ISHRA TS: I DON'T CARE [COMPLETED]

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Everyone,

I know I am very lazy when it comes to writing but the current plot has made me write this.

Well I have a question from all the readers, please leave your feedback regarding next update. Though I have already drafted it but your comments are welcomed.

Moreover, it would end with IshRa separation; I don't want to change that. But would love to know how you people would accept that

1. Ishita expressing her pain points and walking out (I thought of going with this, because blame game will continue on and on)
2. Raman realizes and seeks apology, but Ishita prefers walking out.
3. Counter confrontation and still Ishita walks out.

Please let me know your feedback guys, I will wait before updating next part.

Regards,
Rituja Srivastav

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Everyone,

Well I have completed this TS
I have tried to include all of your points to some extent in different way. I couldn't change my existing draft entirely being a lazy lad.

Sorry few of you suggested not to go ahead with separation, but I couldn't do that.
I think this was supposed to end like this.

I am extremely sorry if anything mentioned in this update hurts you, I have gone to extreme to end their relationship. Well it was my frustration over the show as well.

Well suggestions are welcomed. I will wait for your feedback.
I would thank you all for loving the previous update as well.

Regards,
Rituja Srivastav
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fabulous update dear
and amazingly written
loved ishus stance
she should have behaved the same way with Raman in the show too but it won't ever happen so ur story makes me happy
eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am waiting for the next part please do pm me if possible...!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks for the pm
I would like to read a counter confrontation and also Raman seeking apology from ishu since he also needs to realise his faults
also are u going to show Adi going to jail and all in ur story ?? would love to read it and see how ishu save him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic
Update Soon
Please Add Me To Your PM List
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey thnx for d pm do update soon and pm on update I think u should go with d first thought and also add up ruhi standing up as a huge support system for ishita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Glad to u back.
Superb update. Ishita disclose everything to aliya. Adi blames Ishita and ishita declared that she will not interrupt in his life. Aliya accepts to marry Adi. All were aware of Ishita's reaction but didn't care. Ishita ignore Adi. Nice. Update soon

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