Ishra SS: Khatti Meethi Mohabattein (Pt 13 on pg 140 on 23/6/2018) - Page 33

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Thanks a lot for the lovely responses.

As I promised Ananya, here is ur update. Sorry for late. Hope u will enjoy it.

Part-6

Ishra enjoyed their rain dance and at last both were laughing for their childish acts in dance when Raman stopped laughing and was admiring her. Ishita felt his gaze on her and stopping herself looked at him. Both were looking in each other's eyes. Raman was slowly coming to her when a soft song played. She turned to go but Raman kept his hand on her shoulder stopping her. He came to her and back hugged her. Soon both started swaying to the soft rhythm in the same position.

Kabhi Jo Badal Barse
Main Dekhoon Tujhe Aankhein Bharke..
Tu Lage Mujhe Pahli Baarish Ki Duaa..

Tere Pahloo Mein Rah Loon..
Main Khud Ko Paagal Kah Loon..
Tu Gam De Ya Khushiyaan
Sah Loon Saathiyaa..

Raman turned her around and now both were facing each other and dancing slowly.

Koi Nahi, Tere Siva Mera Yahaan..
Manzilein, Hain Meri To Sabh Yahaan..
Mita De Sabhi Aaja Faansle..
Main Chahoon Mujhe Mujhse Baant Le..
Zara Sa Mujhmein Tu Jhaank Le..
Main Hoon Kya..

Ooo..
Aaeee..Aeee..Aaa..

Raman cupped her face to remove rain drops and both were so close. Ishita was shivering due to so closeness and she closed her eyes tightly due to fear. Raman smiled seeing his JKR being scared. He gave a light kiss on her forehead making her relieved. She opened her eyes and saw him smiling at her.

R-Lets take it slowly.

Ishita kissed his cheek and hugged him saying U r the best. Then she realised what she did and bite her tongue and hide her more in him while he teased her.

R-Ohho Madrassan, Tu phir se situation...no no...actually meri goodness ka advantage le rhi hai.

Ishita hit him slightly while Raman hugged her back. After few minutes, both felt a chilled air and realising they may fall sick, both settled back in their previous seats in car. They sat in car completely closing the doors and glasses. As they were not wearing their blazers so now their blazers were only dry. Both were hugging side by side and trying to find network in mobile when they heard a knock. Both looked out and found two constables with one lady constable. Both got relieved thinking of a hope. Ishita wear her blazer and slide down the glass of her side.

Cons 1-Kon hai aap dono or itni rat ko beech sadak par kya kar rhe?

R-Thank god, koi to aaya. Actually hum log yahan phas gaye hai. Pls humari help Kar do.

Cons 2-Phas gaye the ya ab phas gaye ho.

R-Kya?

Cons 2-Andar Kya kar rhe ho dono? Help chahiye to bahar nikal kar help leni chahiye Na kisi ki.

Lady Cons-Help chahiye hogi to bahar aayenge Na. Mujhe to kuch gadbad lag rhi hai.

Cons 1-Hmm. Dekho kaise chipak kar baithe huye hai. Aaj kal gaadi mein bhot ras leela hoti hai.

R(angrily)-Shut up. Bakwas bandh Kar apni. Biwi hai yeh meri. Or gadi kharab ho gayi thi isliye yahan beech raaste mein ruke huye hai. Bahar baarish ho rhi thi isliye andar baithe huye hai. Try Kia tha but koi bhi nhi dikha bahar. Humhe bhigha hua dekhkar nhi lagta.

Cons 1-Ji nhi, nhi lagta. Aaj kal phasne par sabhi yahi bolte hai. Chalo man liya aap dono husband wife ho, koi proof hai?

R-Ha hai.

Saying so he showed them their pic of marriage day in which both were sitting after all rituals completed. Constables looked at each other and continue,

Cons 2-Hum kaise man le ki ye photo sahi hai. Marriage certificate hai to dikhao.

R-Aapka dimag kharab hai Kya. Koi phansi k phande ka certificate sath lekar ghoomta hai kya.

I-Raman.

R-Tu chup kar madrassan.

I-Main aapko dekh lungi.

R-Bachpan se aaj tak teri aankhe kharab thi jo ab dekh lungi.

Cons 1-Nautanki bandh karo tum dono. Chalo licence or gadi ke papers dikhao.

R-Ha ek min. Madrassan apna bhi...

Before he completed, Ishita had already taken out her licence and showed to him.

R-Sangat ka asar. Intelligent ho gayi hai.

Raman was taking out his licence while Ishita bend towards his seat to take out papers of the car,

R-Situation ka advantage mat le madrassan, vo bhi police k saamne.

Ishita sat straight and turned to constablers,

I-Aap logo ne sahi kaha tha kuch gadbad hai. Actually I don't know this man. Main iski wife nhi hu. Yeh mujhe pareshan kar rha hai. Aap isse yahan se lekar jaaiye.

R-Arey chup kar pagal madrassan. Or aap log, agar lekar jana hai to isse lekar jaao. Khud to pagal hai hi mujhe bhi kar degi. Badi aai main iski biwi nhi hu.

He said irritatedly coping her. Both showed their licence and Raman saw there was no papers of car. He was shocked.

R-Ishita gadi ke papers nhi hai.

I-Raman, pls no jokes anymore.

R-Its not a joke. Check it.

Ishra checked everywhere possible but didn't find.

Cons 1-Papers kaise milenge, yeh gadi hi tumhari nhi hai.

R-Arey shut up. Aapko kya hum shakal se chor nazar aate hai.

Cons 2-Oh ji, shakal se to aaj kal sharif log hi chor nikalte hai. Chalo aap dono humare sath. Batate hai kon kya hai or kon nhi.

I-Arey aise kaise. Raman bolo na.

R-Ishita chalte hai inke sath phir bat karte hai.

I-But...

R-Don't worry.

Both came out and constables locked the car and took keys and took Ishra with them in their jeep. After 10 minutes they were at blockade area of police on highway where some police men were present. They took them in a small room there for verification when Raman remembered something and asked,

R-Hum ek call kar sakte hai?

Constables looked at each other then asked,

Const 1-Kisko call karna hai.

R-Actually humare mobile mein network nhi tha or battery bhi nhi hai. Sirf ek call karna hai.

Cons 2-Lekin karna kisko hai?

I-Family or kisse karenge call.

R-Madrassan do minute chup rah na tu. Family ko nhi ACP Abhishek ko call karna hai.

Cons 2-Kyu?

R-Arey hum unhe jante hai. Vo friend hai mera, plas aap ek call karke unse pooch Raman Kumar Bhalla ke bare mein.

Cons 1-call kya, abhi face to face milwa dete hai. Pta chal jaayega tum kitne sachche ho.

One constable went outside and bring ACP Abhishek. ACP identified the and greeted them. Then they told everything to him and he told constables that he very well know them and asked them to drop Ishra to the hotel where they were going. Ishra thanked him and a constable dropped them in front of Holiday Hotel and went back. Ishra were standing in front of hotel with weird faces (u can imagine the same hotel in YHM serial),

I-Yeh hai Holiday Hotel. Yahan hai meeting.

R-Tumne Mihir ka message thik se padha na, yahi likha tha?

I-Ha Raman.

R-Lets check.

Both entyered and went to reception passing by many weird people.

R-Excuse me, Humhe kisi Mr...(turning to Ishita)-Nam kya hai?

Ishita with "I don't know look nodded in negative.

I-Message mein nhi tha.

R-Kya? Ek min Mihir ne humari bhi booking ki thi vo check karta hu.

R(to receptionist)-Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla k naam ki booking hogi yahan. Aap check karo.

Receptionist looked at them from top to bottom making Raman irritated and angry.

R-Aise kya ghoor rha hai. Booking check kar.

Rec-Kyu Mazak kar rhe ho sahab. Yahan koi advance booking nhi hoti. Yahan bas fresh booking hoti hai.

R-Kya bakwas kar rha hai. Yaha booking hai humari or meeting bhi hai kisi businessman k sath jo kal subah yahan se jaa rhe hai.

Rec-Konsi meeting sir. Yahan koi businessman nhi aate. Kya sir main hi mila tha Kya aapki bewkoof banana k liye.

R-Bewkoof ko bewkiof Kyu banau. Or...

I-Raman calm down. I think we r at wrong place. U asked about any other hotel nearby.

Raman nodded in yes and asked,

R-Yahan koi aas pas achcha sa hotel hai, jahan businessman aate ho.

He said pressing businessman word.

Rec-Nhi sahab. Yahan aas pas koi hotel nhi hai.

I-Ab Kya kare?

R-Koi room abhi available hai?

Rec-Hai Na sahab. Kitne gante k liye...

He couldn't complete it as he saw angry look of Raman and changed it.

Rec-sorry sahab, vo sab log kuch gante k liye aate hai to..

R-Lekin humhe poori rat k liye chahiye. Mug band Kar or room ki key de.

Rec-Ha sahab, aap do minute baitho. Main room ready karwata Hu.

Ishra sat there on a bench while a no. of people were looking at them making different types of faces. Ishita felt uncomfortable and held his hand. Raman saw uncomfortable and being Jhansi ki rani, controlling her anger on those dirty looks. Raman held her by shoulder and gave a sweet smile. After some time receptionist called them but before they could go, another problem came that is police raid on hotel.

Soon police were taking all. A constable came to ishra and took them. Ishita was about to say something but Raman stopped her and told police calmly that they are husband and wife and just gave them a chance to call someone. Police got agreed and took them to police station. It took time and it was 2am in night when they reached police station. Raman was holding Ishita protectively all time.

Inspector told him to call only one person. Raman thought to call ACP as it was late night and if anyone in their families didn't attend the call then they will not get any other chance. Raman informed that ACP is their friend and inspector called or u can say pretended to call but no response. He told them that ACP is on pet rolling and they will ask him later. Inspector asked them if they have any other proof but they denied and before Ishra could say anything, They send Ishra to a cell. They were waiting and asking if they contacted ACP but they always denied. Slowly they felt sleepy and finally both slept in a side hug, Ishita's head on his shoulder and his head on her, he was holding her by shoulder.

It was 7:30 in morning when a constable came to them and called them breaking their sleep. It took few seconds to remember last night happenings and both got up quickly. Constable informed them that ACP came here and took them for verification. Abhishek saw them and asked,

A-Arey Raman Ishita, tum dono yahan kaise.

R-Hum log ghar jaa sakte hai?

Abhishek can feel anger in his voice and before he burst out here in police station, he silently nodded and told that he already called Mihir. Ishra were waiting for Mihir. Ishita can bet that a bomb is going to blast named as Ravan Kumar and he has reason also. This time even she was angry but thinking ways to stop this bomb blast. Every time she tried to talk to Raman, she herself got silent looking at his angry avatar. Finally she slightly leaned to him and said,

I-Iss young angry man k avatar mein ek Dum cute lag rhe ho. Man Kar rha ki tumhare sath ek selfie click karke, uska bada sa photo frame apne I mean humare room mein lagwa du.

Raman gave a deadly glare to her on which she again tried,

I-Ok cute nhi handsome lag rhe ho.

Same look from Raman.

I-Ok bada nhi to chota frame.

Same look.

I-Ok side table par.

Same look.

I-Ab tum meri goodness ka advantage le rhe ho. Main kuch Bol nahi rhi hu to mujhe ghoore hi jaa rhe ho.

Finally a smile came on his face unknowingly and said,

R-Itni bakwas kaha se lekar aai Tu.

I-Sangat ka asar.

Both smiled but before Ishita could make him calm down fully, mihir came there and Raman was on angry mode again. Raman didn't gave him any chance to say and moved out of police station. He directly settled in car and Ishita also sat with him while Mihir started driving and thinking ways to escape from Ravan Kumar's wrath.

That's all for this part. May be this one is a little short but I was busy so just write this much.

Precap-Bomb Blast named Ravan Kumar

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Updated next part. Hope u like it...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sririt

@Part 4:

IshRa are nautanki
Raman cares for her, Ishu too.
Simmi pranked with them
Ashok; Raman sorted him in a shot
Where IshRa are sent, seems on honeymoon

PS: Sorry for being late, out of city. I login whenever I get time, so couldn't make it on time.

thanks a lot di
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjna55

Heyy..

Read all the parts in a go..

Amazing Story..

Loving it..

Beautifully written..

Ishra Nok Jhok Is LOVE..

Waiting for the next part..
Update Soonish..

N
PM me if possible..

Thanks ..

TakeCare..

thank u so much di. Updated next part. Have a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
Me first 😳
Awesome update dear
They are slowly accepting their relationship
Constables misunderstood ishra
Ishra are so cute, they were bickering in this situation also😆
Constables took them with them
Abhishek told them that he knows them and asked them to drop them to hotel
Holiday in hell, there also police raid
Again ishra got arrested 😆
They had to be in cell for a night
Bomb RKB is ready to blast
Ishu tried to cool him down
She made him smile
Bechara Mihir, today he is gone
RKB is gonna kill him
Update soon
Thnx for the pm
Edited by srithika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresed😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
They danced in rain..
Cops saw them ..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely awesome superb update dear
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb and lovely updt nishu
Abh tak ka sabse favourite updt hai ye mera 😳
Beautifully written...ur emerging as great writer dear👏...love u❤️ 🤗

Loved ishra moments...😳
Ishra dance on kabhi Jo badal was beautiful ishra were lost in their moment...😳
Loved Raman's witty nature...he is saying ishita not to take his advantage...😆
Jkr was nervous by Raman's proximity... Raman smiled seeing her nervous...
Ishra ke beech pyaar toh hai bahut saara hope they realise soon...they care for each other a lot
Both were feeling cold and then they went and sat inside car to sit...they were sitting side hugging each other
Police constable came and knocked ishra car window...
Ishra said that they are married and asked them to help...
Loved ishra nok jhok... They are cuties really nishu aache se ishra ki cuteness dikhayi hai tu ne...👏
Police wale ishra ko lovers samjha rahe the... Raman was getting angry...
Police took them to police station... Raman called abhishek to and asked him to come to let them free
Abhi came and he identified ishra and drop them to hotel for their so called meeting...
Ishra went to hotel Lekin udhar koi meeting nhi thi...all were giving weird looks to them ...ishita was uncomfortable with surroundings...raman was holding her protectively...😳
Lekin to ishra bad luck hotel main raid giri and ishra got arrested...
Abhi bhi nhi aaya as police didn't let them call...
Ishra were police station whole night...
Morning abhi came and informed ishra mihir came to take them...
Raman was so angry...
Loved how ishita calm him down...she knows him well...😳
Precap is interesting... Mihir ke saath sabki band bajne wali hai😆
Do updt soon nishu waiting😳
Thnx for pm😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear Continuee soon as possible and thanks for the pm

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