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Priyanka7080

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: cutieruhi
Lovely updt
Raman took ishita home and his family misunderstood him
Raman told them the truth and they apologised
Ishita was feeling guilty for breaking her parent's trust
Raman is already in love with ishita but controlling himself as ishita loves someone else
Appa was unwell and amma decided not to meet ishita ever
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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Sanjna55
Heyy..
Awesome part dear..

Love it..

Raman helped her..
Wooww...Love Hero Raman ..
He takes her his home..
His family was Soo shocked..
They was thinking that he got married..Hehe..
Raman clears the air..
All decide to help her..
She is so thankful to all..
Raman felt bad listening her story..
He was even feeling bad listening she lives someone else..
He likes her..Hayee..
But she is so much into Subbu..
I love elder bhalla women..
They helped her knowing the truth..
This is something good..
She is feeling guilty for leaving her parents like that..
Amma is so angry..
Appa had an heart attack..

Amazing part..

Continue Sooonishhh..

Thanks for PM..

TakeCare..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Divanru
Lovely update .
Raman fell in love with ishita in first sight .
He fight with goons and brought ishita along .
Dadi and Toshiji thought Raman got married to ishita sneakly .
Ishra told the truth to them .
They were guilty and said sorry .
Ishra spend a nice time sharing about themselves and family .
Waiting for subbu's truth to come out .
Update next part soonish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome update.
Loved it.
It's a love at first sight from Raman..he is soo lost seeing her..
He saved her n decided to take her to his home.
He was sad when he came to know she loves someone else n left her house for him..
His dadi n mom r such a drama queens they thought ishra r married n started shouting on him..
His family accepted ishita n let her stay with them..
Ishra shared their life with each other..
N Raman is trying to control his feelings for her..
Ishita still believes that Subbu will never betray her n waiting for him..how can she choose that idiot on her parents..she is so blind in his love.
Appa got heart attack n he is admitted in hospital..Amma decided to never forgive her for this..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: akriti154
Lovely update
raman saved ishita n took him home
hus mother n grandmother mu dem
ishita shares everything
raman falling in love
her parents r angry
appa gt heart attack
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: divancute
Fabulous updt di...
Raman meet ishu and saved her from goons..
He is flat seeing ishu..he took her to his home
Toshji and dadi misunderstood Ishra. And scolds raman fir marrying ishu
Then raman tells everything to their dadi and mom. He is thinking about her..
Ishita shares everything with them..raman is lost in her and falling in love
Ishu is felling bad for leaving their parents. Amna is angry on ishita for doing this..
Hope appa should get fine soon
Hope ishu should know subbu true colour..
Thanx for the pm
Plz updt soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: fSharm
Awesome...
raman is flen for ishiya superb...
updt sooon..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Part=3
Next day
Raman wakes up he remmber about last night incident and smiles he was thinking about ishita
He couldn't control himself from smiling thinking about her next moment he realised what is he doing
R: ye tu kya kar raha hai raman? Aaj tak tumne kisi ladki ko bhav nahi diya aur aaj ek ladki ne tere dil aur dimag pe kabza kar liya control raman wo teri nahi ho sakti par kyu nahi ho sakti?mata rani aapne kyu kiya mere saath aisa? Pehli baar kisi ladki ko dekh ke mera dil dhadka tha aur aapne usko bhi mere liye nahi banya it's not done agar wo meri ho hi nahi sakti thi toh mere maan mai ye feedings kyu piada ki? Nahi ye galat hai mujhe khood par control karna hi hoga
He thought and went to washroom taking his clothes
Other side
Ishita wakes up she looks around found herself in unknown place then she remembers all the happenings of last day how raman brought her to his house
I: kitne ache log hai ye anjaan hote hue bhi meri itni help ki aur ek subbu hai jiske liye mai sab chod ke aa gayi aur usko meri koi fikar hi nahi hai ek baar phone karke mera haal jaane ki kossish nahi ki
A tear fell from her eyes she wipe it
And took the phone she put for charging she dialled subbu's number
Subbu was sleeping his phone start ringing he get irritate and picks the phone without seeing the name
S: haa bolo koun hai?
I: subbu mai ishita kaha ho tum?
S: kya matlab kaha hoon? Ghar pe hoon so raha hoon aur ye koi time hai kya phone karne ka mai so raha tha thodi bhi akal nahi hai naa tumhe
He said angrliy ishita's eyes filled with tears but more then hurt she was angry
I: bas bhot ho gya subbu ek toh tum kal se mera phone nahi utha rahe ek baar mujhe phone karke mera haal nahi pucha abhi mai tumhe baar baar phone kar rahi hoon toh koi urgent baat hi hogi naa par tumhare paas meri baat sunne ka time nahi hai tumhe pata hai mai apni shadi se bhaag aayi tumhare liye apne amma appa ko hurt kiya tumhare liye aur tum ho ki agar tumhe mujhse rishta nahi rakhna toh mujhe saaf saaf bata do naa thodi taklif zaroor hogi par khood ko sambhal lugi mai itni bhi kamzor nahi hoon mai
She said angrily subbu was about to give her answer angrily but stops thinking something
S: i am so sorry ishita maine bussniess ka sara gussa tum par nikal diya please mujhe maaf kardo naa pata nahi mera dimag khrab ho gya tha shyad please sorry yaar tumhe maine bhot hurt kiya naa acha tum ye batao tum kaha ho mai abhi tumhe lene aauga please ek baar meri galti sudharne ka mauka dedo please
He said with sad voice ishita don't want to trust him her heart is is not ready to forgive him but she gets agree
I: thik hai tum kehte ho mai tumhe maaf bhi kar dugi par aaj ke baad mera dil toda naa toh pata nahi mai tumhare saath kya karugi?
S: thank you so much baby mai jaanta tha tum zaroor maan jaogi acha tum batao kaha ho tum
I: mai jaha kisi ke ghar pe hoon bhot bade log hai ye bhot ache bhi hai inho ne meri bhot help ki
S: acha bhot achi baat hai thank god tumhari kisi ne help kardi
I: subbu tum mujhe lene aaoge naa?
S: haa aauga naa tum mujhe address message kar dena
I: ok
Subbu hungs the call and smiles
S: aao aao mujhe toh besabri se itzar hai tumhara aaj toh meri lotri lagne wali hai wo shadi se bhaag ke aayi hai kitni jewellery hogi uske paas cash bhi hoga shyad aur uper se itni sundar ladki haye aaj toh mai apne dil ki aag ko bhuja ke rahuga usko apna bana ke kya baat hai ladki bhi meri jewellery bhi meri ek baar usko apna bna lu phir wo jaha marzi jaye mujhe kya?
He thought and smiles
Toshi ji comes room to check ishita she got up seeing her
I: arey aunty ji aaiye naa Good morning
T: Good morning puttar tujhe koi pareshani toh nahi hui raat ko
I: nahi aunty ji mujhe koi pareshani mahi hui aap jaise ache log mujhe mil gaye mujhe rehne ko jagah di mujhe koi problem kaise ho sakti hai
Toshi ji smiles
T: ye lo mai tumhare liye suit leke aayi thi ye mai apni beti simmi ke liye leke aayi thi par tu bhi toh meri beti hai tere kaam aayege mai simmi ke liye aur le aaugi tu jaake fresh ho jao phir niche khane pe aa jana
I: thank you so much aunty ji mai abhi ready hoke aati hoon
T: thik hai mai chalti hoon
She was going but stop
T: oh haa puttar mai puchna bhool gayi teri baat hui uss ladke se?
I: ji aunty ji maine abhi usko phone kiya wo mujhe lene aa jaayega
T: acha hai puttar tu phir jaldi se tyar ho jaa
I: ji
Toshi ji went from there ishita went to washroom taking clothes
After sometime she comes out
I: arey mujhe toh subbu ko jaha ka address send karna tha tabhi wo mujhe lene aayega par mujhe toh iss jagah ke baare mai kuch nahi pata haa raman se puch leti hoon
She went out of room she saw toshi ji and daadi on dinning table she looks around for raman and saw outside in the garden through window she thought to go him she went to the garden raman was wearing track suit talking to someone on phone ishita went near him and stand bhiend him she was waiting for him to finsh the call raman finshed his call and turns to go without notice ishita he bangs with her she lose her balance and about to fall raman hold her on time he was again lost in her she was wearing baby pink suit with white duppta her hair was open she was looking very beautiful and innocent raman was lost in her eyes she also lost in his eyes both shared intense eye lock ishita realise their position she broke the eye lock and look away
I: wo i am sorry mai aapse baat karne aay thi
Raman comes out of his world listing her voice he make her stand and looks down
R: sorry wo aap girne wali thi iss liye
I: it's ok aap toh bas mujhe bcha hi rahe the aap subhe subhe jaha kya kar rahe ho? Mai aapko ghar mai doodh rahi thi
R: wo mai moning walk pe gaya tha mere client ka phone aa gya aur mai unse baat karne laga
I: ok raman mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai
R: haa bolo
I: raman wo maine subbu ko phone kiya tha wo bol raha tha ki wo mujhe lene aa jayega
Raman's heart skipped a beat listing this
R: oh toh aap jaa rahi hai
He said sadly
I: nahi wo actully usko aapke ghar ka adress chaiye aur mai toh kuch bhi nahi jaanti
R: ok mai aapko address bata deta hoon aao message kar dena
I: ji
Raman tell her adress she open the what's app and send subbu adress
I: thank you
R: it's ok aap please baar baar thanks maat bolo
ishita smiles
R: waise kya naam batya aapne apne apne uska?
I: kiska?
R:wo aapke bf
I: Acha subbu uska naam subbu hai subarmaniyam reddy
R: ye naam bhot suna suna lag raha hai
I: suna hi hoga wo ek multi national company mai ek badi post pe kaam karta hai
R: kounsi company?
I: kisi S.D Group industry ka naam bata raha tha
R: SD group? Maine toh pehle iss company ke baare mai nahi suna
I: par ye kaise ho sakta hai subbu toh bol raha tha bhot famous company
R: shyad ho sakta acha wo kabhi aapko apne ghar leke gaya? I mean aap itni door se uske liye aayi aap sidha uske paas bhi toh jaa sakti thi par aapne batya ki aap uska wait kar rahi thi
I: haa kyu ki subbu kabhi mujhe apne ghar nahi leke gya usne kabhi nahi batya wo kaha rehta hai jab bhi mai usko bolti thi ki mujhe apne ghar walo se milva de wo bolta tha ki uske ghar wale zada dar forgin counties mai rehte hai
Raman gets doubt listing all this from ishita
R: mai bhi koumsi baatien leke beth gya hum andar chale maa aur dadi breakfast pe hamara wait kar rahi hogi
Ishita nodded and they went inside
Other side
Subbu was getting ready standing in front of mirror
S: chal subbu tyar ho jaa tera pyar tera itzar kar raha hoga
He smiles
S: arey pehle bhalla's ko koi bhana toh laga doon
He thought and call raman he was having his breakfast when his phone ring he pick the phone
R: hello
S: hello sir mai subbu bol raha hoon sir aaj meri maa ki tabiyat khrab hai toh mai aaj nahi aa paauga
R: it's ok tum apni maa ka dhyan rakho
S: thank you sir
Saying so he cut the call
D: kiska phone tha raman?
R: daadi wo hamare driver ka phone tha bol raha tha ki aaj wo nahi aa payega uski maa ki tabiyat khrab hai
T: arey puttar ye sab iske bhane hai haar dusre din isko chuti chaiye hoti hai mujhe toh ye dekhne se bhi sahi nahi lagta
R: arey maa aap zada maat socho uske papa suresh uncle bhi hamare driver the unke kehne pe hi papa ne isko kaam pe rakha hai mujhe nahi lagta unka beta galt hoga
T: iss liye toh usko abhi tak jaha rakha hua hai
D: arey tum dono kya baatien leke beth gaye khana khao naa
She looks at ishita
D: ishita puttar kab tak aa raha hai wo tujhe lene
I: maine usko message kar diya hai aa jayega kuch hi der mai
Raman looks at ishita he was thinking something when he got up suddenly
T: kya hua raman kaha jaa raha hai?
R: maa mera khana ho gya mujhe ek zaroori kam hai mai roon mai jaa raha hoon
Saying so he went to room
In room
R: pata nahi kyu mera dil keh raha hai ki ishita jiss ladke ke baare mai bol rahi hai usme kuch gadbad hai kyu ki jiss company ka naam ishita ne batya waisi toh koi company hai hi nahi aur jiss tarah se wo ladka ishita ke saath behave kar raha hai pakka kuch gadbad hai kyu ki agar wo ishita se itna hi pyar karta hota toh wo ishita ke baare mai jaane ki koosish zaroor karta usko toh fikar bhi nahi hai ki ishita ki shadi kahi aur ho rahi hai mujhe usks baare mai sab pata karna hi hoga
He thought to find about subbu
R: par ek minute mujhe kyu itna farak par raha hai ki ishita kiss se pyar karti hai? Mai kyu uss ladke ke baare mai pata karna chata hoon why? Mujhe kyu lag raha hai ki uss ladke mai kuch gadbad hai?
He sits on bed thinking about it
R: jab bhi ishita mere saamne hoti hai mere dil ki dhdkan tez ho jaati hai abhi kal hi toh mai usse mila hoon ache se janta bhi nahi usko aur uski itni fikar kyu ho rahi hai mujhe? Kahi iss feeling ko hi toh pyar nahi kehte? Kya mujhe sach mai ishita se pyar ho gya hai? Love at first sight omg raman kumar bhalla ko pyar ho gya? But i can't love her wo kisi aur se oyar karti hai wo kabhi meri nahi ho sakti abhi mere paas ye sab sochne ka whakt nahi hai pehle mujhe apna doubt clear karna hai
He picks his laptop from table and start searching something after searching for sometime
R: ye kaise ho sakta hai? SD naam ki toh koi bhi comapny nahi hai iska matlab subbu ishita se jhoot bol raha hai?
Other side
Subbu check his what's app and recived ishita's mesaage she send him adress he open the message and gets shocked
S: what? Ye kaise ho sakta hai? Ishita bhalla mansion mai hai o god ab mai kya karu? Agar mai ishita ko kene gya toh meri pol khool jayegi abhi mai kya karu?
He gets scared
S: haa ek kaam karta hoon ishita ko bolta hoon ki wo mujhse milne kahi bahar aa jaye haa ye sahi rahega par wo akli thodi aayegi agar bhalla's mai se koi uske saath aa gya toh nahi mai usko bol duga ki wo akeli aaye mai usko pick kar luga haa jahi thik hoga
He call ishita and tell her same ishita asked the reason he told he had a important meeting ishita agrees
She thought to tell this to raman as she has to go a lone
She asked servent about raman's room he tell him his room is on upstairs first room
Ishita went to his room raman was sitting in room still thinking about ishita when she comes there she knocks the door raman saw her
R: arey ishita aao naa
Ishita comes to raman
R: aayie bethiye
I: nahi i am fine
R: arey please sit naa
Ishita smiles and sits near him
I: wo mujhe aapko kuch batna tha
R: haa boliye
I: wo subbu ka phone aaya tha wo bol raha tha ki usko ek urgent meeting ke liye jana hai toh wo nahi aa sakta usne mujhe bhar milne ke liye bulya wo mujhe wahi se pick kar lega
Raman knew he is telling lie
R: toh ab
I: abhi mai jaa rahi hoon uss se milne usne sham ko rose park bulya hai
R: thik hai mai aapke saath chaluga
I: nahi subbu ne bola ki mai akeli aau maine pehli bhi aapko bhit taklif de di mai chali jaaugi
R: i am sorry but mai aapko akela nahi jaane duga mai aapko chod ke aa jaauga please mana maat karna
I: ok mai jaane tyari karti hoon
R: ok
Ishita leaves from there
R: ab toh mujhe pura vishwas ho gya ki iss subbu mai koi naa koi gadbad zaroor hai
his eyes fell on ishita's mobile she forget her mobile in his room he pick her phone
R: janta hoon kisi ka phone check karna achi baat nahi hai par mujhe ye karna hi hoga sorry ishita
Saying so start checking his phone he check her photos and gets shocked seeing subbu's photo
R: oh shit mere dimag mai ye baat kaise nahi aayi? Jab ishita ne subbu ka naam liya iska matlab ishita jiss subbu ki baat kar rahi hai aur hamara driver subbu dono same hai tabhi subbu aaj chuti pe hai jab usko pata chala ki ishita jaha hai usne aane se mana kar diya he is so disgusting bechari uss bholi bhali ladki ko dhoka de raha hai par abhi aur nahi mai ishita ke saamne iska asli chera zaroor laauga mujhe soch samajh ke sab karna hoga ishita meri baaton par vishwas nahi karegi wo bhot hurt hogi mujhe ache se deal karna hoga
Raman went to ishita and gave her phone
At evening
Ishita was ready to leave before going she takes blessings from toshi ji and daadi they hugged her and blessed her
T: jaa puttar mata rani tujhe sari kushiyan de
D: bhot acha laga tujhe milke puttar tu jaha bhi rahe kush rahe
I: mujhe toh samajh hi nahi aa raha kaise aapko thanks bolu? Aap ne meri itni help ki hai naa mai zindagi bhar aapka ehsan nahi bhool sakti
D: puttar isse ehsan maat bol ye toh bhgwan ki marzi thi
Raman comes there
R: chale ishita
I: ji acha daadi aunty mai chalti hoon
T: haa puttar jaa
D: raman isko iski manzil tak chod ke aana
R: ji daadi
Ishra leaves from there
In the way
Raman was thinking how to tell ishita truth about subbu how will she react he was feeling bad for her while ishita was feeling restlessness she was going to meet subbu but she was not feeling happy
Soon ishra reached at the place
I: raman aap jaiye mai wait kar lugi
R: nahi mai nahi jaauga jab tak subbu nahi aata i mean ki mai bhi subbu se milna chata hoon mai bhi tih dekhu koun hai wo lucky innsan jisko aap jaisi ladki mili
Ishita smiles
R: aapko koi problem toh nahi mai usko milna chahu toh
I: nahi mujhe koi problem nahi hai
Raman smiles
Both sit on the bench waiting for subbu
After sometime subbu comes there he gets shocked seeing ishita with raman
S: ye kya ye pagal raman ko kyu saath le aayi? Agar raman ne mujhe dekh liya toh problem ho jaayegi
He hide bhiend tree and call ishita saying he can't come as his friend is meet with accident and he is in hospital he told him to go back and he will call her tomorrow before ishita can say anything he disconnected the call and went to his home
Ishita gets sad
R: kya hua ishita sab thik hai?
I: subbu nahi aa raha uske kisi friend ka accident ho gya wo hospital mai
A tear fell from her eyes raman feel bad seeing her
R: mai jaanta hoon subbu ne aisa kyu kiya
He thought
R: aap please chinta maat karo
I: pata nahi mere saath hi aisa kyu ho raha hai? Aap hi dekho naa jiss admi ke liye mai apne amma ko chod ke aa gayi uske liye mere paas 2 minute ka bhi whakt nahi hai itna busy hai ki do minute nikal kar mujhe le jaa bhi nahi sakta shyad mai hi pagal hoon jo uske liye apne parents ko hurt karke aa gayi
Her eyes filled with tears
R: ab mai tumhe kaise batau ishita ki tum thik soch rahi ho bhot badi galti ki hai tumne uss se pyar karke tunhara abhi ye haal tab kya hoga jab tumhe pata chalega ki wo tumhe dhoka de raha hai
He thought and put his hand on her hand ishita looks at him
R: ek baat kahu kabhi kabhi humko sab bhgwan pe chod dena chaiye abhi aap apni shadi se bhag ke aayi hai apne parents ko hurt kiya itna bada faisla liya jaha delhi tak aa gayi isme zaroor bhgwan ki koi marzi hogi aur aage bhi jo hoga acha hi hoga bghwan ache logo ke saath kabhi bura nahi karte
He wipes her tears ishita looks at him without blinking her eyes
R: abhi ghar chale
I: mai kuch der jaha bethna chati hoon kuch shanti milegi aap jana chate ho toh jao mai kahi bhi chali jaaugi kuch paise hai mere paas mai hotel mai reh lugi
R: mai aise nahi chod sakta aapko jab tak aapko aapke apno tak safely nahi pohncha deta
I: ek taraf aap hai aur ek taraf wo subbu aap jiss bhi ladki se shadi karoge bhot lucky hogi aap bhot ache ho
R: mujhe toh aap jaise hi ladki chaiye
Ishita smiles
I: aapke liye toh bhgwan ne mujhse bhi achi ladki chuni hogi
R: dekhte hai meri kismaat mai bhgwan ne kya likha hai
He said looking at her she smiles
R: mai abhi aaya
Raman went to take ice cream for them he comes taking ice cream and give her ice cream and sits near her
I: thank you
R: abhi ice cream khate khate kuch baatien ho jaayegi
They had their ice cream talking ishita smiles talking to him raman gets happy seeing her smiling they talk for sometime
After sometime
R: chale
I: haa chaliye
they leaves from there
On the way
Raman noticed ishita was sad again ishita was lost in thoughts raman thought to show ishita real face of subbu
Soon they reached in front of a small house
I: ye kounsi jagah hai? Kiska ghar hai ye?
R: wo ye mere driver ka ghar hai aaj uski maa bimar hai toh maine socha unka haal puch lu bas 10 minute ka kaam hai chale
I: ok
R: i am sorry ishita mujhe jhoot bolna par raha hai par mai tumhe sedhe sedhe sach nahi bata sakta i know tum hurt hogi par ye sach tumhare saamne aana bhot zaroori hai
Raman was about to knock the door when he realise it was open
He open the door and both enterd in the house and gets shocked seeing the scene in front of them subbu was drinking sitting with a girl busy in kissing her
Ishita was about to fall because of sudden shock raman hold her
P.S: please guys ignore the mistakes give your valuable comments and likes will update next part soon

Edited by Priyanka7080 - 8 years ago