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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb update dear
Lovely story
Appa is too partial and strict
Both ishra have some feelings for each other
waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice teaser
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was nice teaser .
This raman is too cute ,boss hai phir bhi darta hai .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 2

Mihir was thinking sitting in his cabin...
Kya yaar par Bhai ko huwa Hai aur pareshan mein hoo Raha hoo...kyu kyuki Bhai ne jisse pyar kiye Hai uski feeling unko pata nai Hai. Hey matarani kuch Rasta Bata warna Bhai toh muje pakka nai chorenge...

After thinking alot he gets idea n praise himself
Wah mihir Kya socha Hai tune Bhai toh tuje Gale laga lenge yeh sunkar ..n goes to Raman cabin...

While ishu was so nervous to face Raman n scared to for Raman reaction n talk to herself Kya zarurat thi excitement mein aa kar Sab bolne ki ab bhugto

Saying she leaves for Raman cabin...

Whereas in Raman cabin he was thinking how to make ishu jeolous did mihir has think something or not...

Ishu enter In his cabin breaking his chain of thought...

N ask sir I want ur sign in cheque as month end is near n all workers want there payment...

Raman sign the cheque n see her nervous he understands immediately y she was nervous n ask ishu Kya baat Hai kuch nervous si lag ri ho..

Ishu said stammering nai nai to...mein kyu bhala... nervous houngi...

Raman- ok... anything else

Ishu yes sir...

Raman- what

Ishu said looking down I want a leave for 1 day..

Raman said ok..Kal ke liye na.

Ishu- ha sir can I get leave

Raman- what if I say no...

Ishu- plzz sir don't say like this...it's my brother's engagement n still lot of preparation is pending...said pleadingly...

N sir I will do overtime also... plzz sir plzz said cutely making baby faces

Raman- don't make face I m just teasing u u leave is granted...

Ishu is happy listening this n hold Raman hands like forcefully shaking n says thank you sir...
U know I thought u were khadus but u r too good...

Raman shocked listening this n think m I khadus...

Ishu realize what she Said..I mean u r good n kind...

N to divert this topic she ask Raman

Sir aap aaoge na Kal...

Raman- ab jab tumne Meri meeting postponed kardi Hai to Anna padega na ...said smilingly

Ishu- sir I r not angry on me na for that...

Raman thought how can I get angry on my ishi...

Ishu waves her hands in front of his face n ask again r u angry with me

He say nodded in no...

While mihir barked inside shouting Bhai mil gai aapki...he was about but he see ishu n stop in middle...

While Raman ask through eyes what...

Ishu ask to mihir...
Sir ki koi cheez kho gai Hai Kya...

Mihir-nai to...

Ishu asked then y u shout Bhai mil gai aapki...

Mihir-ha woh to mein keh Raha Tha...he don't get anything so he says her lil rudely that's is none of ur business...

Which make ishu hurt but control n says sorry sir...n leaves

While Raman see tears in her eyes...n asked mihir yeh Kya Tha tune use aisa kyu bola...use kitna bura laga she is crying..yaar

Mihir- woh Bhai kuch samaj nai aaya Kya bolo to yeh bol diya

Raman- are kuch bhi bol deta keh deta Meri chabi ya Meri koi cheez

Mihir- us waqt kuch suja nai Bhai...it's ok...unhe bura nai laga hoga...

Raman - ok par tu kyu aaya Tha ..

Mihir are Bhai aapke liye ladki mil gai...

Raman says Kya...Kon Hai woh.

Mihir says mihika Bhai Mihika aapki gf banegi..

Raman is unable to believe that mihir will think like that...
N says mihir she is like my sister...aur Kya tu use Meri gf bana Raha Hai...

Mihir make him sit n says dekho Bhai ladki aise honi chahiye jiske sath app comfortable raho...n agar hum bahar ki dhunte aur use sachi mein aapse pyar ho jata to...n app bhi comfortable nai rehte

Raman- u r Right par Mihika is not a good choice...

Kya Bhai Meri acting itni buri Hai...a voice come from behind

Raman says Miku time he hugs her...Kya Bhai problem kya Hai isme...

Raman- par tu yaha kaise...

Mihir stands n says Maine bulaya isse Taki aapko Mana sake muje 99% doubt Tha aap nai manoge isiliye use bulaya...

Raman- ok theek Hai par baaki ki baat Ghar par karte Hai..

Both Mimi got agree n leaves while ishu was also wrapping her works as her time is over it's 7:00 so she leaves Office...

She goes down...n waiting for Auto or any cab
Raman n Mimi see this
Mihika said bhai u drop her I will drop mihir in my car...
Raman nodded n go towards ishu n says come with I will drop u

She say no sir I will go my self..

Raman - m going that way only... specially not coming to drop u...said as he knows she will not come like this

While ishu feel bad n says ok..

Drive was silent both were not speaking nothing...when ishu reached near her areas he ask Raman to drop her here only as my father don't like if he found with me any boys

Raman listen this n thought baap Hai ya hitler itne rules

Ishu says thanks to raman. While he just smile...n leaves

Ishu go to her house n get fresh up n start helping her mother...

While in Raman house
Raman was about to unlock the house but he see his house already is unlocked n see Mimi were sitting n sipping coffee

Raman walks towards them. N says...
Are Mihika tum mihir ko uske k Ghar drop Karne wali thi na...

Mihika- ha Bhai par yaad aaya k hame planning karni Hai aapko ko bhabhi ko ek Karne ki..

While Raman blush

Mimi watch this n says OMG the great rkb who famous for his arrogant nature n anger is now blushing...hayye mein Mar jawa

Raman says shut up u both n tell what did both decide

Mimi says Kal unke Ghar function Hai na aap Mihika ko waha lekar jao aur use as a close friend introduce karaw bhabhi see

Raman said confused close friend

Mihika - ha Bhai agar aap gf kahoge to woh agar aapko pyar bhi karti hogi to peeche hat jayegi...soch kar k u r already reserved...

Raman- hmm u r right...but mein tumhe lekar kaise jaun waha...usne sirf muje hi invite Kara Hai...

Mihir- uska bhi plan Hai mere pass

Raman- Puri planning karke rakhi Hai tumlog ne aachi baat Hai m lucky to have both u in my life...

Mihika- no more emotional talks get back to point

Mihir fold his hands n say Jo aagya Mihika Devi
Only to get punch from mihika

Mihika- is mihir ki baat pa dhyn mat do..

Mihir- excuse me what do you mean don't u forget I involved u in this plan samji...

Mihika makes whatever faces n continue to talk with Raman n says
Bhai aap usse Kehna ki aapki close friend aayi Hai n u can't leave her alone as she come from London n don't know anyone here... So u can't come to her function

Raman- usse Kya hoga

Mihir- if really u r important for her she will invite Mihika too...n tell u to bring her too...

Raman - aur agar aisa nai huwa toh..

Mimi- we will do something else.

Raman- ok o will call her but before we all have our dinner...

Mimi agree n heads for dinner
At night...
Mihir- Bhai Kya soch rahe ho bhabhi ko phone karo

Raman- itni raat ko accha lagega Kya...

Mihika- Kya Bhai raat k 10:30 ho rahe kuch 1:00 nai baj Raha Hai

Raman- dar lag Raha agar plan back fired huwa toh..

Mimi- are Bhai aisa nai hoga trust our plan

Raman-ok n takes matarani name n call ishu..

Ishu who was reading book looks at phone number flashing as Raman sir...n thinks sir ka phone yeh time pe Kya baat hogi...she was thinking n phone get disconnect...n talk to herself Kya ishu tu bhi phone cut gaya call Karu ya nai that's when again phone ring n she pick up immediately

Ishu says hello

Raman- kaisi ho ishita...both Mimi hit thier head with their hands...

Ishu- yeh pochne k liye phone Kiya..

Mihika hold speaker n says to Raman Kya Bhai itna kyu dar rahe hoo aap boss ho uske us tarike se baat karo..

Raman nodded his head

Ishu- hello r u dere sir

Raman- ha woh tumse baat karni this

Ishu- kis bare mein

Raman-actually woh...woh...mein keh rha woh..

Ishu- Kya yeh woh kar rahe Hai app is everything is alright sir..

Mimi sign him to speak confidently

Raman- woh Meri ek close friend aane wali Hai Kal to mein tumhare yaha engagement ka function attend nai karpaunga...

Listening this ishu face fell ..n says kyu nai as sakte...

Raman- woh akeli Hai bichari anjan desh mein...aur mein ek lauta uska dost hoo...n she need my help agar mein Tumhare yaha aaunga toh woh akeli ho Jaye gi..

Ishu- ok sir jaisa aap thik samje said sadly...
Trio can feel sadness in her voice as phone is on speaker..

Raman- ok bye I so want to attend ur function but sorry don't have any other options...

Ishu-it's ok...but suddenly she gets idea n says I have an idea...
Trio sign in relief that their plan is on track

Aap apni frmd ko bhi leke aa Jaye na
Use bhi aacha laga aur Indian culture k bare mein bhi Bata chalenga

Raman - r u sure asked hiding his exictment

Ishu- ha sir..

Raman- ok thank you n good night see you tomorrow

Ishu- bye sir good night see u tomorrow
N hung the call

Ishu think who is this close friend pata karna padega

At raman house
All were happy that there plan get successful..

Mihika- Bhai chaliye ab see mein apki close friend

Mihir- u r so dumb agar tum Bhai ko waha bhabhi k saamne Bhai bulaugi toh plan flop

Mihika- are yeh toh socha hi nai...aur mein Bhai ko sirf Raman kaise bula sakti hoo...muje aacha nai lagega

Mihie- ek kaam karte Hai tum bhai ko rammy bulaw...

Raman says what rammy yeh Kya kaam Hai...

Mihika- ha yeh sahi rehenga...aur unhe aapko lekar feeling hogi to woh kuch kuch zarur kehengi..

Raman- jaisa aap log thik samjo...

Next morning...

Ishu was roaming here n there in the house...

All were busy in doing arrangements

AT EVENING

Ishu was seeing the preparation as it was all ok or not...

Raman n Mihika come at venue

Raman get lost in ishu Beauty as he was seeing first time in saree...

She has wear a purple n pink combination kanjiwaram saree...n her hair is open n she do a minimal makeup n just looking breath taking

While Miku elbow him n says close ur mouth Bhai sorry rammy...n says
U know she is looking just like angle from heaven...
I like ur choice...

Ishu see Raman n goes to welcome them but stop looking at Raman as he was equally competing her...
She also get lost as he has were three price suit n looks more handsome than usual...his hair was gel properly...she just looking at him without blinking eyes n Raman comes towards her n they share a brief eyelock...

But broken by Amma voice ishu kanna kaha ho tum Chalo dekho sab tumhe dhund rahe Hai...

Ishu - ha Amma but before meet by boss mr.raman bhalla

Amma n Raman both greet each other n take ishu away from raman n both were looking each other like they want to talk...

Mihika says are ishita ji chali ab Kya...

Raman- ab Kya Chalo let's enjoy madrasi engagement she will surely come

Soon every got Busy...
Ishu was searching Raman n Mihika n she find them near food counter n goes towards them...n asks

Sir r u enjoying the function
Raman- yes of course preparation was also good I must say u n urs family had done a great work...

Ishu. See towards Miku n ask him is this is ur close friend...

Raman nodded. N says sorry intro Dena bhul gaya...

Ishita she is my close friend Mihika comes from London yesterday only..

N miku this is my secretary Ishita iyer..

Mihika shake hand with ishu says nice to meet you

Ishu says same here...

Mihika- actually thank u miss iyer u invite me in ur function firstly I feel bad that coz me rammy can't attend ur function n hold his hand..

Ishu see this...n asked rammy Kon

Mihika- I call Raman as rammy u know pyar see..

Raman can see how ishu is controlling her anger n smile seeing there plan is working.

Ishu- ok u enjoy party I will just come back. N leaves

While Raman was watching her retreating figure

Mihika elbow him n ask Kya dekh rahe ho aap

Raman- kuch nai...but his eyes was fix on ishu
How she is scolding poor waiter...

While Raman was smiling seeing this she was fidgeting with n mimickering Mihika I called rammy u know pyar see...n say pyar my foot...

Raman was smiling whole come n says wow Kya Khanna Tha Bhai maza aa gaya but stop seeing Raman smiling n ask what happen Bhai y r u smiling...raman says look at ishi she is so adorable in anger n her nose has become...

Mihika hugs him n says iska kuch kuch to idhar bhi hota Hai...

While ishu see them hugging each other n gets jealous

N to divert her mind she leaves the place n sit with her bhabhi n talk randomly but her mind was still stuck in Raman n Mihika taught...

Function was getting over everyone was leaving one by one but Raman was there waiting for ishu..

She come n ask Raman n Mihika did you enjoy the function..

Mihika- ha bohat maza aaya aur rammy k sath bahr Jane mein always maza aata Hai...n thanks for inviting me...miss iyer...

Raman- ha..Ishita thank you

Ishu- no need to thank me...

N both leaves hand in hand ...

Ishu says badi aai rammy rammy Karne wali Raman ko...
Mein usse chodungi nai...but unknown to her Raman was there n listen her talk n smile wah mihir beta Tera teer nishane pe laga Hai...

All were tired in iyer house so all sleep except one person that is ishu...

Who was thinking about raman n Mihika n can't able to sleep are muje neend kyu nai aari Hai aise feeling to pehle kabhi nai hui...pata nai Kya ho raha Hai muje.
Murgan plzz help me

While on other side Raman is also not able to sleep in excitement that his ishi also had some feeling

While both fell sleep thinking about each other...

That's all for now


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Updated next part
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

AWESOME CHAPPY

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome sweet fabulous update dear
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update
Omg how much she was jealous
Lovly update
Raman enjoying her jealosy
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Ishu getting jealous of Raman and Mihika
Update soon
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Superb
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