New ishra SS- Le tera hua jiya # 2 pt 20 on pg 128 on 27/6

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#761

amazing update Di
shreya is so disgusting
she sent ishu to a cheap hotel where a raid was planned just to defame her
thankfully Raman saved ishu on time
good that Raman slapped shreya
but he is very angry with ishu
thanks to mihika that she called mihika and told him everything
do continue soon
and congrats for the colour change

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jaya1867

@jaya1867

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#762

Awesome update

Shreya 😡 disgusting

Poor ishu

Raman slapped shreya👏

Loved it

Raman is angry on ishu

Update soon

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Yumiko

@Yumiko

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#763

Awesome update dear😛 shreya is soo disgusting yaar😡 Thank God ishu is safe and nothing happened to her.. Waiting for ishra patch up😉 Plzz update asap... Thanks for the pm .

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#764

Errr...
How cheap is this shreya...
She pland soo low..
Its just bcz she hate ishita...
Thank god raman reached ishita on time..
& now she is safe with her love..
& good that raman gave a slap to shreya...
Update sooon di..

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Vijaya Priyadarshini

@ishra_bestluv

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#765

Raman is damn pissed off... glad he slapped that shreya..
wonder what he will tell ishita...
Plz update soon ... plz plz plz

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Mad4Divz

@Mad4Divz

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#766

Superb updt just loved it
Thanks4pm

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#767

Nice one

I like it

How raman saves her

Luvly

Update more soon

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#768

Great update
Ishu not feeling good
Shreya is very bad
Glad ishu did not go inside room
Raman saves ishu
He slap shreya
Update soon

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Trisha006

@Trisha006

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#769

This part was nice

but..

How Raman came to know of shreya's plan?

Hadn't mihika told her about the venue?

Then how did she reached the place selected by shreya? Or that hotel was also near mihika's house!?

Sorry but it doesn't make sense...

Moreover please improve the wording

I have read all your stories and I found then really good but the thing is that you have used the same words and situations in all your stories and these words don't make it exciting anymore (I hope you are understanding. I don't know whether critics are welcomed here or there is only space for appriciators)

It's very nice that you spend your precious time in writing stories for us...

I am very thankful to you for giving us opportunities to read your beautiful stories

(please take it in a positive way... No hate from this side as there is always room for betterment)

Thanks for reading this comment and please think about this... 😊

(and if you don't like it don't think once before telling me to delete this comment)