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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Lovely updt

Loved ishra scene
Loved how Raman was telling ishita about pihu
Ishita should also tell him about ansh
Poor ansh baby is craving for his father's love
Please let ishita tell him about ansh
I don't want Shagun to know about this first and present the truth in an ugly manner
Really waiting for Raman ansh milan
Updt soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Divanru

Lovely update .

Oops ishra had a cute little son ansh.
Now I m excited to see Raman's reaction when he will come to know about their son .
Lived ishra scene where he is sharing pihus childhood with ishita .
Hope she tells about ansh soon because as a fatger ,Raman had right tl know about his son and ansh tii crabss for his father's love .
Eagerly waiting for next update .
Updt soonish


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154

Awsm update
luvd ishra moments n ishita convo with ruhi
shagun planning to kill ishita
raman saved her
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154

Lovely update
so ishra hav another baby
is is hiding d truth frm him
waiting fr his reaction wen he comes to knw dis
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm


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Posted: 8 years ago
Part=8
Ishra room
Ishita is packing her bags with teary eyes
R: ishita please mujhe chod ke maat jao
I: nahi raman iss family mai meri koi jagah nahi mai jaha nahi reh sakti mai jaa rahi hoon hamesha ke liye
R: nahi ishita ek baar meri baat toh suno
I: bye raman
Ishita leaves from there raman cries seeing her going he shouts ishita but she leaves
Suddenly raman wakes up he is breathing heavily his face his sweating badly he realised it was just a nightmare he saw ishita sleeping near to him he feels relaxed finding her close to him he looks at him put his hand on her cheeks and start caressing her face he put her hair stand bhiend her ear he kissed her forhead lovingly
R: pata nahi mujhe kya ho raha hai? Par aaj jab tumne jaane ki baat kahi toh aisa laga jaise meri jaan hi nikal gayi ho haa shayad aaj bhi mai tumse utna hi pyar karta hoon pata nahi kyu mai iss baat ko accept nahi kar paa raha maine tumhe bhot taklif di hai ishita shyad uss ke liye tum mujhe zindagi bhar maaf nahi kar paogi tum mujhse bhot naraz ho naa shyad nafrat bhi karti ho tabhi tum mujhse door jana chati ho tum mere saath rehna bhi kyu chahogi maine tumhe diya hi kya hai sirf dard aur taklif ke ilawa
His eyes filled with tears
R: it's ok ishita agar tumhari kushi mujhse door jaane mai hai toh mai tumhe nahi rokuga i don't deserve you ishita tum bhot achi ho tum sirf kushiyan deserve karti ho jo mai tumhe kabhi nahi de paauga
He wipes his tears and kissed her forhead and sleeps hugging her
Next morning
Ishita wakes up first while raman is still sleeping hugging him ishita smiles seeing him so close to him she caresses his hair lovingly she kissed his forehead and then wake up slowly not to disturb him
She went to washroom after sometime she comes out wearing a pink net saree then she went to miroor and start getting ready she is still thinking about raman and ansh
I: mujhe lag raha hai mai raman se sach chipa ke raman aur ansh dono ke saath galat kar rahi hoon ek naa ek din toh raman ko sach pata chal hi jayega bechara ansh apne papa ke pyar ke liye tadap raha hai aur mai usko uske papa se door rakh rahi hoon mai aisa nahi kar salti mai itni selfish nahi ho sakti raman ka koi bhi reaction ho sach jaane ka haak hai unko mai aur wait nahi kar sakti mujhe raman ko sach batna hoga chaiye wo mujhse nafrat hi kyu naa kare
she wants to tell raman the truth but is scared of his reaction raman wakes up and saw ishita standing in front of mirror lost in thoughts he remmbers how ishita is tensed yesterday
R: kya ishita kal ki baat ko leke pareshan hai?
He thinks to talk to her he went to her
R: ishita
Ishita come out of thoughts listing his voice she looks at raman
I: haa raman kya hua kuch kaam tha?
R: ishita kya baat hai tum abhi pareshan lag rahi ho
I: kuch nahi raman
R: koi baat nahi agar tum mujhse baat share nahi karna chatai toh mai tumhe force nahi karuga
I: nahi raman aisi koi baat nahi hai wo actually raman mujhe aapko ek baat batani thi pata nahi aap kaise react karoge
R: aisi kounsi baat hai ishita jo tum cha ke bhi mujhe bata nahi paa rahi bolo kya baat hai?
I: raman wo mai
R: ishita tumhe daarne ki koi zaroort nahi hai jo bhi baat hai tum mujhe bata sakti ho ek friend hone ki naate toh tum mujh par vishwas kar hi sakti ho
I: raman ye koi choti baat nahi hai mujhe aapko ek sach batana hai raman
R: kounsa sach?
I: raman aap please mujhe galat maat samjhna
Raman holds her hands
R: mai jaanta hoon tum kabhi kuch galat nahi kar sakti
Ishita looks in his eyes
I: raman sach ye hai ki hamara
Before she can speake someone knocks the door
R: mai dekhta hoon koun hai
I: raman pehle meri baat sun lo please
R: ishita mai tumhari baat zaroor sunuga tum chinta maat karo
Door knocks again raman went to open the door
I: itni mushkil se himaat ki thi par pata nahi kyu hamesha aisa hi hota hai
Raman opens the door neelu comes
N: bhai wo bhabhi ko mummy ji bula rahi hai unko unki bp ki dawa nahi mil rahi
I: mai abhi aati hoon
Neelu goes from there ishita went to raman
I: raman aaj sham ko kya aap mujhe coffe shop pe miloge mujhe aapse jo baat karni hai wo mai ghar pe nahi kar paaugi
R: haa ishita mai zaroor mai tumhe clinic se pick kar luga phir hum chalege
I: mai mummy ji ko dawa deke aati hoon
R: ok
Ishita leaves from there
R: aisi kounsi baat hai jisko leke ishita itni pareshan hai aur wo mujhse wo baat ghar pe nahi kar sakti
After sometime
On dinning table
Everyone was eating breakfast ishita gets a call from clinic there is a emergency so she leaves soon on the way she messaged raman to reached direct at coffe shop raman give her message saying ok
Soon he also leaves to office dropping pihu in school
Pihu's room
Shagun closed the door and calls someone
S:suno aaj ishita akeli gayi hai aaj kisi bhi halat mai wo ishita nahi bachni chaiye kal ki tarah koi galti maat karna aaj sham ko hi uska kaam khtam kar dena aur kuch aisa karna ki kisi ko shak bhi naa ho tumhe tumhare paise mil jayege
She cuts the call
S: tumne wapis aake bhot badi galti kar di ishita i am sorry ab tumhe iss galti ki saza milegi mai tumhari wajeh se iss ghar se apni jagah nahi khona chati iss liye tumhe toh marna hoga tumhare hote hue raman kabhi mera nahi ho sakta aaj ka din tumhari zindagi ka aakhri din hoga
She smiles evilely
At evening
Raman reached at coffe shop waiting for ishita he waited for her for 2 hours but she didn't come he tries to call her but she is not picking her phone raman gets worried for her
R: itni der hi gayi ishita aayi kyu nahi? I think mujhe clinic jaake check karna chaiye pehle simmi se puch leta kahi ishita ghar naa chali gayi ho
Raman calls simmi and ask about ishita but she told that ishita has not come yet raman gets more worried he went to her clinic to find her
He reached her clinic but got to know she had leaves from there 3 hours a go now raman is feeling scared he sits in car thinking about ishita
R: kaha jaa sakti hai ishita? Phone bhi nahi utha rahe kahi usko kuch
Nahi aisa kuch nahi ho sakta please mata rani ishita ki raksha karna agar usko kuch ho gya toh mai maar jaauga
then he start driving finding ishita everywhere he is founding her like mad he goes every where where she can go but she is no where one hour passed like this
R: kaha jaa sakti hai ishita?
He remmbers his nightmare ishita going leaving him he got scared
R: nahi ishita mujhe chod ke nahi jaa sakti wo aise nahi jaa sakti mujhe chod kar
His eyes filled with tears
R: nahi aisa nahi ho sakta
He thought to call mani thinking maybe he know where is ishita
He is about to call him
when his phone rings he stops the car and picks the phone
R: hello
He got shocked hearing the person
R: what? Mai abhi aa raha hoon
He cuts the call and starts his car
After sometime he reached at hospital and went to reception and asked about ishita
R: exuse me mujhe call aaya tha meri biwi ishita bhalla hai jaha aap please bata sakti hai woh kaha hai?
Rec: aap mr raman bhalla ho
R:ji
Rec: aapki wife waha samne wale ward mai hai
R: thank you
Saying so he runs towrds ward he enters in ward and saw ishita lying unconscious on bed badly injured there is bandage on her head and hand raman is shocked seeing her condition he went near her with slow steps he touched her cheeks his eyes filled with tears he is not able to seeing her pain
Doctor comes there with inspector raman looks at doctor
R: doctor ishita ko kya hua hai? Wo thik toh hai
D: aap inke pati ho?
R: ji haa doctor ishita thik hai naa
D: aapki biwi khatre se bhar haiser pe chot aayi aur kuch injures aayi hai kuch der mai hosh aa jaayega
R: par ye sab hua kaise?
In: aapki biwi ka accident hua hai shyad unki car ke breaks fail the apni jaan bchane ke liye wo gadi se kud gayi iss liye unki jaan bach gayi aur gadi ka accident ho gya waha kuch log unhe hospital le aaye aur humko infrom kar diya humko ek baar unki statement leni hai
D: abhi toh inko hosh mai aane ko time lagega aap kal subhe aa jana
In: ok aap humko infrom kar dena ok mr bhalla hum abhi chalte hai
R: ji thank you
Inspector leaves from there
R: doctor ishita thik toh ho jayegi naa koi serious problem toh nahi hai
D: don't worry mr bhalla mrs bhalla thik ho jayegi kismat achi thi ki ye bach gayi warna kuch bhi ho sakta tha head aur hand pe hi injury aayi hai hum aaj ki raat inko under observation rakhege
R: thanks doctor
D: it's ok
Doctor leaves raman calls at home and informs them about ishita's accident they wants to come but raman stops them saying she is fine he is there with her he went to ishita and sit near her on the stool he hold her hand with teary eyes
R: thank god tumhe kuch nahi hua warna pata nahi mera kya hota?
He kissed her hand he remmbers all their lovely moments how he throw her out of his life how because of him she tries to end her life how they meet again after 7 years and he hurt her again he is crying remembering his rude behaviour towards him
R: i am sorry ishita bhot hurt kiya naa maine tumhe haar baar tumhe taklif di tumhe mujhse kabhi dukh aur taklif ke badle kuch nahi mila dekho naa itne saalo baad tum meri zindagi mai laut ke aayi aur phir tumhe kya mila wahi dard wahi taklif aaj tumhari iss halat ka zimmedar bhi mai hi hoon agar tum meri zindagi wapis naa aati toh tumhare saath ye sab nahi hota aaj tumhe kuch ho jaata toh mai khood ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata apni ego ke karan apna pyar bhi daba diya meri ego mere pyar se bhi badi ho gayi thi i am sorry par aaj tumhe khone ka ehssas hua toh pata chala ki tu meri zindagi hai aur mai apni ego ke liye tumhe hi hurt karta raha shagun se shadi karne ke liye bhi tyar ho gya apni ego ki wajeh se tumhe taklif dene ke liye pagal ho gya tha mai aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hoon apni galti sudharne ki jagah tumhe apni baahon mai bhar ke rone ki jagah apna pyar dekhane ki jagah maine tumhe rone pe majboor kar diya tumse nafrat karne ka natak kiya
He caresses her hair lovingly
R: par tu bhi pagal hai jab mai tumse wo sab bkwas kar raha tha mujhe marne ki jagah mujhe chod ke chale gayi kya karta toot gya tha tum aur ruhi dono mere paas nahi thi meri zindagi mujhse door ho gayi thi jab tu wapis aayi toh apni kushi byan bhi nahi kar paya tumhe uss mani ke saath dekh kar mera dil toot gya tha pagal ho gya tha mai kya karta jaanta hoon bhot galtiya ki hai maine par ab aur nahi
He wipes his tears
R: abhi mai apni haar galti ko sudhar ke rahuga ab mere pyar mai koi ego koi jalan nahi hogi sirf aur sirf pyar hoga abhi mai apne pyar se tumhare zakhmo ko bharuga tumhara dil aur vishwas dobara jit ke hi rahuga iss baar apni zindagi ko apne se door nahi hone duga
He kissed her forhead
R: i know tum mujhse bhot naraz ho bhot hurt jo kiya tumhe tumhara pyar paane ke liye puri zindagi bhi wait karna pare toh karuga par tumhe apne se soor nahi hone duga because i love you a lot i love you
He kissed her forhead again and start admiring her soon he sleeps sitting on stool holding her hand
Later at night
Ishita open her eyes feeling pain in her head
I: ouch
She tries to get up raman wakes up feeling some movement
R: ishita tum thik toh ho naa dhyan se
He make her sit properly ishita holds her head
R: ishita mai doctor ko bulau?
Ishita looks at raman
I: nahi raman i am fine bas thoda pain ho raha tha
R: tum ruko mai abhi doctor ko bulata hoon
Ishita holds his hand
I: please raman mai thik hoon don't worry aap please mere paas raho
R: mai jahi hoon tumhare saath
He cupped her face
R: tum thik ho naa aur ye baar baar kya karti rehti ho abhi kal tumhara accident hone wala tha aur aaj phir tum apna dhyan nahi rakh sakti kya? Tumhe kuch ho jaata toh
He said scolding her
I: isme meri kya galti hai ek toh mujhe chot aayi hai aur aap mujhe daant rahe ho
She said making baby face
R: toh aur kya karu? Pata bhi hai mai kitna daar gya tha
His eyes filled with tears ishita wipes his tears
I: chot mujhe aayi hai ro aap rahe ho mai thik hoon raman aap meri chinta maat karo
R: acha tumhari nahi karuga toh kiski karuga
He said looking in her eyes both shared intense eye lock raman kissed her forhead lovingly ishita closed her eyes feeling his touch then they looked at each other raman hugs her tightly ishita hugged him back closed her eyes
They hugged each other for long after sometime they broke the hug
Raman looks at her
R: ab mujhe batao kya hua tha? Kaise hua accident
I: raman mai aapse milne ke liye coffe shop aa rahi thi raaste mai mujhe pata chala ki gadi ki break fail hai
Flash back
Ishita is going to the coffe shop on the way she realised that breaks are fail when she tries to apply the break
I: ye break kaise fail ho gaye?
She saw a car coming towards her she turns the car on other side
I: ab mai kya karu?
She is trying hard to apply the break but in vain she gets scared
She saw a truck coming towards her she don't understand what do
In the last she jumps out of car and her head bang with a rock her head start bleeding soon she lost her conscious while her car hits with truck some people saw the accident and they runs to ishita they called police and takes her to hospital
Flash back ends
R: par tumhari gadi ki break fail kaise hui?
I: wahi toh mai soch rahi hoon raman subhe jab mai clinic gayi tab tak toh sab kuch thik tha phir achank
R: tum chinta maat karo police ko ye sab bata dena abhi tum stress maat lo aur thodi der aaram karlo
He make her lay down on bed and start caressing her hair soon she sleeps raman kissed her hair
R: kal bhi ishita ka accident hote hote bacha aur aaj break fail ho gaye ye coincidence nahi ho sakta mujhe pata karna hi hoga ye sab kaise hua aur jisne bhi ye sab kiya hai usko mai choduga nahi
Soon he also sleeps sitting on stool holding her hand
P.S: please ignore the mistakes will wait for your review
Edited by Priyanka7080 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update
Loved it
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Continue soon
Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
I want to kill sagum coming inside the ff.
Nice part.
I so want look raman and ansh bonding.
Update soon.
Tq for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update..
Loved it..
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy..
Woww...
Amazing part ..

Just simply Awesome..

Love it..
Love it..
Love it..
Sooo Muccchhh..

Raman has a nightmare..
He is feeling guilty for his behaviors..
He apologized to a sleeping Ishu..
He promised not to stop her if she wants to go..
Both sleep together..
Ishu wakes up..
She was lost.. Thinking how to tell Raman about ansh..
Finally she gathered all the courage..
Butt..Neeellluuu...
Meeting set in coffee shop..
But she never reached there..
All thanks to Shagun..She is totally a heartless woman..
Raman was worried..
Finding Ishu..
Finally ..she is in a hospital..
He goes there..
He again feeling guilty..
Apologize again ..
Ishu narrated him about accident..
He got doubt..

Loveliest part..

Beautifully written..

Love the way u portrayed Raman's emotions..
Just perfect..

Thanks for PM..

Update Soon..

TakeCare..

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