishra os-aadhe se adhure se bin tere hum,epilogue on pg 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Wow amazing story di
It was superbly writern
Felt like watching a movie in a go
Ishra at starts fighting for divorce
Where ishita was crying n raman was angry
It all happened due to one misunderstanding
He thought she betryed him
But in real she herself was unaware of her disability
Both dont want to get separate
Ishu saved raman from accident
But she heself met with accident
Last sce was emotional di
Overall i loved it a lottt
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Lovr
Anju
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Superb of di
Very well written
Loved d plot
Ishra misunderstood each other
Elders tried to interfere but both didn't listened to them
She pushed raman nd git hit by the car
Raman was he'll scared seeing her in pool of blood
Later he took her to hospital nd got to know that she don't know anything abt her being infertile
Both patch up nd happy ending
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
EPILOGUE

Mr bhalla opened the lock and ramab took ishita inside picking her in his arms.he made ishita settled on the couch and said -aap log rest kijiye, main coffee bana kar laata hoon.

Ishita -aap banayenge, Ek kaam kijiye, mujhe le chaliye kitchen tak. I will make it for everyone.

Raman and Mr bhalla said in unison -ji nahi, making ishita made a puppy face.

Mr bhalla -puttar, u r already injured and u want us to let to work. No was, u will rest while we will work. In fact only raman will work, Kyunki isne hi saara raayta phailaya hai. Naa yeh itna bada drama karta aur naa hi tumhara pair fracture hota. So basically it's his punishment for creating all this mess, that he will work and take care of u till u r fine. He said making Ishra smile.

Ishita -but papa ji, Raman sab kuch akele kaise karenge. Let me help him.

Raman -no way ishita, tum sirf rest karogi. Main tumhara khayal rakhunga. Papa is right, yeh galti meri hai. Tumhari iss condition ka jimmedaar main hoon, so I will only take care of u.

Mr bhalla -aur waise bhi, I am going to visit vaishno devi. So I will be out for few days.

Ishita -aise achanak, kyun papa ji.

Mr bhalla -kyunki Maine mannat maangi thi ki agar tum dono ka divorce wala problem solve ho jayega, aur tum dono ek saath ho jaaoge toh main matarani ka darshan karne jaaunga. Toshiji hamesha yahin karti thi, toh socha woh toh nahi hai. Let me try her idea and see it worked. So I am going to thank matarani. Ticket ho gayi hai, I will be going tomorrow.

Raman -but papa, aapne mujhe bataya bhi nahi. Aap akele jaa rahe ho.

Mr bhalla -no, Mr and Mrs iyer is also coming with me.aakhir woh dono bhi toh yahin chahte the. So we r going to vaishno devi and then we will go to tirupati. 15 days ka trip hai,will be back soon.

Ishita -arey papa ji, Itni jaldi. Kuch din toh ruk jaiye.

Mr bhalla -nahi puttar ji, I want to finish my mannat soon. Waise bhi raman is there to take care of u, naa puttar.

Raman -ji papa, I will take care of ur bahu. Aap achche se jao aur darshan karke aao. Aap log baitho, main coffee laata hoon, then I will help u in packing. He said and went inside while Mr bhalla was talking to ishita.

After sometime, Raman came with tea and snacks. They have together with little chit chat. Then raman took ishita to their room. Ishita got emotional seeing their room.she was looking around with moist eyes when raman hugged her and said -I am sorry, jaan.

Ishita hugged him tight and said -maine kabhi nahi socha tha, ki main kabhi yahan wapas aa paungi. Dobara aapko zindagi mein shamil ho paaungi. I was so alone without u raman. Please kabhi mujhe khud se yun dur mat kijiyega. I can't take it. Aapko pata jab Aap dur se mujhse, bahut baar mann kiya,ki maar daalun khud ko. Saara jhanjhat hi khatam ho jaaye, but himmat nahi hui. Lagaa kabhi aap mujhe apnane aaye toh. Aap kitne dukhi honge mujhe naa paakar. Main nahi maar paayi khud ko raman. I had to keep myself safe for u. She said and start crying bitterly.

Raman too cried and hugged her tight saying -thank god u didn't do anything wrong with urself, warna main mar jaata. Tumhe kho kar nahi jee pata.

Ishita -i am sorry, I love u raman.

Raman pecked her temple and said -love u too jaan. Now stop crying. U r already sick. Tumhari tabiyat aur kharab ho jayegi. He said and wiped her tears while she just snuggled into him.

He broke the hug and give her medicine. She had it and raman made her lay down. He kept a cushion under her legs and start patting her. Ishita was just looking at him.

Raman -so jao, jaan. He said closing her eyes.

Ishita -aapko sach much fark nahi padhta.

Raman -kis cheez ka.

Ishita -that I can't be a mother, main aapko kabhi aapka bachcha nahi de sakti.

Raman -sach kahun toh bura lagaa, like everyone I too wanted symbol of our love. Ek chota saa baby, joh hume mumma-papa banaye. But yeh chahat Itni badi nahi that I can loose u for it. Agar mujhe bachcha chahiye toh sirf hamara, aur agar tumhe baby nahi ho sakta toh I don't need any baby.

Ishita -i am sorry raman.

Raman -dont be, jis din tumse shaadi ki thi, iss vaade ke saath kiya tha that I will love u, support u in every phase of life. Toh khushi ho yaa gham, agar hum tum saath hai toh sab thik hai. Ab bahut ho gayi baatein so jao.

Ishita -kiss me.

Raman -kya?? He asked with shocked expression.

Ishita -kiss me Raman, I missed u alot.

Raman -but u r not, ishita cut him in between and said -I am good Raman, just kiss me once. I craved for ur love. She said and he took her lips in his and start kissing her hungrily. She too closed her eyes and start kissing him back with equal passion. They kissed for long and finally broke in need of air.

Raman -now u sleep.

Ishita -hug me naa.

Raman -u r becoming demanding jaan.

Ishita -please naa raman, I am injured naa, I want ur care. She said making a baby face.

Raman smiled and settled beside her. He took her in tight hug and start patting her softly. Soon she slept feeling his warmth while he too slept feeling contented after long.

On the other hand, Mr bhalla packed his luggage and went out leaving a message on Raman's phone thinking not to disturb ishra.

After few hours, Raman got up getting a call from his office. He talk for sometime and told mihir about him taking leave for few days as ishita is not fine and he has to take care of her.

He talk for sometime and then hung the call. He was checking the phone when he saw Mr bhalla's message that he is going to iyers for tonight and tomorrow they all will leave for jammu.

Raman called him and asked about him going away without informing.

Mr bhalla -i don't want to disturb u two. Dekho raman, tum dono ko Ek nayi zindagi milli hai. Tum dono ko Ek saath waqt guzarna chahiye. Hum sab toh zindagi bhar saath rahenge. Give some time to each other, apna rishta sudharo. He said and hung the call making raman smile.

He got off the bed and thought to do something special for ishita. He ordered food from her favourite restaurant and start decorating table for them. After doing the arrangements, he went and was getting ready when ishita got up and said -aap Kahin jaa rahen hai kya.

Raman -haan party hai, aur sirf main nahi jaa raha,hum jaa rahen.

Ishita -i will not go. Yeh tuta pair le kar kahan jaaungi. Aap jaiye.

Raman -tujhe akela chod kar kahan jaaunga.

Ishita -akele kyun, papa ji hai naa.

Raman -he went giving us our privacy. Ab sirf main aur tu hai. Come let me help u get ready.

Ishita nodded halfheartedly and got ready wearing an evening gown while Raman helped her in getting ready. Then raman picked her and took her downstairs. Ishita was shocked seeing the decorations. She looked at Raman all surprised.

Raman smiled and said -its a party for us only. To our reunion. He said and kissed her making her smile. He took her to the table and both cut the cake. Then raman played the song and ask her for dance.

Ishita smiled and said -i think u have forgotten, mera pair tuta hai. Main aapke kadam se kadam nahi mila paaungi.

Raman -mere haath mein apna haath toh de sakti ho naa.

Ishita nodded and slipped her hand in his. He picked her in his arms and start swaying on the song while she was just looking at him.

Kacchi doriyon, doriyon, doriyon se
Mainu tu baandh le
Pakki yaariyon, yaariyon, yaariyon mein
Honde na faasley

Eh naraazgi kaagzi saari teri
Mere sohneya sunn le meri
Dil diyan gallan
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu milaa ke

Dil diyan gallan haaye...
Karaange roz roz beh ke
Sacchiyan mohabbataan nibha ke

Sataaye mainu kyun
Dikhaaye mainu kyun
Aiven jhuthi mutthi russ ke rusaake
Dil diyan gallan haaye
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke

Tenu lakhan ton chhupa ke rakhaan
Akkhaan te sajaa ke tu ae meri wafaa
Rakh apna bana ke
Main tere layi aan
Tere layi aan yaaran
Naa paavin kade dooriyan (x2)

Main jeena haan tera...
Main jeena haan tera
Tu jeena hai mera
Dass lena ki nakhra dikha ke

Dil diyan gallan
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke

Dil diyan gallan...

Raatan kaaliyan, kaaliyan, kaaliyan ne
Mere dil saanwle
Mere haaniyan, haaniyan, haaniyan je
Lagge tu na gale

Mera aasmaan mausamaan di na sune
Koi khwaab na poora bune
Dil diyan gallan
Karange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke

Pataa hai mainu kyun chupa ke dekhe tu
Mere naam se naam mila ke
Dil diyan gallan
Karange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke

Dil diyan gallan...

Soon the song ended and he kissed her temple and said -sorry for being a jerk jaan, but I promise, now I will always love u.

Ishita-i know Raman and that's why I love u alot. She said and both joined their foreheads feeling loved and contented.


That's all, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Love
Raksha



Edited by cutieruhi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
So amazing update
Ishra finally happy.
But sad they can't able to parents
And Mr.bhalla give them privacy.
And ishra romantic moment.
Thanks for updating
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Sweet and lovely ending dii
Both missed each other and are happy to get back together
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
Nice one.
So Raman taking care of ishu.
And Mr.bhalla giving them privacy.
And then their private party.
All was awesome.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome epilogue Di

Emotional too


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68

Sorry for the late reply Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Loved it; Di.
It was beautiful. Ishra moments were so awesome.
Loved how; Raman took care of Ishita.
Tq for the awesome epilouge.
Tq for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Superb epilogue...
True if true love is there ..rest things can be aside..
Loved Di
Thank you for the pm

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